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It was very sunny day and the heat wave had prevented the people from coming out of their houses. Business had levelled down the people. The markets were hardly opened or crowded. People were rarely stepping out from their houses and the people who were stepping out from their house grasp them with the cloth to protect them from the harsh sun.
That day I too was sitting in my house by closing all the windows and doors, switching off the light but the room wasn’t dark because the sun rays were coming in my room through the broken parts of the window and making the room shine. I was sitting at the corner of the room with my legs folded in the chair and in front of mine papers were scattered and in that sheets and I was doodling in one of the paper as my mind is wondering on the words which was told to me by my friend that Why she had said this words to me? Why she had behaved me like that? Is she had forgotten me? Any harm I had given to her? Is there any bond which had been missed in our friendship? That couple of minutes many questions where moving left and right but the answers I had not get. I was very much disturbed and then after 15 minutes of thinking I went to balcony to divert my mind but it was useless. When I was in a very confused my phone rang again I felt very angry and then I went inside to check who is calling me? I saw it was Ayush’s call. He is also my good friend. We met each other when we were in standard 8. He is very cute, always smiling guy and make others also, smart etc.
At first I cut the call of Ayush but he again rang I pick up and in a very harsh manner
I answered “why you are calling me and disturbing me I am not in a good mood so please??”
He replied “then what about our lunch plan?”
I said “we will go some other day me not in a mood to go to lunch ok!
He said “okk! Cool down but by the way what happened to you”
I said “nothing” as I was to say something more...
He interrupted by saying his old lines “ that I am your friend since standard 8 and I know you better than anyone so please tell me why you are sad if not then I will breakup with you okk soo?”
I said “please don’t blackmail me” my mood was changing a little bit
He said “you have a problem?”
As I was saying “yes I have a problem” he interrupted me again by saying “u will say ...... otherwise??”
I said “okay wait”
He said “that's like a good girl and my good friend.”
I said “hmmm...If I will say in call Nah... Balance would be finished so please come to my home and I will narrate the whole story ok”
He said “no problem wait I am coming?”
And we hanged up the call
As he was coming I arranged the house so that he didn’t get a shock and after arranging I made coffee for us while that only he arrived.
I gave him the coffee and staring each other and after couple of minutes we started laughing.
After few minutes in a harsh tone he said “you will...otherwise”
I said “again you are blackmailing me...I will kill you be aware of me”
He said “I don’t care but you tell me what happened”
I said “okay baba listen....”
I said “you know my childhood friend?
He said “no! I don’t know...huh you have not told this you keep secrets from me...”
I said “shut up!”
He said “why you didn’t tell me about your childhood friend?”
I said “awww I didn’t told you...now you want to listen or not”
He said “yeah. Obvious I want to listen”
I said “okay!” so, “My childhood friend was anushka .She was everything to me. We used to play each other, eat, used to study together and even we slept something together also. When we were in class seven she went to Delhi because her father got a transferred so she had to go Delhi. We were disappointed very much but we had to bear that situation but it was very hard. When she went to Delhi we used to talk with each other on calls or through watts app but we used to spend some time with each other while talking. But as the time went our conversations became less. We used to talk less chat less as she was busy in her life I used to text her but very rarely I used to get the reply it was feeling very disappointing to me that why she is doing like that?
Few years there were no conversation among us.
When I reached class 9. One day I was getting ready for the school on my father’s phone popped out a message. The flashlight get on I saw towards the cell I saw it was the text of anushka’s father. After seeing the name I get eager to know what is the text. So, I opened the phone and check out the text. It was written “hello! Good morning! I have some great news to tell you so I should tell or just leave it?”
I replied as my father “hey! Good morning have a nice day.... and yeah you have to tell me the great news?”
Within few seconds only reply came “ the news is that I am coming Kolkata for 1 month as I have got a project some coming to Kolkata within few days?”
I replied as my father only “wow...it is great news btw anushka is coming with you?”
He replied “yeah! Obvious”
I said “okk...Great news you have given me early morning. Me very happy” by texting this I hand it over the phone to my father with a bright smile and that smile was on my face till I met her.”
Ayush interrupted “why the smile is there till you met her? I can’t understand?”
I said” you wait Nah...You will come to know”
He said “okay... continue”
I said “hmmm....so only few days were left. So, I decided to do something good and memorable for her. After lot of thinking I came to the conclusion that I will make a scrap book of our memories and a chocolate bouquet as she liked this. I started making the scrap book within a few weeks my work was finished and after that I started waiting for her that when she will arrive Kolkata.
Days passed and the day of coming also coming close as the days were coming close my excitement were also increasing.
Day came, I was very excited. I was standing near the door and waiting for her and within few minutes her car arrived she came down she was wearing a beautiful outfit and a high heel slippers and a big earring and hairs were opened she was looking just awesome. I was very happy after seeing her but her face showed that anushka was not happy. I went towards her to hug her but she said me “ I don’t want her hug please maintain a distance” I said with a very sad note “ ok I will..” then she said to her father that she need some rest so she can go to the house. Her father said “yeah you can go!” after hearing I decided that she will gift that greeting to her afterwards by going to her house. We went to our house.
When the clock stroke to 6 I went to her house her father opened the house. I went inside and he gave me a warm welcome. Then her father instructed me that she is in that room you can go there and met her. I said okay! And went there. When I opened the door she was just sitting at the balcony I went slowly closed her eyes and when I did this she shouted “who is this? The irritating personality” when and only I opened her eyes and said “sorry” she said “its ok.”
Ayush interrupted me again “why she has did like this?”
I said “keep quiet and listen your questions would be answered”
Ayush said “okay! So say...”
I started again “ha... after that i gifted her gifts which i had made for her. But she had given it a least interest and tore it in the front of my eyes only I was utterly shocked and said why you had did like this? She said “ please leave me” I said “ why you are behaving with me like this from the moment you are coming as well as you had went to Delhi also” she said “ I don’t have to answer you” I said with a high pitch “ you have to say as well as answer me” she said “ okay listen... you are the only person..Reason I went to Delhi... you are the only one who stole my happiness... you are the only person that i cant prove myself in front of my parents as always i promised my parents..and once I used to love you very much but now I hate you very much and can’t tolerate you a single moment you so please go” I was utterly shocked my eyes were moist and said “ why you are saying like this?” she said “ because you are only the reasons of everything that happened in my life.” Please you go. I went that day she broke our childhood friendship, broke my heart, and broke me she just broken me with few words only. So, from those words my mind was arising numerous questions but answers were not found so I was very irritating and behaving with you like this.” I saw Ayush eyes were moist as he was going to cry
Then he said “oh! This is the matter...dont take tension everything would be fine”
I said “how? She had blocked me from her life”
In a joyful tone Ayush replied “aryy...relax i am there with you i will feel the gap”
I said “okay!”
Then he said “you don’t care of that people who doesn’t care of yours you only care of that people who cares you and nothing else”
As he stop saying his phone rang and the phone call was of his mom she has called him because he is late to home as the clock stroke to 9 his mother was shouting to him and I was laughing by seeing him. After the call was hanged I told him to go to his house.
When she went I went towards the chair and sat down legs folded and took a paper and a pen and started writing:-
“Anushka this is dedicated to you...
Thanks for coming in my life being me friends for some years. I was very happy and thanks also for going from my life and thanks also for blocking me from your life and letting me know the truth of yours otherwise I would be in a false path.” THANKS FOR EVERYTHING. After this I folded the paper and takeout a book from the book shelves and kept that paper inside it.
After this I went to the bed and again said “THANKS ANUSHKA” then by looking the sky from the window I said that “I will never look back in my life and I will never think about you also. Thanks” and after that I slept.
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Submitted: October 20, 2016

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Submitted: October 20, 2016

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It was very sunny day and the heat wave had prevented the people from coming out of their houses. Business had levelled down the people. The markets were hardly opened or crowded. People were rarely stepping out from their houses and the people who were stepping out from their house grasp them with the cloth to protect them from the harsh sun.

That  day I too was sitting in my house by closing all the windows and doors, switching off the light but the room wasn’t dark because the sun rays were coming in my room through the broken parts of the window and making the room shine. I was sitting at the corner of the room with my legs folded in the chair and in front of mine papers were scattered and in that sheets and I was doodling in one of the paper as my mind is wondering on the words which was told to me by my friend that Why she had said this words to me? Why she had behaved me like that? Is she had forgotten me? Any harm I had given to her? Is there any bond which had been missed in our friendship? That couple of minutes many questions where moving left and right but the answers I had not get. I was very much disturbed and then after 15 minutes of thinking I went to balcony to divert my mind but it was useless. When I was in a very confused my phone rang again I felt very angry and then I went inside to check who is calling me? I saw it was Ayush’s call. He is also my good friend. We met each other when we were in standard 8. He is very cute, always smiling guy and make others also, smart etc.

 At first I cut the call of Ayush but he again rang I pick up and in a very harsh manner

  I answered “why you are calling me and disturbing me I am not in a good mood so please??”

 He replied “then what about our lunch plan?”

I said “we will go some other day me not in a mood to go to lunch ok!

He said “okk! Cool down but by the way what happened to you”

I said “nothing” as I was to say something more...

He interrupted by saying his old lines “ that I am your friend since standard 8 and I know you better than anyone so please tell me why you are sad if not then I will breakup with you okk soo?”

I said “please don’t blackmail me” my mood was changing a little bit

He said “you have a problem?”

As I was saying “yes I have a problem” he interrupted me again by saying “u will say ...... otherwise??”

I said “okay wait”

He said “that's like a good girl and my good friend.”

I said “hmmm...If I will say in call Nah... Balance would be finished so please come to my home and I will narrate the whole story ok”

He said “no problem wait I am comingJ

And we hanged up the call

As he was coming I arranged the house so that he didn’t get a shock and after arranging I made coffee for us while that only he arrived.

I gave him the coffee and staring each other and after couple of minutes we started laughing.

After few minutes in a harsh tone he said “you will...otherwise”

I said “again you are blackmailing me...I will kill you be aware of me”

He said “I don’t care but you tell me what happened”

I said “okay baba listen....”

I said “you know my childhood friend? 

He said “no! I don’t know...huh you have not told this you keep secrets from me...”

I said “shut up!”

He said “why you didn’t tell me about your childhood friend?”

I said “awww I didn’t told you...now you want to listen or not”

He said “yeah. Obvious I want to listen”

I said “okay!” so, “My childhood friend was anushka .She was everything to me. We used to play each other, eat, used to study together and even we slept something together also. When we were in class seven she went to Delhi because her father got a transferred so she had to go Delhi. We were disappointed very much but we had to bear that situation but it was very hard. When she went to Delhi we used to talk with each other on calls or through watts app but we used to spend some time with each other while talking. But as the time went our conversations became less. We used to talk less chat less as she was busy in her life I used to text her but very rarely I used to get the reply it was feeling very disappointing to me that why she is doing like that?

Few years there were no conversation among us.

When I reached class 9. One day I was getting ready for the school on my father’s phone popped out a message. The flashlight get on I saw towards the cell I saw it was the text of anushka’s father. After seeing the name I get eager to know what is the text. So, I opened the phone and check out the text. It was written “hello! Good morning! I have some great news to tell you so I should tell or just leave itJ

I replied as my father “hey! Good morning have a nice day.... and yeah you have to tell me the great newsJ

Within few seconds only reply came “ the news is that I am coming Kolkata for 1 month as I have got a project some coming to Kolkata within few daysJ

I replied as my father only “wow...it is great news btw anushka is coming with you?”

He replied “yeah! Obvious”

I said “okk...Great news you have given me early morning. Me very happy” by texting this I hand it over the phone to my father with a bright smile and that smile was on my face till I met her.”

Ayush interrupted “why the smile is there till you met her? I can’t understandL

I said” you wait Nah...You will come to know”

He said “okay... continue”

 I said “hmmm....so only few days were left. So, I decided to do something good and memorable for her. After lot of thinking I came to the conclusion that I will make a scrap book of our memories and a chocolate bouquet as she liked this. I started making the scrap book within a few weeks my work was finished and after that I started waiting for her that when she will arrive Kolkata.

Days passed and the day of coming also coming close as the days were coming close my excitement were also increasing.

Day came, I was very excited. I was standing near the door and waiting for her and within few minutes her car arrived she came down she was wearing a beautiful outfit and a high heel slippers and a big earring and hairs were opened she was looking just awesome. I was very happy after seeing her but her face showed that anushka was not happy. I went towards her to hug her but she said me “ I don’t want her hug please maintain a distance” I said with a very sad note “ ok I will..” then she said to her father that she need some rest so she can go to the house. Her father said “yeah you can go!” after hearing I decided that she will gift that greeting to her afterwards by going to her house. We went to our house.

When the clock stroke to 6 I went to her house her father opened the house. I went inside and he gave me a warm welcome. Then her father instructed me that she is in that room you can go there and met her. I said okay! And went there. When I opened the door she was just sitting at the balcony I went slowly closed her eyes and when I did this she shouted “who is this? The irritating personality” when and only I opened her eyes and said “sorry” she said “its ok.” 

Ayush interrupted me again “why she has did like this?”

I said “keep quiet and listen your questions would be answered”

Ayush said “okay! So say...”

I started again “ha... after that i gifted her gifts which i had made for her. But she had given it a least interest and tore it in the front of my eyes only I was utterly shocked and said why you had did like this? She said “ please leave me” I said “ why you are behaving with me like this from the moment you are coming as well as you had went to Delhi also” she said “ I don’t have to answer you” I said with a high pitch “ you have to say as well as answer me” she said “ okay listen... you are the only person..Reason I went to Delhi... you are the only one who stole my happiness...  you are the only person that i cant prove myself in front of my parents as always i promised my parents..and once I used to love you very much but now I hate you very much and can’t tolerate you a single moment  you so please go” I was utterly shocked my eyes were moist and said “ why you are saying like this?” she said “ because you are only the reasons of everything that happened in my life.” Please you go. I went that day she broke our childhood friendship, broke my heart, and broke me she just broken me with few words only. So, from those words my mind was arising numerous questions but answers were not found so I was very irritating and behaving with you like this.” I saw Ayush eyes were moist as he was going to cry

Then he said “oh! This is the matter...dont take tension everything would be fine”

I said “how? She had blocked me from her life”

In a joyful tone Ayush replied “aryy...relax i am there with you i will feel the gap”

I said “okay!”

Then he said “you don’t care of that people who doesn’t care of yours you only care of that people who cares you and nothing else”

As he stop saying his phone rang and the phone call  was of his mom she has called him because he is late to home as the clock stroke to 9 his mother was shouting to him and I was laughing by seeing him. After the call was hanged I told him to go to his house.

When she went I went towards the chair and sat down legs folded and took a paper and a pen and started writing:-

“Anushka this is dedicated to you...

Thanks for coming in my life being me friends for some years. I was very happy and thanks also for going from my life and thanks also for blocking me from your life and letting me know the truth of yours otherwise I would be in a false path.” THANKS FOR EVERYTHING.  After this I folded the paper and takeout a book from the book shelves and kept that paper inside it.

After this I went to the bed and again said “THANKS ANUSHKA” then by looking the sky from the window I said that “I will never look back in my life and I will never think about you also. Thanks”and after that I slept.

*****************

 

 

 

“THANKYOU SO MUCH”

It was very sunny day and the heat wave had prevented the people from coming out of their houses. Business had levelled down the people. The markets were hardly opened or crowded. People were rarely stepping out from their houses and the people who were stepping out from their house grasp them with the cloth to protect them from the harsh sun.

That  day I too was sitting in my house by closing all the windows and doors, switching off the light but the room wasn’t dark because the sun rays were coming in my room through the broken parts of the window and making the room shine. I was sitting at the corner of the room with my legs folded in the chair and in front of mine papers were scattered and in that sheets and I was doodling in one of the paper as my mind is wondering on the words which was told to me by my friend that Why she had said this words to me? Why she had behaved me like that? Is she had forgotten me? Any harm I had given to her? Is there any bond which had been missed in our friendship? That couple of minutes many questions where moving left and right but the answers I had not get. I was very much disturbed and then after 15 minutes of thinking I went to balcony to divert my mind but it was useless. When I was in a very confused my phone rang again I felt very angry and then I went inside to check who is calling me? I saw it was Ayush’s call. He is also my good friend. We met each other when we were in standard 8. He is very cute, always smiling guy and make others also, smart etc.

 At first I cut the call of Ayush but he again rang I pick up and in a very harsh manner

  I answered “why you are calling me and disturbing me I am not in a good mood so please??”

 He replied “then what about our lunch plan?”

I said “we will go some other day me not in a mood to go to lunch ok!

He said “okk! Cool down but by the way what happened to you”

I said “nothing” as I was to say something more...

He interrupted by saying his old lines “ that I am your friend since standard 8 and I know you better than anyone so please tell me why you are sad if not then I will breakup with you okk soo?”

I said “please don’t blackmail me” my mood was changing a little bit

He said “you have a problem?”

As I was saying “yes I have a problem” he interrupted me again by saying “u will say ...... otherwise??”

I said “okay wait”

He said “that's like a good girl and my good friend.”

I said “hmmm...If I will say in call Nah... Balance would be finished so please come to my home and I will narrate the whole story ok”

He said “no problem wait I am comingJ

And we hanged up the call

As he was coming I arranged the house so that he didn’t get a shock and after arranging I made coffee for us while that only he arrived.

I gave him the coffee and staring each other and after couple of minutes we started laughing.

After few minutes in a harsh tone he said “you will...otherwise”

I said “again you are blackmailing me...I will kill you be aware of me”

He said “I don’t care but you tell me what happened”

I said “okay baba listen....”

I said “you know my childhood friend? 

He said “no! I don’t know...huh you have not told this you keep secrets from me...”

I said “shut up!”

He said “why you didn’t tell me about your childhood friend?”

I said “awww I didn’t told you...now you want to listen or not”

He said “yeah. Obvious I want to listen”

I said “okay!” so, “My childhood friend was anushka .She was everything to me. We used to play each other, eat, used to study together and even we slept something together also. When we were in class seven she went to Delhi because her father got a transferred so she had to go Delhi. We were disappointed very much but we had to bear that situation but it was very hard. When she went to Delhi we used to talk with each other on calls or through watts app but we used to spend some time with each other while talking. But as the time went our conversations became less. We used to talk less chat less as she was busy in her life I used to text her but very rarely I used to get the reply it was feeling very disappointing to me that why she is doing like that?

Few years there were no conversation among us.

When I reached class 9. One day I was getting ready for the school on my father’s phone popped out a message. The flashlight get on I saw towards the cell I saw it was the text of anushka’s father. After seeing the name I get eager to know what is the text. So, I opened the phone and check out the text. It was written “hello! Good morning! I have some great news to tell you so I should tell or just leave itJ

I replied as my father “hey! Good morning have a nice day.... and yeah you have to tell me the great newsJ

Within few seconds only reply came “ the news is that I am coming Kolkata for 1 month as I have got a project some coming to Kolkata within few daysJ

I replied as my father only “wow...it is great news btw anushka is coming with you?”

He replied “yeah! Obvious”

I said “okk...Great news you have given me early morning. Me very happy” by texting this I hand it over the phone to my father with a bright smile and that smile was on my face till I met her.”

Ayush interrupted “why the smile is there till you met her? I can’t understandL

I said” you wait Nah...You will come to know”

He said “okay... continue”

 I said “hmmm....so only few days were left. So, I decided to do something good and memorable for her. After lot of thinking I came to the conclusion that I will make a scrap book of our memories and a chocolate bouquet as she liked this. I started making the scrap book within a few weeks my work was finished and after that I started waiting for her that when she will arrive Kolkata.

Days passed and the day of coming also coming close as the days were coming close my excitement were also increasing.

Day came, I was very excited. I was standing near the door and waiting for her and within few minutes her car arrived she came down she was wearing a beautiful outfit and a high heel slippers and a big earring and hairs were opened she was looking just awesome. I was very happy after seeing her but her face showed that anushka was not happy. I went towards her to hug her but she said me “ I don’t want her hug please maintain a distance” I said with a very sad note “ ok I will..” then she said to her father that she need some rest so she can go to the house. Her father said “yeah you can go!” after hearing I decided that she will gift that greeting to her afterwards by going to her house. We went to our house.

When the clock stroke to 6 I went to her house her father opened the house. I went inside and he gave me a warm welcome. Then her father instructed me that she is in that room you can go there and met her. I said okay! And went there. When I opened the door she was just sitting at the balcony I went slowly closed her eyes and when I did this she shouted “who is this? The irritating personality” when and only I opened her eyes and said “sorry” she said “its ok.” 

Ayush interrupted me again “why she has did like this?”

I said “keep quiet and listen your questions would be answered”

Ayush said “okay! So say...”

I started again “ha... after that i gifted her gifts which i had made for her. But she had given it a least interest and tore it in the front of my eyes only I was utterly shocked and said why you had did like this? She said “ please leave me” I said “ why you are behaving with me like this from the moment you are coming as well as you had went to Delhi also” she said “ I don’t have to answer you” I said with a high pitch “ you have to say as well as answer me” she said “ okay listen... you are the only person..Reason I went to Delhi... you are the only one who stole my happiness...  you are the only person that i cant prove myself in front of my parents as always i promised my parents..and once I used to love you very much but now I hate you very much and can’t tolerate you a single moment  you so please go” I was utterly shocked my eyes were moist and said “ why you are saying like this?” she said “ because you are only the reasons of everything that happened in my life.” Please you go. I went that day she broke our childhood friendship, broke my heart, and broke me she just broken me with few words only. So, from those words my mind was arising numerous questions but answers were not found so I was very irritating and behaving with you like this.” I saw Ayush eyes were moist as he was going to cry

Then he said “oh! This is the matter...dont take tension everything would be fine”

I said “how? She had blocked me from her life”

In a joyful tone Ayush replied “aryy...relax i am there with you i will feel the gap”

I said “okay!”

Then he said “you don’t care of that people who doesn’t care of yours you only care of that people who cares you and nothing else”

As he stop saying his phone rang and the phone call  was of his mom she has called him because he is late to home as the clock stroke to 9 his mother was shouting to him and I was laughing by seeing him. After the call was hanged I told him to go to his house.

When she went I went towards the chair and sat down legs folded and took a paper and a pen and started writing:-

“Anushka this is dedicated to you...

Thanks for coming in my life being me friends for some years. I was very happy and thanks also for going from my life and thanks also for blocking me from your life and letting me know the truth of yours otherwise I would be in a false path.” THANKS FOR EVERYTHING.  After this I folded the paper and takeout a book from the book shelves and kept that paper inside it.

After this I went to the bed and again said “THANKS ANUSHKA” then by looking the sky from the window I said that “I will never look back in my life and I will never think about you also. Thanks”and after that I slept.

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