RAAZ - Zara Yaad Kar (Hindi)

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Safed gulab par khoon kai ansuoon ka surekha rang hoga... aashiq hi aashiqui ka qatil hoga... Haveli mai chupa hua hai ek raaz.. usey zara yaad to kar.

Submitted: June 17, 2016

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"Raaz - Zara Yaad Kar"

PART 1


The moon's light was brighting the darkness of a big farmhouse closed by years... 
Inside the farmhouse a girl's shadow was running in the corridors and a laughter was echoing in the air... 
Suddenly the shadow it's seen hitting a vase which fell down and got broken...
Just then a guy opened the main door and stepped inside... the shadow disappeared immediately..
The wind get inside the farmhouse with the guy whose back is only showed... he was talking on the phone: Mom.. yeh lights kaha sai on hoti hai?!
From the other side: Kya Shravan beta... tumhe itna bhi nehi pata.. khair... tumare right par darvaaze kai sath... 
The guy's face is showed and he tried to switch on the lights but it wasn't working: Mom yaha koi bhi light on nehi ho rahi.. acha.. aap.. aap phone rakhiye.. mein kuch apne style mai karta hu..
Shravan cut the call and turned on the light of the torch of his mobile... as soon as he turned on it he looked down and saw a shadow.... he got shocked and scared and immediately moved up the phone but there was no one... and when he looked down again... there wasn't any shadow...
Shravan: K..kon hai?
The silence was reigning in the house..
Shravan slowly stepped inside and just then the main door got closed suddenly...
A scream is heard in the darkness of the night...
The next day...
An old aged couple, Kamal and Annapurna, and a young one, Suman and Ravi, came in the farmhourse... they saw the main door closed but not locked from outside..
Kamal: Dekha Annapurna.. Shravan yahi hai.. aap aise hi kall raat sai pareshaan ho rahi thi..
Annapurna: Par voh kall raat sai ghar kyu nehi aaya..
Ravi: Aapko to pata hai na Mom.. voh hamari family ka sabse bada lazy insaan hai... yahi aankh lag gai hoghi uski!... khair.. andar chaley andar...
Ravi opened the door and they stepped inside the farmhouse... Suman looked down and immediately backed off bumping with Ravi's chest shocked...
Ravi: Kya hua Suman?
Suman indicated the ground trembling: R..R... Ravi...
Everyone looked down and got shocked... the floor was full of blood..
Annapurna: K..khun?!
Kamal: Par.. yeh.. yaha kais.. 
Ravi looked up and got shocked to see Shravan's body pending on the ceiling... he shouted with tears in his eyes: Shravan!!!!!
Annapurna, Kamal and Suman looked up and got shocked...
Annapurna screamed with all her voice: Shravaaann!!!
Her voice echoed in the house...
In the evening...
The Aggarwal family were sitting in the farmhouse hall... all were wearing white clothes... and were sitting near Shravan's body with eyes filled of pain and tears...
Just then a guy's feet are showed stepping inside the house... 
As soon as he came inside...
A girl was looking out through a window of a room... only her smirk is showed.. she whishpered hissing: voh aa gaya... - her dark hair strands were moving out of the window through which she was looking out thanks to the wind...
The guy stood in the hall... 
Ravi saw him..: Karan?!..
Karan's face is showed...
Annapurna fastly stood up and went towards Karan hugging him crying loudly: Karan.. mera... mera Shravan..t.. tumhara bhai... hame.. hame chod kar chala gaya...
Karan moved Annapurna aside and slowly went towards Shravan's body sitting near him...
A tear rolls down from Karan's eyes... 
And it fell on the finger OF THE GIRL ON THE WINDOW who looked at it taking it closer to her face: Aise hi aansu us raat hamari aankhoon sai nikalte rahe.. par tumhe hampe ek pall bhi taras nehi aaya.. ham tadapte rahe aur tum... tum haste rahe.. ham rote rahe... aur tum muskurate rahe..
On the other side..
Suman placed a hand on Annapurna's shoulder: Badi Maa.. kuch kha li jiye..
Annapurna didn't say a word..
Suman looked at her husband Ravi...
Ravi: Maa.. apne subha sai kuch nehi khaya... kuch to kha li jiye...
Karan made Annapurna stand: chaliye Maa.. - he looked at Suman - Suman bhabhi... aap khana lai kr aaye...
Karan made Annapurna sit on a chair and started to feed her..
Later...
Suman came in her room and saw Ravi lying on the sofa with the hand under the head and looking at the ceiling...
Suman: kya soch rahe ho?
Ravi while still looking up: samajh nehi aa raha ki... ki mere bhai Shravan ki jaan kisne li.. yeh sab kaise hua... uska to koi dushman bhi nehi tha..
Suman sat on the bed in front of Ravi saying: aur police ne kya bola?
Ravi: no clue..
On the other hand also Karan was thinking about it...
Annapurna and  Kamal were sitting on the bed in their room..
Kamal: pata nehi is parivaar ko kiski nazar lag gai hai... do saal pehle hamne hamara bada beta Aakash aur uski biwi Siyali is haveli mai hi kho diye aur abh... abh hmara dusra beta  Shravan....
Annapurna: char bete the mere or ab... ab sirf do reh  gay hai, Karan or Ravi..... mein kall hi is ghar mai pooja karvana chahti hu... ek aur apna nehi kho sagti...
Kamal: aap thik keh rahi ho...
Everyone in their room were looking for an answer...
In the night...
Kran was about to fell asleep when he heard the noise of a payal coming more and more closer to his room... it wasn't letting him sleep...
A girl was walking in the corridor of his room... she was in bridal attire and her face was covered with her dupatta.. her jewellery was messed up and her dress was a bit torn on the sleeves...
While walking she said: Hamari gungru yeh gavahi de rahe hai Karan... ki abh ham tumhe chain ki neend nehi sone denghey..
Karan got up and in the darkness of the night he opened the door... and looked out of the room to see whose payals were making so much noise... but just when he was looking outside.. the same noise of payals came from inside of his room... he immediately turned.. no one was there... 
He slowly came back in the room.. and turned on the light... he looked around and when her eyes went on the ground... he saw a photo frame there... he bowed to hold it and when he looked at the photo in it... he got shocked seeing Siyali's picture.. his elder brother Akash's wife.. but now Siyali and Akash both weren't more..
As soon as Karan saw Siyal's pic an hard wind opened the windows and the light switched off by itself.. the darkness reigned again in the room... 
Karan tried to turn on the light but it wasn't working... 
Suddenly a female voice is heard whishpering: Ham aa gaye..
Karan immediately turned.. but again... no one was there..
Suddenly the same voice is heard laughing... 
Karan fastly turned on the light of the torch of his phone and brighted the darkness... he was looking around but just then he felt like someone placed a hand on his shoulder..
Karan immediately turned and suddenly the lights turned on..
Karan looked around.. no trace of anyone...
He wasn't able to understand what just happened with him... why he was feeling like someone returned back in his life?...
The next morning..
Karan was having breakfast in the dining room alone and was thinking about something... just then Ravi came there and sat next to him.. and noticed that Karan was lost in his world: Kya hua Karn?.. Tum pareshaan lag rahe ho..
Karan: Pata nehi Rav bhai.. jabse mein London sai vapis aaya hu.. tabse kuch ajeeb ajeeb khayaal aa rahe hai..
Ravi: I understand... London sai aate hi itna bada jhatka laga..
Karan: Vaise ham vapis Mumbai kab jaa rahe hai?
Suman (Ravi's wife) came there too..
Ravi: Nehi voh.. voh abh Badi Mom and Bade Papa chahte hai ki ham abh yaha.. is haveli mai hi rahe..
Karn was confused: Yaha?
Annapurna spoke from behind: Haan Karan...
Everyone turned towards her..
Annapurna: Tumare papa chahte hai ki abh ham yahi rahe.. aur aaj shaam ham sab yaha sai dur jo ek mandir hai.. us mai ghar ki shaanti ke liye pooja karne jaye ghe... pata nehi kiski nazar lag gai hai is parivaar ko.. pehle Akash aur Siyali.. aur abh.. abh Shravan.. 
Annapurna got teary eyes.. she wiped her tears: Tum sab shaam ko tayaar ho jaana.. mandir dur hai is liye kall subha hi ham vaha paunchey ghe... 
Saying this she started to go but...
Karan: I..I am sorry.. mein nehi aa pau ga..
Annapurna: par kyu Karan?
Karan: Maa... aapko to pata hai na ki mein... mein is pooja.. vooja mai vishwas nehi rakhta..
Annapurna: Par Karan  beta tum yaha akele kaise..
Karan: Maa please.. mujhe nehi jaana
Annapurna sighed: Thik hai... - and with this she went away..
In the evening..
Suman, Ravi, Kamal and  Annapurna went out for going to the mandir... and Karan remained alone in the big farmhouse...
He had dinner and sat to watch the tv... while he was watching it he heard a noise.. a confused Karan looked around.. he felt like the noise was coming from the kitchen so he went to check... 
He reached in the kitchen and saw water's drops falling down from the faucet... he closed it and returned to watch the tv but he got surprised seeing the tv switched off.. he tried to turn it on but no way... he sighed exasperated and waited for a while doing nothing..
Karan got bored so he decided to go to his room and sleep...
He was going upstairs when he heard something falling down from the stairs... he immediately turned and got shocked... 
A died Siyali was lying on the floor... she was looking exactly like she was 2 years ago.. when she died.. the scratches on her body and face.. her ripped sleeves... her messed jewellery and her messed hair... the wound on the forehead bleeding... everything was same.. 
Karan was shocked and his eyes got bigger... he was too scared and he fastly ran to his room... closing the door and putting a chair in front of it.. 
He was breathing heavinly and fastly.. trembling and sweating..
He backed off looking at the door... with trembling hands he held a glass on the nightstand and put the water in it from the jug.. 
Then he went towards the door and slowly opened it... when he peeked out he saw all the lights of the house turned off... 
He slowly came out of the room and went towards the stairs... 
Siyali wasn't there now..
Karan took a long breath: Shaid.. shaid mera hi beham tha..
He turned relaxed but... Siyali was standing in front of him... 
As soon as he saw him he backed off stunned but stepping back he slipped and was about to fall from the stairs but Siyali held his hand... Karan looked at her and then at their hands confused.. how was it possible....
A shocked Karan said: S...S...Siyali?
Siyali smirked... she was about to leave Karan's hand but he shouted: Nehi!
Siyali tighted the grip again: Aise hi ham us raat tumse rote hue zindaghi ki bikh mang rahe the... lekin tumne.. tumne hame jeene ka ek mauka bhi nehi diya..
Karan was shocked..
Siyali looked in Karan's eyes where confusion and shock was easily visible... he wasn't still able to understand what and how was all this happening..
Siyali pulled Karan up... he turned to look downstairs and then back at Siyali... but she was no more there...
Karan fastly went downstairs to go out of the house but as soon as he reached in front of the door it got closed by itself.. Karan tried to open it but it wasn't opening..
Karan was breathing heavily... 
Suddenly he heard again the noise of payals.. and slowly it was changing.. Karan was feeling like someone was coming closer to him from behind.. Karan again tried to open the door.. but just then someone placed a hand on his shoulder.. he stopped there.. and recalled the episode of last night when he felt the same emotion.. he slowly turned and got shocked... Siyali was standing there and tears of blood were flewing down from her eyes..
Karan was trembling... he slowly raised a hand towards Siyali's face... he was lost in her eyes full of pain and hatred.. as soon as his fingers touched Siyali's cheek he felt a current and immediately backed the hand returning in the reality..
He looked at Siyali: Tu.. tu.. tum nehi.. nehi.. aisa. .. aisa nehi ho sakta.. aisa..
But just then Siyali runned her finger from his forehead to his neck... he closed his eyes gulping down the fear... 
Siyali hissed: Par aisa ho gaya hai..
Karan opened his eyes and started to run to go away but as soon as he overstepped Siyali he found her again in front of him.. 
Karan turned to run on the other side but Siyali again was in front of him..
Karan turned and started to run upstairs and while running he reached in front of a mirror hung on the wall.. he stopped as he noticed something strange on his face.. he saw scratches on his cheek where Siyali touched him.. he was schoked..
Just then he saw in the mirror Siyali appearing behind him ... he turned around but she wasn't there.. Karan looked again in the mirror... Siyali was still behind him..
Karan was looking stunned in the mirror... Siyali's eyes were a cobweb for her.. they were able to catch his gaze and stop his eyes to look anywhere else..
Siyali: Aina... nafrat hai hame is aine sai... kyu ki isi kai zariye hamari tumse mulaqat hui thi!!
Saying this Siyali's wet eyes turned red for rage of hatred.. and the mirror got broken in thousend pieces...
Karan closed tightly his eyes remaining steady on his position while tears rolls down on his cheeks.. he recalled the moment when he met Siyali...
Flashback:
In a bazar... Siyali was smiling and was looking some earings from the stall with Suman...
She wore an earing and looked at herself in the little mirrior near her: Suman.. hampe yeh jhumka kaise lag raha hai?
A male voice spoke from behind: Behat khoobsurat..
Siyali was confused.. just then she saw in the mirror two deep brown eyes coming closer from behind... and then a guy stood up behind her... he was smiling... he and Siyali shared an eyelock through the mirror..
Just the Suman said: Karan? 
Siyali and Karan returned in reality and they turned at Suman..
Karan: Suman tum?
Siyali was confused..
Suman smiled: Tum yaha kaise?
Karan: Voh.. mein aur Ravi bhai yaha sai kuch kharidne aae the.. lagta hai tum bhi apni shaadi ki shopping khub dum daam sai kar rahi ho..
Suman smiled: Of course.. acha is sai milo.. yeh meri choti behan Siyali.. aur Siyali... yeh tumare hone wale Jija ji Ravi ka bhai... Karan..
Siyali and Karan looked at each other... Karan smiling forwarded a hand towards Siyali: hi.. nice to meet you...
Siyali looked at Karan's hand and a bitter smile appeared on her face.. she shook his hand and slowly said: hi...
They kept looking at each other.. maybe with their hands also their hearts got joined..
Just then Ravi came there: Suman... 
Suman turned towards Ravi while Karan and Siyali were still holding each other's hands... lost in each other's eyes..
Suman and Ravi talked for a bit and when they turned towards Siyali and Karn they got surprised seeing them still like that..
Ravi waved a hand between the two: Hello guys!
Siyali immediately took back her hand and looked down.
Ravi: Hi sali sahiba! kaisi ho?
Siyali: H.. ham thik hai..
Just then Karan's phone ranf and he received the call.. after cutting it he said: Ravi bhai... Maa hamara wait kar rahi hai.. voh tumne unhe kaha tha na ki tum unhe mandir lai kar jaao ghe parshaad chadane..
Suman: Kya baat hai.. mandir vagera haan?
Ravi : Abh ham dono mandir mai bethe  Bhagwan ki hi vajah sai ek hue hai na?.. to phir unke liye bhi kuch karna to padega..
Karan was standing beside Siyali and he slowly whishpered in her ear: Phir to aaj mujhe bhi jaana padega..
Siyali blushed smiling and looking down..
Ravi: Khair.. abh ham chalte hai.. kall sagaai mai miltey hai..
Suman smiled: Bye!
Siyali and Karan  looked at each other.. 
Karan went with Ravi looking at Siyali while she stared at him from behind.. 
Going a little ahed Karan turned looking at Siyali and placed the hand with which he touched Siyali's hand on his chest and started stepping back looking at Siyali and smiling..
Siyali blushed hardly and turned.. she smiled..
~ Aapki is dil lagi me hum apna dil kho baithe,
Kal tak us khuda ke the aaj apke ho baithe,
Pyar suna to tha diwana kar deta hai
Aaj khud karke hum bhi hosh kho baithe.~~ ( shayari is not written by me) 
Flashback ends... Present:
With the breaking of the mirror Siyali disappeared but Karan heard her voice: Kitne pagal the ham...
Karan turned and saw Siyali looking at the photo of Suman and Ravi engagement on the wall...
Siyali: Tumhe bina jaane hi tumhe dil dai bethe the..
Karan looked at her hands and got shocked seeing an heart-shaped mirror piece in her hands... she clenched her fist crumbling the glass.. her hand started bleeding a lot..
Karan backed off seeing her action but he slipped with a carpet and because of this she fell on the ground... 
He started to back off sitting...
Siyali was still looking at the picture: Yaad hai hame yeh din.. marne sai pehle ham is din ko apni zindaghi ka sabse haseen din samjha tha.. lekin yeh.. asal mai yeh din aisa tha jese chaand pai kala nishaan...
Flashback:
It was the day of Suman and Ravi's engagement..
In Ravi's house the preparations were going on.. 
Karan was walking here and there in front of the door... 
Annapurna saw him and said: Yeh kya aaghey pichey... aaghey pichey ghumi jaa rahe ho Karan?.. itne kaam padey hai aur tum ho ki yaha khade vaqt barbaad kar rahe.. ladki vale aate hi hoghe..
Karan looked at the door and slowly said: Unhi ka hi to intazaar kar raha hu..
Annapurna: Kya?
Karan: K..kuch nehi Maa..
Annapurna: Acha yeh kapde pakdo or..or upar Ravi ko de kar aao...voh abhi tak tayar nahi hua
Karan: par maaa..
Anupurna: Karan!
Karan: Uff!! Thik hai!
Karan went upstairs to give the clothes to Ravi..
And just then Siyali, Suman came there with parents.
Annapurna saw them and went to welcome them: Arey aap log aa gaye...
Suman touched Annapurna's feet taking her blessings..
Annapurna blessed her: Jeeti raho... aaye aap log vaha kyu khade ho.. aaye aaye..
they sat on the sofa..
Suman slowly whishpered to Siyali: Siyali jaldi jaa na.. nehi to mera Ravi nichey aa jaye ga!
Siyali: Thik hai Suman! Thodi deeraj rakho! - the she louded her voice - Vaise hamare hone wale Jija Ji nehi dikhai de rahe?!
Annapurna: Haan.. voh tayaar ho raha hai.. aata hi hoga..
Siyali: Hame zara unsey kaam hai ham unse abhi mil kai aaye.. room kaha hai unka?
Annapurna: Upar jaate hi right pai..
Siyali looked at Suman shaking her head and then smiled to Annapurna: Thanks!
Siyali: tum bhi na Suman...
With this she went upstairs..
In Ravi's room..
Siyali gave a dhaaga to Ravi: Yeh Suman ki taraf sai..
Ravi: yeh kya hai?
Siyali: Yeh dhaaga aapke aur Suman kai rishtey ko buri nazar sai bachayega... aur Suman chahti hai ki aap sabke saamne aane sai pehle pehan le..
On the other side..
Karan came in his room and looked at himself in the mirror fixing his hair.. just then he heard water's drops noise and went in the bathroom to check..
Meanwhile Siyali was getting out of Ravi's room but just then he felt like the dori of her anarkali got untied... she fastly get inside the first room she saw and locked the door..
She rushed in front of the mirror and tried to tie her dori.. but she wasn't able to reach her back with her hands..
When...
Someone held the dori... Siyali looked on and saw Karan  beside her.. their eyes met again through the mirror... they looked at each other silently..
Karan pulled the dori to tie it and with this Sayali's back merged with his chest... Siyali closed her eyes.. Karan pulled her more closer.. she was able to feel his breath on her neck..
~Mujhe Kisi Se Mohabbat Nahi Siwa Tere,
Mujhe Kisi Ki Zarurat Nahi Siwa Tere !
Meri Nazar Ko Thi Talash Jis ki … Barson Se,
Kisi Ke Paas Wo Surat Nahi Siwa Tere !
Jo Mere Dil Aur Meri Zindagi Se Khel Sake,
Kisi Ko Itni Ijazat Nahi Siwa Tere !~ (shayari is not written by me) 
Karan tied the dori... Siyali opened her eyes and removed them from the mirror running towards the door... she opened it but before going out she once turned to look at Karan.. and then ran away...
Siyali was running fastly in the corridor when she suddenly bumped with someone and was about to fall but he held her by her waist and she surroanded her neck with her hands..
Flashback ends.. Present:
The crumbs of the mirror disappeared from Siyal's hands which was still full of blood..
She walked lifeless and reached in front of a photo on the wall... it had a garland of yellow flowers... tears of blood fell on her cheek... 
It was the photo of Akash...
Siyali put a hand on his smiling face and the blood on her hand remained on Akash'd photo,
Siyali: Hamara pati.. voh jisne hamse saccha pyaar kiya lekin ham.. ham unhe izzat to de paaye lekin dil nehi.. - she shouted - kyu ki voh tumare paas reh gaya tha!
Karan stood up slowly but when he moved his hand he realized he was holding the same heart shaped piece of mirror.. but this time.. it was already full of blood without breaking it... 
Karan looked at Siyali's hand.. it wasn' bleeding.. it meant.. it was Siyal's blood..
Karan looked again at his hand but now the glass wasn't there..
Karan was sweeting... he wasn't able to understand anything..
He just started to run in every room of the farmhouse but he wasn't able to open any window or door... 
But when he reached in Akash's room its door got opened.. Karan fastly got inside and got shocked... on the mirror in front of it there was written "Akash" with blood..
Karan heard Siyali's voice talking gritting her teeth: Phirse aina...
Karan turned: Siyali was standing in front of him..
Siyali angrily held the vase near her and with a lot of strenght she threw it ahed.. Karan thought she was about to throw it on him but the vase hit the mirror breaking it with a lot of noise..
Karan looked at the broken piece and then.. at the broken Siyali... 
Siyali: Aise kya dekh rahe ho... - she shouted - HAM US HAR AINE KO TODE GHE JIS MAI HAME TUM DIKHAI DO GHE!! 
With this she turned and her eyes went on a big photo frame of Akash on the wall.. her eyes stopped there.. she runned her fingers on his face and then shouted stopping her hand on the photo: AKASHHHHHHH!!!
Her scream echoed in the house... 
Siyali turned to look at Karan: her eyes were red for rage and she was looking at him gritting her teeth and clenching her fists..

note: Kaise aashiqui ne hi bana diya tha aashiq ko qatil? Kya hai Siyali ki nafrat ka raaz? Kya hoga jab badle ki aag mai ek tooti hui Siyali likhey ghi Karan ki taqdir?... read part 2 to know the truth ;)

 


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