The Order: Black Legion
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Book by: Jake Sawyer
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Submitted: December 04, 2016
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Recent Comments
Exelant story Jake I'm on the journey with these men I got helplessly drawn in and read the first chapter you are an excellent writer. I will read chapter two when I have finished digesting chapter one. And hey what does it matter if it is a he or an it? Thank you, happy writing.
FISH MAN
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Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it. I tried to edit the chapters so that they were shorter, so hopefully each chapter will keep your attention! I hope you keep enjoying the story. Keep letting me know what you think.
Before I rate the actual story I would like to note that your paragraphs are humungous. Due to such a simple technicality it immediately becomes an unpleasant read.
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That's something I've been trying to tweak as time goes on. I agree that sometimes some of them get a little too large to digest. I'll be sure to be mindful of that in the future.
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