Smukae Okay

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
Smukae is a normal girl, with a dad suffering from an identity disorder due to a tragic loss, and a not so normal name. She has a little sister that feeds off of sympathy, and one friend that speaks to the sleeping in her dreams. But who is Akoti? Well her land of the unfortunate Guide will have to help her figure that out, as her 5 year old sister is falsely accused of a lowly crime.

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Same Beginning

Submitted: September 30, 2016

The sweet sound of the great blue, gently brushing up against my left ear. I guess you could possibly say the morning had a pleasent... Read Chapter

You're here, I'm there.

Submitted: October 04, 2016

I had been walking around my local school, steps gently brushing off the ground. I was about to make slight progress in locating my class... Read Chapter

Miss know it all never knew it all

Submitted: October 04, 2016

Carrie held my two hands in hers, running her fingers through mine. She was carrying what had at least seemed to appear as a smile, even ... Read Chapter

Speak my language, pretty please

Submitted: October 04, 2016

"My name? Wow, looks like Carries gone cray! Hah! This is indeed a hallway, my friend, not a nurses office!" I said, half sweating. ... Read Chapter

Truama's scar

Submitted: October 05, 2016

School was over, just like that. I guess you couldve said i was a little shook, but i guess it was okay. I really couldnt understand my w... Read Chapter

I don't want you here!

Submitted: October 05, 2016

It was dark all around the night sky; the only light avaliable came from the bright stars. The clock read exactly 10:32pm. I was a little... Read Chapter

Land of the unfortunate

Submitted: October 13, 2016

Everything was dark, pitch black.  I struggled to open my eyes, they felt almost as if super glue had been stuck to them. After a fe... Read Chapter

Rusty bowls

Submitted: October 21, 2016

The next few days were harsh, i still didnt understand anything about Guide or the elevator. I wasnt socialable in any way. I dont k... Read Chapter


Submitted: October 24, 2016

There are still gonna be new characters getting introduced throughout the story so, yeah. So far the only new characters I plan to introduce are Madelyn and Akoti ,, I'm also planning on using Guide as a boost for Akoti's character development haha whoops Read Chapter

Water party

Submitted: October 25, 2016

Hey, it would be great if you could tell me your favorite character in this story so far in the comments,,!
Mine is probably Madelyn, shes little and doesnt think she knows everything. She knows more then she lets on, and she wants to be put in bad situations in order to change that into good situations from attention and sympathy. Shes also got that cute vibe with adding mr to everything, inspired by what my mom would do while talking to my baby brother. She tries her best to appear as an evil murderer kind of person in order to fear, which gains sympathy. Even though shes to afraid to do any of that kind of stuff,, shes kinda a sane insane youngling which is pretty cool Read Chapter

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