Juda & Tent

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Young Adult  |  No Houses

Meet Marti Lane, a 21-year-old barista residing in the beautiful City of no-name. Marti is rarely lucky and when she is, she always expects the Universe to turn around and punch her in the face. So when she finds a roommate ad for an apartment that looks too-good-to-be-true, she knows that something's not quite right. Of course, she didn't expect that 'something' to be her new roommate - a socially inept demon with a video game addiction, plus her rag-tag bunch of monster friends. And a cat. Nope, Marti definitely wasn't expecting that.

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THE BEGINNING

Twenty-one year old Marti Lane stood before the foreboding gateway to her new life. By gateway she was of course ... Read Chapter

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TRIUNE

Hi JH,
I thought this was a very interesting read. Initially I was drawn to your profile because of the gorgeous cat pic, lol, then I decided to give the chapter a read even though vampires etc.. are not really my thing, however I kept reading because I really liked your writing style and the flow of your writing and. Also the character names are interesting and the characters are very engaging, very easy to follow, very descriptive. Really enjoyed it thanks!
-Imogene

Sat, November 5th, 2016 9:16pm

TRIUNE

Hi JH,
I thought this was a very interesting read. Initially I was drawn to your profile because of the gorgeous cat pic, lol, then I decided to give the chapter a read even though vampires etc.. are not really my thing, however I kept reading because I really liked your writing style and the flow of your writing and. Also the character names are interesting and the characters are very engaging, very easy to follow, very descriptive. Really enjoyed it thanks!
-Imogene

Sat, November 5th, 2016 9:16pm

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Thank you so much! I'm glad I was able to lure you in with the promise of a beautiful black cat.

Sun, November 6th, 2016 3:21am

Mickey M. Maltbie

Hello. Great first chapter. Really liked it and i do believe that you should continue with it. Also if you enjoy vampire books check out my "New Age" book series. Leave a comment on how you like it if you decide to read it.

Tue, April 4th, 2017 12:26am

J Woods

Okay, this was hilariously entertaining, I love the dialogue and Character development. You have an amazing talent for story telling.

I look forward to more!

Tue, April 4th, 2017 12:31am

T. E. Jackson

Very very interesting and well written! You have talent! Only thing I can recommend, is that if you're planning on making this into a novel, shorten the chapters, it'll make it much easier for people to read, absorb, and enjoy. I'd say about half as long as this was. I couldn't find any spelling errors and your format was easy to read so great job! I'll be sure to read the rest when you upload more!

Tue, April 4th, 2017 12:59am

FantassyDuo

Well i really like your writing style and how you descripe things. It makes the story very interesting and funny. Would love to read more actually.

Tue, April 4th, 2017 1:48pm

MABelle6

Hi JH,

I really loved your writing style. The details you use are exceptional and I will definitely be keeping up with your story...very interesting and luring topic! Great first chapter!

Tue, April 4th, 2017 5:45pm

Lucy Tomas

That's awesome! I love it! Good job and keep going :)

Tue, April 4th, 2017 6:40pm

KathrynAcacia

This was super creative and fun! It was very clear and easy to read, too. There were a couple sentences towards the beginning that were a little clumsy, but for the most part your descriptions were clean and crisp, and you jumped into the action / interesting part of the story right away. I also appreciated how although there was enough description for me to get a mental picture of everything, you didn't bog this down with unnecessary details. I can't wait to read more!

Tue, April 4th, 2017 9:13pm

susan b

Hi JH,
I have read this and I love it! It is very good! Can't wait for more!

Wed, April 5th, 2017 4:26pm

Ikusa

This is awesome! I had an absolute blast reading this. I might have laughed a little too hard at the "god save this girl" part. Regardless, it's a great start to a story and I'd totally read on!

Fri, April 7th, 2017 4:18pm

XCulletto

I thought this was an enjoyable read. I love when personalities clash, so the opening scenes with Marti and Juda were fun. Marti certainly handles the upheaval of her reality better than I would. Certainly makes me want to turn the page to the next chapter!

Fri, April 7th, 2017 8:18pm

Corine Pelletier

This was very interesting. I can't wait to see what you do with these characters.I already enjoy their personalities very much. Please keep me updated.

Fri, April 7th, 2017 10:14pm

Zefyr

I love this. It's a great style of writing and I would enjoy more. Very good first chapter. I already like Juda, she's all like no nonsense. At least that's how she feels to me. :)

Fri, April 7th, 2017 11:34pm

Rebecca Daniels

I want to see more. Please?!

Mon, April 10th, 2017 7:01pm

ChibiKittyGirl

OMG! It's really good! Keep writing this has me hooked!

Mon, April 10th, 2017 8:57pm

SuzanneE

Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to finish reading this chapter! But there is a reason I've come back to finish it! This is very well written and I especially love how you have Marti asking realistic questions and thinking through the flaws that most science fiction plots don't bother addressing. And Juda is right, who would believe her if she tried to tell anyone?! I can see this getting interesting real fast. -Suz

Thu, April 13th, 2017 11:31pm

Amy R. Beckett

This is really good! I love your writing style - the way you describe everything really catches my imagination. This story looks like it has a lot of promise! The only constructive comment I have is that this is quite a long chapter... Nothing really wrong with that, but have you considered splitting it up a little more?

Tue, April 18th, 2017 5:07pm

cat1000er

I found this to be really funny at parts which kept it interesting and entertaining right up until the last words. hope there's more to this story.

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 2:20am

lirian

Well written and entertaining! (Reminds me of a fave anime - Black butler XD)
Will be reading on!

Sun, August 27th, 2017 2:40pm

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