When Death Decides that It's Time...

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

Something that me and my mind were wondering about and why..

First you'll close your eyes and fall into a deep slumber, yet it will last forever. You'll soon awake in a pitch black void that will be filled with laughter from your siblings, family members, and friends. Then all around you will be memories that you kept in your very mind as a living person and all the smiles you put on people's faces. It will make you feel, comfort and pain that you had to leave those memories behind. Soon all those laughters will turn into crying and all those memories will become all the times when you made someone sad or cry. It will make you guilty. Like the one when you turned down the person that had feelings for you. Now the void will turn into a scenery, you now hear crying and prayers. You'll turn around to see your body being buried or turn into ashes. While you watch, you disappear, turn into little white fragments, as if someone was ripping a piece of paper, yet the paper is you. That is the person that felt anger or hatred towards you, getting revenge but hurting you. You soon turn into a pile of fragments and accept your fate. Then you'll wake up with no memories, ready to make no ones with this new life you have.. 

Submitted: December 02, 2016

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Hi there, first of all your talented in writing Second, as you know life is a short journey that every body must pass . TIME OF DEATH IS HARD i wrote a post about it if you want to know about i will send it to you

Fri, December 2nd, 2016 6:27pm


Sad but poignant account of what one might experience during the rebirth of your soul.
I once wrote a story about a possible future suicide attempt.
It's a bit melodramatic and hypothetical because that was nearly a decade ago and I'm still here
It was entitled "Time To Die,Don't ask why".
You can find it under my username "Androgyne" at Booksiesilk.com.
Your account of how one might experience ones end seems to be born out of helplessness and despair with a tinge of guilt.
Depression can do severe harm to our minds,I know because I have suffered from it since my teens.

Sat, December 3rd, 2016 11:29pm

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