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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Submitted: October 03, 2016

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At first site of her... I was instantly blown away; So breathtaking to say the very least, Feel like there was a piece of me that faded away; or was that my heart skipping a beat after racing so fast, everything about her was like a vision of perfection; her beauty so accomplished consuming my thoughts, As she got closer everything became clearer; She is what a dream woman is made of, her scent so decent yet powerful enough to grab hold of me; one look in her eyes... I became weak and helpless, Her smile so alluring had me lost for words; as she lite up the room with her loveliness, With a simple hello... I lost control; saying what I thought without holding back, You are by far the one of God's best creations; showing off his talents when it came to you, From head to toe... every inch of your frame; I fully appreciate what it is I see, If I could spend every night falling asleep next to you; waking up each day to the view of you would start my day correctly, I know it's just the shell of the woman within; That if I got the chance to know... I would cherish each moment, As she chuckled and blushed... I can tell she was embarrassed; I felt like a fool... of silly of me, Before I could apologize for coming off strong; she asked if we could go somewhere private to talk...


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