Deja Vu

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
Ladies and Gents, this is my first time writing a story. That said, I'm just focusing on getting it done. I MAY do a rewrite once I actually finish the story and that's when I'll really polish this rock. Till then I'd love some feedback on... well, anything. My use of tense, exposition, dialog. What ever.

Please and Thanks. Don't pull any punches.

Table of Contents

Prologue

Submitted: August 13, 2016

Midnight. The moon rose over them as they gazed over the city below. The faint lights sparkled like a second sky blurring the line betwee... Read Chapter

Chapter 1

Submitted: August 13, 2016

Rachel Baker was a small girl; not much more than 5' tall, but what she lacked in height she made up for in enthusiasm. She always c... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

Submitted: August 13, 2016

Dennis stepped out of the shower and leaned over his sink to get a look at his jaw. "Still good," he said stroking his 3-day beard. ... Read Chapter

Chapter 3

Submitted: August 13, 2016

"It wasn't an inside job, Harrow." Rachel said as she sipped her mug from behind Harrows counter. She'd spent the night again, the third ... Read Chapter

Chapter 4

Submitted: August 13, 2016

"Morning, Baker." Dennis yawned at his desk as Rachel sat down. "Morning. You're uncharacteristically early." she commented as she got ... Read Chapter

Chapter 5

Submitted: August 13, 2016

It was late. Or early. Dennis didn't know what time exactly, but the sun set hours ago; that much was sure.  He pulled up to the sce... Read Chapter

Chapter 6

Submitted: August 13, 2016

"Hey."  Dennis stood before Meryl's grave as he did every year. "I brought your favorite." He lifted a bottle of cheap brandy, t... Read Chapter

Chapter 7

Submitted: August 15, 2016

"Asleep already, Baker?" Dennis laughed as he set his things down at his desk. "Fuck you." she groaned, keeping her face buried in her ... Read Chapter

Chapter 8

Submitted: August 16, 2016

"Morning Baker." he said absently, not taking notice to how Rachel had her face buried in her desk. "You're with me today. I've got an in... Read Chapter

Chapter 9

Submitted: August 18, 2016

"What time is it?" Rachel yawned as she stepped into Dennis' living room. "Half past 3." he replied, shuffling through photos. He'd bee... Read Chapter

Chapter 10

Submitted: August 20, 2016

"I'm sorry, but after investigating every lead I have to conclude that your daughter's death was a suicide." he spoke as gently as he cou... Read Chapter

Chapter 11

Submitted: August 22, 2016

"I got your file," Rachel tossed a folder onto Dennis' desk. He nodded his thanks before flipping open the file and taking a sip of his c... Read Chapter

Chapter 12

Submitted: August 25, 2016

Sorry for the Delay! Birthday prep and what not. Happy Birthday to me. Read Chapter

Chapter 13

Submitted: August 28, 2016

Dennis looked across his living room. The place was a dump littered with assorted trash and laundry. It reminded him bitterly of his coll... Read Chapter

Chapter 14

Submitted: August 31, 2016

Had a bit of trouble with this chapter. Middle Aged Lesbian Flirting isn't something I can say I'm familiar with. Read Chapter

Chapter 15

Submitted: September 03, 2016

Not counting my prologue this is my shortest chapter yet. I could pad it more with more monologue or exposition, but I honestly just kinda want to wrap things up. Read Chapter

Chapter 16

Submitted: September 05, 2016

Stay tuned for the Epilogue Read Chapter

Epilogue

Submitted: September 06, 2016

GG guys. It was fun. Time to move on Read Chapter


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