fallinkingdom

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Submitted: September 29, 2016

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Some were in this world lies a place where all people live equally with a system called the E.L.F system (the equal life system). This system was created by none other than the greatest scientist this world has ever seen: D. Earl j. he is most known for creating this system but he has created much more than that.  Are whole life is surrounded by his creations and ideas. for example he founded an institution were the most brilliant student’s are scouted every year, the most brilliant and smartest of all of mankind “what’s left of it” gather in this institution to make our world a better place but its no easy to task to get scouted by this institution. But first let me tell you a little about this worlds history. In the year of 3001 the world has deteriorated this was caused by all the corruption and wars going on in the world and not to mention the world no longer had the capacity to hold any more people. Homes have become 60 floor housing units inter connected to each other making it look so clustered to the point where there was barely enough space to even walk along each building. The governments were forced to prevent people from having more children only the most rich and high ranked personal had the right to have one child per family. But there have been many cases where people had children but mysteriously when the mother is about to give birth the child and mother go messing without a trace left of them. It became so clustered that food was scarce and along with that, crimes have become a normal thing and killing people was OK as long as it meant that you have food on your table. until the government of each major country made a certain arrangement to kill more than half of the population of the world. And so began the worst days of mankind’s history. Military personal’s shooting people without remorse and without a shred of guilt. Raping women, children, and men no one was left unharmed families broken children killing their parents for food or money.  The government’s lost control of there men, soldiers gone wild!.

 


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