To whom it may concern

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
A story about a group of friends that have to struggle for survival after finding themselves stranded in time.

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To whom it may concern.

Submitted: July 05, 2016


Hey guys! I have completely rewritten the prologue and would love to hear what you think about it. Any feedback or commentary is welcome.


Also; if you happen to stop reading after the prologue then I would love to know why. My first page has gotten tons of hits but the pages after that one; not so much. I really want to know why so I
can alter or change whatever is stopping people from reading further.


Thanks in advance!
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Twilight.

Submitted: July 05, 2016

    Chapter 1 - Twilight. Summer vacation: another morning of waking up without an alarm clock. It should have be... Read Chapter

A forest adrift.

Submitted: July 05, 2016

    Chapter 2 - A forest adrift. The walk back to the van took surprisingly longer than I expected, longer tha... Read Chapter

Sanguine.

Submitted: July 05, 2016

Chapter 3 - Sanguine. Night has fallen. The campfire we made is keeping us warm yet all six of us are completely stunned; nobody... Read Chapter

A place out of time.

Submitted: July 24, 2016

Chapter 4 - A place out of time. Ever had one of those nights where you close your eyes and one second later you open them and r... Read Chapter

En route

Submitted: August 22, 2016

Chapter 5 - En route. Following the road seems to be taking us further away from our newly found civilization and back into the ... Read Chapter

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