My Darkest Hour

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  House: Booksie Classic

It all starts when I wake up in the dark. Everything is wrong, I don't belong here. Here is my story. The story of the love I thought I had, the story of the darkness in the world, the story of the nightmare I was forced to live through. This is my story.

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Only the Beginning

I awaken to darkness. I can’t see anything, my head throbs and a sharp pain runs up the side of my left temple. I don’t know where ... Read Chapter

Mistake Number One

The sun is hot on my back. I could easily label this the hottest day of the year, even with the air conditioning that runs through my e... Read Chapter


 I was getting sick of waking up in dark rooms, but I find myself moved once again and in the dark. This time, however, I am ti... Read Chapter


 I kiss him again before I leave and promise to text him later that night. Then I start to walk down the street, away from scho... Read Chapter

Masked Man

 We’re back into the house. The man’s muttering to himself, “More trouble than she’s worth…” He lets me go and push... Read Chapter

Mistake Number Two

 The week passes quickly. Finally me and Gavin are able to meet at the cafe. He looks… different somehow now. But in a good way... Read Chapter


 A soft humming surrounds me. It swallows me… I wake up. My hands are still tied to the bedpost, I’m still naked on his bed... Read Chapter

Ice Cream

 I find myself laughing, harder than I usually do. It’s a hot day, again, so we stopped to get ice cream which is now drippin... Read Chapter

It's Just Life

 It feels like it’s been hours of me laying in this room, covered in the thick scent of smoke and alcohol. I’m getting tire... Read Chapter

I Love You

 Before we go our separate ways Gavin grabs my hand. His is warm and soft and… perfect.  “Princess, before you ... Read Chapter

The Monster Inside

 I open my eyes, which I don’t remember closing in the first place. It was darker than before… Another day washed away. My ... Read Chapter

Mistake Number Three

 When the music ends he hops off the stage and grabs my hand. He’s smiling and blushing…  “You didn’t have ... Read Chapter

The Help I Never Wanted

 At one point I passed out… I don’t know what happened after that. But when I wake up I’m in the bed again, bandages cove... Read Chapter

Break Up

 The next day at school I can’t stop thinking about Gavin. The way he looks at me, especially when he blushes. The way he fee... Read Chapter

I'll Stay For You

 He doesn’t come home that night, not until at least 4 the next day. He stops into my room to check up on me and seems surpri... Read Chapter

Mistake Number Four

 As I walk home the break up echoes in my head. I wish it went differently. But I can’t go back. I don’t feel like walking ... Read Chapter


 That night I dream about Gavin. He’s doing something with his hands in the corner while I sit in a chair tied up… My wrist... Read Chapter

I Hate You

 When I finally decide to get up and clean out my cut, it’s the afternoon… He’ll be home soon. I go to the sink and turn ... Read Chapter

My Happy Ending

 When I wake up the next morning I still feel sick. Someone tucked me in… Gavin… My body aches and my heads spinning… I e... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments


Such a crazy, intriguing beginning! I love how descriptive you are, truly creates the brutal image of the scene.

Thu, October 13th, 2016 6:55pm


Well that's what I try to do. :)

Thu, October 20th, 2016 3:12pm

Life As A Vampire

Awe, thank you

Thu, October 13th, 2016 8:20pm


How did you write this book it grabbed my attention at the beginning

Tue, October 18th, 2016 6:52pm


too be honest, and not to sound like an ego maniac or anything, but whenever im bored in class i start to think about things. Like situations that could happen. During school that day I we were learning about street safety and stuff like that and my friend brought up kidnapping. I started to go off into my little world, later that night I just sat down at my computer and wrote. It all just cam pouring out. Writing isn't something you push, it should be natural and I'm lucky it's that way for me. I don't know what I'd do without it.

Tue, October 18th, 2016 5:01pm


I really like this, I am so impressed by your talent. I'm Angelica.

Tue, October 18th, 2016 6:55pm


oh, hey, thank you, that means a lot to me. I'm Leila

Tue, October 18th, 2016 4:57pm


That's a really pretty name.

Thu, October 20th, 2016 2:20am


Thank you, once again but Angelica is even prettier.

Thu, October 20th, 2016 8:13am


This is my third time reading this and it is better each time. I don't know why I keep reading it. It is just so I don't know How to explain it. Ummm, it's so mind grabbing and sticks in your brain I just keep wanting to read it. Never stop writing.

Wed, October 26th, 2016 1:45am


THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!! it is people like you who keep me writing...

Wed, October 26th, 2016 11:51am

Miss Midnight

Terrifying and some people's reality. Very descriptive and dark, giving me the feeling of instant suffocation. I like that you made her unsure and foggy throughout, just adding more terror to the situation. You ended the chapter nicely as well, her panic overwhelming her into darkness. Great start!

Tue, November 8th, 2016 4:48pm


Thank you, I really appreciate that.

Tue, November 8th, 2016 11:21am

Books took over

best thing since twilight

Tue, February 14th, 2017 5:27pm



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