A game of Gods

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

What if there was more to our universe than meets the eye?

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chapter 1


Still a work in progress, but wanted to show you guys a little about the concept of this book. Leave a comment with feedback or whatever you want to say about what I got so far. I dont know if this
is worth finishing so let me know what you think.
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Recent Comments

EternallyHope

This is a really great start! I can imagine so many different paths you could take from there and all of them could end up pretty awesome. I also liked that you picked something that not a lot of people tend to choose. It's special and unique.

Thu, July 14th, 2016 5:08pm

Author
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Haha yeah its the same for me, so many paths I can take. I have a couple already in my mind but not sure which one to take. I posted the first page to see if it is worth finishing but I get a lot of great feedback!
Thanks for your kind words.

~P.D. North

Thu, July 14th, 2016 10:12am

BronyAuthority

Not a bad start. Seems like a role-playing game come to life.

Fri, July 15th, 2016 3:53pm

Author
Reply

Haha yeah had that intent with this story, that it could be a videogame of some sorts.

Fri, July 15th, 2016 8:57am

Kingsparky99

The hook in this one is really good. You have a knack for catching the readers attention with your first person point of view. I really hope to continue reading this story.

Sun, July 17th, 2016 3:30am

LLN

I really like how you put real events in the story. I would like to see how you will put human culture into the story, for instance, will this 'God' acknowledge the fact that there are many humans who believe in God? Or will this 'God' have no idea that the humans have this culture?
I like this already because its compelling and i'm already hooked.
I'm certainly gonna wait for the chapters that will come.

Mon, July 18th, 2016 2:03pm

Menk

I saw the message you send me and, even though I'm not open to reading requests, decided to give your work a look. I must say I'm intrigued by the concept of this story. The idea of gods playing games with the universe itself interests me. Currently I have no idea how you plan to resume this story though. I assume you plan on beginning the "game", but I fail to see what perspective you will use. I do feel you tried to convey too much information at once though. This could be because you plan to switch to a human perspective hereafter, but it would be nice if you spread to information you present out more evenly, rather than using this monologue. (eg. through conversations between gods/players/beings.) I look forward to what follows.

Mon, August 29th, 2016 11:25pm

Kelsie Conlon

Well written and well described, I like how you give a background to the rules of "the game." :)

Tue, August 30th, 2016 12:16am

Love22

Never read something from the point of view of a God. I like this. Keep up the good work.
-Love22

Sat, September 3rd, 2016 3:55am

Phantomhyne

well you are very imaginative and creative ill give you that. I really enjoyed it keep up the good work

Tue, October 25th, 2016 2:57pm

Skinny Coutreux

Interesting what you have here. Reminds me of Egyptian, Hindu, and Greek/roman gods (multiple gods with a hand in the pot). I like where it was mentioned only twelve allowed at a time. Makes me think of the ancient alien theory where civilizations speak of beings from above. Curious to see what happens next, and what god we are dealing with.

Mon, January 16th, 2017 3:48pm

Regular GUy

A very interesting story. I'm a huge of sci-fi and your concept is very original.
I'm looking forward to how this cool story goes.

Sun, January 7th, 2018 12:13pm

simon arthur

Great concept. Scary thought though, but I think book is worth writing

Mon, November 25th, 2019 7:55am

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