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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic
Sorry guys if it's not up to your standards :/ ,this was my first ever attempt at poetry and I would love to get any criticism in order to improve my weak spots.

Churs cuzzes ;)
Your faithful friend, Orange

Submitted: July 05, 2016

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Submitted: July 05, 2016



The idea that hope can change

who we are.

Is like a blind man that can see.

There is still a possibility that

it can happen.

But yet we believe it cannot

That is why we believe it is impossible,

because we believe it to be so.

The way that we control our minds

Is so simple, that we believe it to be complicated.

But parrelism never worked well.

A fire is not created with water,

Poison wasn't made from happiness.

And if we believe that we can hope.

Then we can. 

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