cherish her

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Don't take her for granted. Love her u can

A woman's pain is endless, it seems.

So many abuse the hearts of women which ruins them, and destroys their everything.

Abusing a woman's mind body and soul roughens her outer layer and puts bigger gates around her heart making it almost impossible to get in and love her correctly.

The way god created a man to love and cherish his woman, her heart and their children.

A woman's trust is so precious,so many take It for granted.

Love a woman right and she'll be as soft as cotton to you, she'll be sweeter than any candy u could find at any candy store.

She'll love, honor, value and respect you, in ways that make u feel like the king of the whole world.

Treat her as if she's worth more than anything in this world.

Like she's your light, your good on bad days, your understanding when you're faced with complete confusion.

Make her feel like she's the only, make her feel beautiful, respect her.

Great things will come to u, from your woman if u do.

Be good to your woman and her heart, she'll forever love and protect yours.


Submitted: August 15, 2016

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Oke

I couldn't read it. I don't know if it was the format or just my phone but I couldn't see it.

Mon, August 15th, 2016 11:45pm

Tebbie

So beautiful an touching. Fresh eyes on a emotional rollercoaster us women endure for what seems a lifetime. Just think how many times a woman sat down to explain to a man if you treat me with respect I can give you respect. Well put an very deep.

Thu, August 18th, 2016 1:37am

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Thanks ????

Wed, August 17th, 2016 6:54pm

Spyguy

This is a gospel truth! You have expressed in a short, valuable poem, what hundreds of pages, books, encyclopedias, & works of art have all missed! You have crystallized pure truth in golden form in a way which can be understood! Thank you for this! I would love to have you come read a few of my own attempts to state this same message... Probably not as eloquently stated, as yours here, I've dedicated much of my work to the same ends!

Fri, January 20th, 2017 10:03am

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Thank you

Fri, January 20th, 2017 2:05am

Marcus Emel

Nice!

Thu, February 2nd, 2017 3:56pm

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Thank you

Thu, February 2nd, 2017 8:34am

Amy F. Turner

This should be given to every little boy about to become a man. Fathers should sit down and talk to their sons when they reach this age read them this message so that they can discern wisdom. So well said, D, is all I can say. Thank you so much for sharing this. :)

Sat, February 4th, 2017 10:04pm

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You're welcome and thank you for reading it :)

Sat, February 4th, 2017 3:05pm

Rehmat Tanzila

Exactly Dorian.. ^_^ loved it

Sun, June 4th, 2017 4:03pm

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thank you

Sun, June 4th, 2017 10:01am

Thalia Bronwen

I really like this poem! The word choice and the truths that lie within this poem are very important.

Tue, June 20th, 2017 4:40pm

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Thank you

Tue, June 20th, 2017 11:26am

Thalia Bronwen

I really like this poem! The word choice and the truths that lie within this poem are very important.

Tue, June 20th, 2017 4:40pm

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Thank you

Tue, June 20th, 2017 11:27am

Christian Taylor

Beautifully done! Love it!

Wed, August 30th, 2017 2:29am

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Thank you I truly appreciate your read and comment

Tue, August 29th, 2017 8:15pm

Craig Davison

Reminds a bit of the Nina Simone song, Cherish, which I love. The poem is quite biblical in a way. Good work.

Tue, March 31st, 2020 1:05am

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Thank you so much

Mon, March 30th, 2020 6:47pm

bloodman

I liked it. Good work.

Sun, May 17th, 2020 5:25pm

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Thank w

Sun, May 17th, 2020 10:26am

Poetshri

A valuable guide to men how to treat a woman. Actually, you've made it easier for men to understand a woman a little bit. Hope, women will live with dignity and will be considered a real part of a family in future. Thank you for sharing. Sorry, I'm not that good in English.

Fri, September 24th, 2021 4:06pm

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Thank you. It’s okay, glad you liked it.

Fri, September 24th, 2021 9:20am

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