Sins of Our Fathers

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: House of Ghosts

In 2132 the world is on the brink of extinction. All resources on the planet, are on the verge of running out, and humanity is hanging on by a thread. In a last ditch effort the United Nations agrees to build a domed city, known as Serahn. This is humanities last chance at survival. A completely, self sustainable city in which representatives from every place on Earth are sent to attempt to live in peace and harmony. But someone wants to threaten that Utopia....someone doesn't believe the world deserves peace and starts to infect the citizens with a virus that makes them want to kill....NEED to kill.

Table of Contents

Welcome to Tomorrow

Mayor Damian In a large office, brightly lit by the morning sun, a pair of blue eyes st... Read Chapter

Not a SECOND Too Soon

  The Believer, Jonas   Beepings all around the main control room were going off as the computer finished a... Read Chapter

Cops and....Robots

  Officer Camran   “You may all now enter your new home!” Mayor Damian Pierce shouted, arms flung wide t... Read Chapter

Run Like the Wind

The Runner : Kaiyo   “Who’s Ronnie? And why are you here? Who are you? Help! Help!” The old woman standing in fro... Read Chapter

Sugar, Spice and Everything Not Nice

    Mayor Damian   With the start of the new day, the panels on the dome's skylight changed... Read Chapter

Linda? We have a Problem!

  The Believer, Jonas      Yesterday, Day after opening…   “Here you go Jonas, ... Read Chapter

An Unlikely Savior

Officer Camran   “I haven’t made any phone calls!” the young woman’s voice rose a full octave as it reached t... Read Chapter

I Don't Like White

    Runner Kaiyo     ‘Don’t forget the eggs!  You know I’ve been wanting to make ... Read Chapter

Have Fun Jonas

Believer Jonas     The team had been checking all systems for three hours and stabilizing the city’s systems... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

SuzanneE

Woah! This is like the perfect mix between The Dome and The 100. For some reason, I have a feeling that Damien is no good. He just sounds like one of those sleazy politicians who only looks out for himself. I'm really interested in how this is going to play out. I feel like strong adults are the last group you want to try and control under new rules and regulations. They've already developed a sense of societal norm from living and growing up outside the dome. I wonder how long it's going to take before someone rebels.... Another thing, having robots working security seems a little unnerving haha, I feel like they'll have an interesting role in the community. Great imagery btw! It was like a movie I was playing in my head. I forgot how much I love your writing! I'm off to read the next chapter! -Suz

Thu, June 23rd, 2016 11:33pm

AntiheroNightmare

Ahhhh I am so glad I came back to Booksie, I missed your stuff terribly, truly an ache in my heart but I feel that I've matured now and that I can understand the topics that you deal with better and look at things and people more objectively. BEFORE I would have said Mayor Pierce is an asshole. NOW I'd say the guy at the end saying about it all being a lie is right and that the mayor has been so deeply deluded and lied to etc. MY GOD I LOVE HOW YOUR WRITING SUCKS ME IN FROM THE FIRST WORD! I swear with very few other things am I able to envision this world inside of the words as I do with your stories, it's a completely ethereal experience. I'd hate to be a woman there, seems a bit sexist. 'Men, you were chosen for skill and strength. Women, you were chosen for BABIES!'. Makes sense but I wouldn't have said it to them xD They're basically trying to make human AI here under the claim of 'saving the human race' like for crying out loud you can't wear what you want or even get frisky in the bed when you want without the mayors permission. This is the kind of society we need to put the irritating hipster teenagers in and watch on the TV like The Truman Show and laugh at them all. ALSO there's another thing I have a problem with, AI. That's either gonna revolt against you or you are going to treat this sentient thing horribly. I am not at all complaining about the topics you've picked, it's the opposite really because these spark my interest the most and will probably coax out some mega bitch reaction out of me. Can't wait to see more of this society, when I read the description on your profile it sounded a bit communist but if anything it seems to be the flip of it, kind of like 'HA you are stuck forever at whatever rung of society you may be at with no chance to climb the social ladder!' Maybe I just adore that speech Petyr Baelish gave a bit too much. Anyway I'll read more tomorrow because I'm exhausted now but I couldn't go to sleep because this sounded like an awesome idea to me and I had it in my head that I was gonna start reading it today sooooo..... sleep comes second to Ghost. Your fangirl is back and the fact that you will either be happy with this or horrified entertains me greatly, I believe I have become a sadist.

Thu, July 28th, 2016 10:46pm

The_Red_Keep

I don't know if I would want to enter a city that is ran by an all-knowing AI & robotic cops. Plus some of the laws seem a bit too much. Great chapter though. I'll definitely be reading on.

Wed, August 10th, 2016 2:47pm

Islebabe

Wow, I knew an invite from you meant I was in for a literary treat. This was so vivid that I could picture myself in the crowd listening to his speech; not sure I would want to live there, feels a bit communistic. I'm not one to have much trust or faith in politicians so, I liked how you made him seems to be a nice guy with self-doubts as the rest of us. Then again, he seems too good to be true, I'm sure he's up to no good. This should be on bookstore shelves already. I hope you consider submitting your work to a publishing house. Amazing work as always.

Thu, August 11th, 2016 12:48pm

C. Herild Lakey

Like your style.

Wed, September 28th, 2016 5:27pm

Keke Serene

Oh wow, what a mysterious phone call. XD What is the lie, I wonder, all of it?
I felt this was very well written. I'm excited to see just what the city entails, it seems like technology will be top notch, though I wonder about Damien's character. He seems pretty vain, but several politicians are haha. We'll have to see, I guess. :)

Tue, October 4th, 2016 5:37pm

T. E. Jackson

Hmmm interesting. I was never one for stories set in the future but this seems really interesting. I'll have to def give it a read lol

Fri, March 31st, 2017 10:12am

Spyguy

I enjoy & applaud this start of a unique story idea! I hope this is demonstrative of future chapters!

Mon, May 22nd, 2017 4:05am

Spyguy

I notice that you don't respond to your comments; That seems counterintuitive to me...! Might I ask why?

Mon, May 22nd, 2017 4:10am

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There's so many incoming comments and I work full time I never have time to respond to them anymore :/

Mon, May 22nd, 2017 8:12am

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