Thought Police

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  No Houses

If you are unoriginal in the town of Clare View Point, you will be sent to the Gulag!

A robbery in Clare View Point's bookstore has caused hysteria within the archives of it. It's up to Inspector Niles Rivera and Officer Ella Q. Whent to find the culprits of the crime before ideas are stolen from the creators.

{First Draft. Thirteen Chapters will be published at different times}

Table of Contents

Chapter 1

Ellena spins in her chair, surprising she's not at least green faced from the clockwise turns. Fifty one and fifty two, that'... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

Clare View Point Creative Department. That's what the brick building the duo sprang out from the doors. Ellena slid on the stair rails ... Read Chapter

Chapter 3

Bubbly soft pop played throughout the building with a slight base drop at the climax of the song. Light blue tiled floors match the wal... Read Chapter

Chapter 4

A cat screeches at the sudden wheel about to squash the end of his tail. Multiple shoppers drop their multi-colored bags at the sight o... Read Chapter

Chapter 5

“Look, you need to calm down. It’s okay. Don’t worry. Listen all you have to do is. I said listen. Signal here is terrible. Just ... Read Chapter

Chapter 6

“I’m telling you Inspector. I haven’t done anything!” a taller blonde looms over Niles and Ellena. Nickey was a human block of ... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

Miss Midnight

Mmm, I like what you've done so far, the short intro to our fearless two, lol. Your descriptions work wonderfully again, but I feel this chapter is a bit rushed. The 'Icomments' I left are just a few examples where it makes sense what you wrote, but just requiring a few added descriptions. I still love your writing style and find it refreshing to read, so if what I highlighted was supposed to read as you wrote it, I apologize. Great start!

Mon, November 21st, 2016 7:59am

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