The Man

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Danny The Comic House
The story is a about a kid that is home alone.written by Dylan Gaskins.

Submitted: August 04, 2016

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Submitted: August 04, 2016



The Man


One night, when my parents where going on their date.

I was home alone,well my younger sister is sleeping in her room and my older sister is here also ,but she would always go upstairs and go on face book and talk to her so called friends.

What happend on that night still confuses me and reminds me how stupid I was back then.

The night begins with me laying on the couch; I was watching a movie called Toy Story.

When Toy Story ended came a knock at the door. I got up from the couch and walked towards my window and saw a kinda short man in a black jacket. I didn't know what to do, so I just stood still and didn't say anything.

After a while the man turned towards to me and said "Is the fridge for sale?" "No" I replied.

Then the man realize he was talking to a kid. "Are your parents around kid?" Now my reply was so stupid that I can't believe I said it. "No, they are somewhere eating" I replied.

After I said that the man had a very creepy smile on his face and said "Can I come in kid?" "No" I said,I knew at that momment I made a very big mistake. The man got closer to the window. "Kid, trust me I won't hurt you." the man said while putting his face on the window.

At that moment my dog came out of my sister's room and I saw the man creepy smile disappear off his face.My dog ran towards the window and barked crazy to the man.

The man ran away from the window and jumped into his car and drove off into the darkness. If it wasn't for my dog I would probaby gotten kidnapped or killed. I never saw the man again, but a day later my dad's car was broken into.

My dad was so angry when he saw his wallet in his car, but when he looked in his wallet he found all his cards except for his cash.

I don't know why somebody would only take the cash and not take the credit cards. I will never know and hopfully that will be the end of the crazy stuff like that.


Hopfully you enjoy reading this story.

Written by Dylan Gaskins 


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