The disobedient boy- Hamzat PART 1

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This is a short story about disobedience and over-confidence. many young people thinks that the world revolves round them.so, they tend to be disobedient. hamzat, a young strong and healthy boy in his early teens took his energy for granted and became disobedient. but, fate finally caught up with him. when he finally realized his mistakes but it was too late to turn back.
find out the price of disobedience in this suspense filled short story.
hamzat too strong, too weak.

Submitted: July 04, 2016

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Submitted: July 01, 2016

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"Stop! Wait! Don't chase it! You will fall into an invisible pit in jada forest!"

Mary was warning her brother- Hamzat who was chasing a dog furiously. Hamzat was livid because the dog had bitten his little sister- Mary.

They were playing together under a shade of a coconut tree in the garden when the strange dog came from nowhere. Mary was scared and confused. She didn't know what to do at that moment, so, she began to run helter-skelter as far has her little legs can take her(Hamzat running behind). The dog ran after her. It overtook her and bit off her right heel. Hamzat emerged. Seeing his lovely little sister groaning on the floor while the dog was lapping her blood that was gushing out from the wounded area, he became livid. He went into the house, brought a sharp cutlass and began chasing the dog.

The dog was as swift as a cheetah and as strong as a lion. It ran through the path that led to the JADA FOREST.


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