They are the Evolved - completely inhumane.
More than 19 billion people have died due to the Evolved. There is less than 1 billion people left in the entire world. Victor Grace is one of them. He chances of survival are extremely low. Valeria is Victor's Before-Evolved-Times longtime girlfriend, but she had drowned, and Victor had thought she was dead, until she turned up and saved him. But something isn't right with her. Valerica has been hiding the fact that she is half human, half Evolved. It makes her unstable, and extremely powerful.
Three heroes have to save the world from millions of Evolved. If they fail, humanity dies in their hands...
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Submitted: November 24, 2016
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i loved your book! I give it a 5/5!!! Thanks so much for creating such a book! please write more!
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Thank you! I really appreciate you checking out my book! Tell others of it! Thanks!
really inspiring :)
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Thank you! I really like your book too!
This was a very nice read. I liked how descriptive you were in detailing the surroundings. My only advise would be for you to insert a bit more emotions into your characters; they tend to read a bit flat even though so much tragic is going on around them. Aside from that, I really enjoyed the concept of your book. Nice job.
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Thank you SO MUCH for the suggestion!!! I really appreciate it, and I really appreciate you reading my book! I will add more emotions into it, as I have noticed that my characters are a bit flat! Thank you so much. If you haven't already, please continue reading and provide me more feedback and suggestions.
If you like my writing, I just tried another style that I haven't done before - horror, and the short story is The Widow of the Dark Forest, it's really short so you can finish it pretty quick! Provide me some feedback on that also if you can!
Again, I really thank you for reading my book and providing feedback!!! Thanks!!!
VERY nice start! I'd love to have you come over & read something of mine too!
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Thank you, I will!
An excellent first chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more. I've got a real passion for books of the dystopian genre and this is looking good. Very effective use of the short sentence. It's something that I try to use as well.
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Thank you so much! I love reading these types of books, and it's really really great that you can read mine, and enjoy it! I really appreciate it!
Nice job. It is very descriptive and the concept is interesting, I love dystopian and science fiction. Left it off at a cliffhanger to make us wonder what will happen next. Keep it up!
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