Opening scene to a thriller

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
Please see this very small script that is very detailed and is has a fascinating twist, this is a very good opening I hope you enjoy.

Submitted: August 15, 2016

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I'm dreaming she said whilst lying in bed, eyes closed red nosed with her head on the pillow, breathing in air like wind in the willow, a man she cries over there he lies, no one to save him no one around just his body lying on the ground how did he get there? I whisper to her ear back off I feel that he will hear just as I move the door goes boom, there's no exit out of this room wait that's me that's me why can't she hear me can't hear a sound that's me I see lying on the ground hair completed with perfection, as I look through her eyes I see my reflection.


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