Tribute To Every Mother
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Poem by: PandiRamPrasad
When i was waiting out of this universe, she dragged me into this universe.
When i was trying to come out of her womb, she seamed like leaving this galaxy.
When i came out of her womb, she came back into this world.
When i opened my eyes for the first time, she showed the whole world in her face.
When i started to cry, she made me to tune.
When i started to tune, she made me to sing.
When i started to sing, she made me to talk.
When i started to talk, she made me to walk.
When i started to walk, she made me to run.
When i started to run, she made me a goal.
When i started to achieve my goal, she helped me to reach my goal.
When i reached my goal, she too reached her goal.
This is what a mother trys to achieve.
A successful person's success lies in his/her mother.
Share your success with your mother equally with your husband/wife and children.
Because your wife/husband and children ask to share your success with them.
But a mother will never ask to share your success with her because it is her success which you shared from
her.
As we all feel like it is our own success, for that sake share it with your mother a
bit.
She even feels much happier than what she apparently succeeded.
This is a tribute to each and every mother.
© Copyright 2017 PandiRamPrasad. All rights reserved.
Comments
Wonderful Poem
This poem was excellently written and to some one who wants to be a mom I think that it was well spoken and very precise. Everything I could want out of a poem for a mother who especially loves their children no matter what. I give you high praises for this poem because of the beginning of the content to the end was brilliant
I would suggest however more information about the mother being in the poem and I think overall that is all the feed back that I can give you seeing as I am still revising my own poems.
Wonderfully done and very interesting
That really means a lot on my first experimentation on poetry. It is my first poem i have written yesterday. As a story writer i did not get such appreciation from anyone. Thank you so much for commenting on my very first poem. As per your suggestion i would definitely try to write as many as possible poems on mother. And try to reach up to your expectations.
Today i have posted a new poem "Mother or God" which is the greatest word?
I wish you would read and give your feedback on it. It means a lot to me.
I like this poem.
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