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THE BRAKE...
I still remembered that day very well. The shocking incident that I and Jatin, my best friend has seen through our eyes when we were going to tution. That incident makes everyone silence in the train and depressed also.
So, the day was 25th September when I and Jatin were sitting in the train to go to our institution. We were talking to each other and as well as we were engrossed in our cell phone by making fun of the photos that was the best work done by us. The awesome work. We were waiting for the train to start meanwhile a family came in our compartment with a very joyful voice “yeah train...shopping...eating...fun etc” we all looked up and saw there was an aunt, uncle and there one boy child and the child was shouting only. The child was so cute that we can’t say. He was wearing a blue jeans and a shirt. Her height personality, mentality shows that he would be of 5 years only. The child was constantly saying “yeah yippee...we are going to train...shopping...rides...we will eat a lot of things...yippee” we were constantly smiling by hearing and his voice was so cute that I wanted to kiss her but Jatin was telling me “switch off your emotions and sit quietly” I slapped slowly in his face and you keep quiet otherwise I will miss you. In a very happy mode he replied “yeah...kiss me I didn’t have any problem”. I said in a very shy manner “keep quiet and started looking outside”.
After few minutes the child again started asking question to his parents “where they are going??What he will eat? Which ride he will sit?”
Then his parents replied to all her questions one by one and by the face of the child it can be proved that chid was satisfying with the answer... we were constantly smiling.
After answering all the questions he put up again questions then his father said “no more questions keep quiet. And see that trees, bullidings, animals, persons” he was pointing out the things that can be seen outside the train.
Then the child say “if I will keep quiet you all will be become pause and silent forever...and started laughing”
His father said “don’t ever tried to say this rubbish talk if he will tell he will slap him...and now you will see outside or we should go home”
He said “okk...”
The child started looking outside and enjoying the nature and the mean time he was holding the rod and swinging here and there his parents were telling not to do but he was not listening.
After few minutes he was kept quiet and closed his eyes and enjoying the air that was touching his face and for a few minutes he is opening his eyes seeing what is going on and then again closing his eyes... that was so lovely moment. We were constantly smiling by seeing his naughtiness.
The incident which happened after few minutes was unexpected and made everyone in shock and cry hard. Our train suddenly stop at a great speed made everyone moved from his place and when the train stop the child was thrown out from the train as he can’t stop him as he had didn’t had any balance on his body and he was fallen down between the railway tracks and he had got hurt on his head legs. Everyone got shocked how it has happened their parents were shocked and don’t what to do. Even we were shocked how it has happened. The railways tracks were filled with blood. The parents started crying and saying “after so much request we had came out to make him happy and he had only went by leaving us. He was telling true that if he will become silent he will make others life pause. He was only child to us now to whom he will tell Ayush come here, don’t do this, stop it, do homework etc. Ayush was the name of the child.”
Their parents were crying a lot then we want towards them satin the front of them. Wiped of their tears and told them “stop crying...he would be very sad that there was crying...he will come again in your life with same feelings and love don’t cry and we hug them and then we said to them till another Ayush came they will be their daughter and son” they smiled a little bit and thank you so much for making us relieve then they said us why Ayush had did this?. I and Jatin were speechless and said nothing and then they said please take my cell and call to all my family members it was a very hard work for us but we had to do this. We called their family members everybody were shocked and started crying over the face.
After that their parents went towards the Ayush’s body and started crying and sat hopelessly we were very sad and we don’t know how to react. We sat inside the train very sad there was no talking in the train everyone was silent. Our train started and we reached our destination but our minds were trapped between those railways tracks.
While coming from our institute our eyes moved towards that incident we saw that between those railways tracks blood was there but Ayush was not there.
We then talk that a sudden break can change everybody’s life in a few seconds only. I said then sometimes break saves our life and sometime it takes away our life. Jatin said “yeah! It is very true.” And then we step out from the train and started towards our home. Then there was no talking between us as I was very sad as I love children. He came in front of me, holds my hands and said he would be fine anywhere he would be. I said “yes he will”. Then Jatin gave me kiss on the forehead and on cheeks and a tight hug so that I would be normal and come out grief. Then I find myself little bit comfort and then we reached home said “good bye...take care...see you tomorrow and then I had given him a kiss and a tight sad because I was feeling very sad and missing. And again said “good bye”
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Submitted: October 27, 2016

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THE BRAKE...

I still remembered that day very well. The shocking incident that I and Jatin, my best friend has seen through our eyes when we were going to tution. That incident makes everyone silence in the train and depressed also.

So, the day was 25th September when I and Jatin were sitting in the train to go to our institution. We were talking to each other and as well as we were engrossed in our cell phone by making fun of the photos that was the best work done by us. The awesome work. We were waiting for the train to start meanwhile a family came in our compartment with a very joyful voice “yeah train...shopping...eating...fun etc” we all looked up and saw there was an aunt, uncle and there one boy child and the child was shouting only. The child was so cute that we can’t say. He was wearing a blue jeans and a shirt. Her height personality, mentality shows that he would be of 5 years only. The child was constantly saying “yeah yippee...we are going to train...shopping...rides...we will eat a lot of things...yippee” we were constantly smiling by hearing and his voice was so cute that I wanted to kiss her but Jatin was telling me “switch off your emotions and sit quietly” I slapped slowly in his face and you keep quiet otherwise I will miss you. In a very happy mode he replied “yeah...kiss me I didn’t have any problem”. I said in a very shy manner “keep quiet and started looking outside”.

After few minutes the child again started asking question to his parents “where they are going??What he will eat? Which ride he will sit?”

Then his parents replied to all her questions one by one and by the face of the child it can be proved that chid was satisfying with the answer...  we were constantly smiling.

After answering all the questions he put up again questions then his father said “no more questions keep quiet. And see that trees, bullidings, animals, persons” he was pointing out the things that can be seen outside the train.

Then the child say “if I will keep quiet you all will be become pause and silent forever...and started laughing”

His father said “don’t ever tried to say this rubbish talk if he will tell he will slap him...and now you will see outside or we should go home”

He said “okk...”

The child started looking outside and enjoying the nature and the mean time he was holding the rod and swinging here and there his parents were telling not to do but he was not listening.

After few minutes he was kept quiet and closed his eyes and enjoying the air that was touching his face and for a few minutes he is opening his eyes seeing what is going on and then again closing his eyes... that was so lovely moment. We were constantly smiling by seeing his naughtiness.

The incident which happened after few minutes was unexpected and made everyone in shock and cry hard. Our train suddenly stop at a great speed made everyone moved from his place and when the train stop the child was thrown out from the train as he can’t stop him as he had didn’t had any balance on his body and he was fallen down between the railway tracks and he had got hurt on his head legs. Everyone got shocked how it has happened their parents were shocked and don’t what to do. Even we were shocked how it has happened. The railways tracks were filled with blood. The parents started crying and saying “after so much request we had came out to make him happy and he had only went by leaving us. He was telling true that if he will become silent he will make others life pause. He was only child to us now to whom he will tell Ayush come here, don’t do this, stop it, do homework etc. Ayush was the name of the child.”

Their parents were crying a lot then we want towards them satin the front of them. Wiped of their tears and told them “stop crying...he would be very sad that there was crying...he will come again in your life with same feelings and love don’t cry and we hug them and then we said to them till another Ayush came they will be their daughter and son” they smiled a little bit and thank you so much for making us relieve then they said us why Ayush had did this?. I and Jatin were speechless and said nothing and then they said please take my cell and call to all my family members it was a very hard work for us but we had to do this. We called their family members everybody were shocked and started crying over the face.

After that their parents went towards the Ayush’s body and started crying and sat hopelessly we were very sad and we don’t know how to react. We sat inside the train very sad there was no talking in the train everyone was silent. Our train started and we reached our destination but our minds were trapped between those railways tracks.

While coming from our institute our eyes moved towards that incident we saw that between those railways tracks blood was there but Ayush was not there.

We then talk that a sudden break can change everybody’s life in a few seconds only. I said then sometimes break saves our life and sometime it takes away our life. Jatin said “yeah! It is very true.” And then we step out from the train and started towards our home.  Then there was no talking between us as I was very sad as I love children. He came in front of me, holds my hands and said he would be fine anywhere he would be. I said “yes he will”. Then Jatin gave me kiss on the forehead and on cheeks and a tight hug so that I would be normal and come out grief. Then I find myself little bit comfort and then we reached home said “good bye...take care...see you tomorrow and then I had given him a kiss and a tight sad because I was feeling very sad and missing.  And again said “good bye”

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