project hope chapter 1- a long road ahead

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this is just the chapter and its short. i need some advice as im only 13 and need help with my writing

Submitted: December 11, 2016

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One cold dry night in a baron wasteland due to the great war of 2034, A wise man named Jack and an inosent 17 year old girl named summer(His daughter) were held up in a cave. They were escping from a nearby group of bandits when they found the cave. "its not much but it will have to do."They both sat down and as Jack does every day takes out his diary and starts to write away. 47- i have just got here with hold up for the night.We are Exausted, Well at least i am.i picked up a small injury and crystal...well she got lucky. Crystal found a weird dagger in a wooden box,i let her keep it for defence, she is wepon mad. We havent long arived and already im thinking of leaving but we must rest up and to be honest i can hardly move my legs. Jack signing off

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"Are you ever gonna stop writing in that stupid diary dad? it drives me crazy." Her eyes were almost closed from tierdness and boerdom. "Not until im dead Jack whined jokengly as if to say he will. "Dad? how did mom really die?." The cave fell sielent."Wow that was ramdom,are you ok?" She didnt reply,all she wanted was the truth."Well honney its not as simple as you may think" She thought she was safe and to be honest didnt care about any of us."i didnt want to say it because you would hate me for it but you seem mature enough now to handle the truth" She broke into tears as if she was sweating." How could you hide this from me? i thought we were always honest with eachother?" "Well crystal if i had told you, you would feel unloved while she pretended to care about you,i felt now would be the right time. She hugged him and didnt let go,devistated by this news. "Thank you for telling me, i apreciate your honesty".

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That morning Jack slowly woke up, cold but refreashed from the rest he was able to get. *yawn* "good morning, What time is it? Jack tried to say while yawning. "Grab your things and lets go" Crystal relpied with an emotionless voice. Jack got up swiftly and grabbed his sniper,pistol and assult rifle aloong with some food and water and set off. it was around 07:35 when they left and the place looked as dull as ever. "Where are we going?" Jack said with slight hints of curiosity and annoyence in his tone. "Be quiet dad and keep your mouth shut" she said with that same emotionless tone. Did i do something? was it what i said last night?. she was reluctent to give her answer straight away but after a few momens she replied," We need to head to town to get something. A stoney silence was starting to make things awkward."What is it? we didnt leave anything there did we?" The wind was really irritating Jacks skin as he slowly walked through the wasteland. "its my sword diagram i designed,i really need it back." They began to pass a sign that was very faint but visable and it said, Rosemery-2 miles.

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They finaly got to the town after hours of walking and talking about space."Finaly we're here,and we're safe too" jack sighed with relife "well we got here didnt we? now lets go and get that diagram shall we?. She laughed as she walked towards the hotel."i'll catch you up crystal,i need a drink" She sighed but went on without him but was filled with the slightest hint of regret and just like that she was gone. As he was about to go into the bar a mysterious figure imerged from the ally way and grabbed jack. *mmmmmph* *mmmmmmmph* he screemed into the figures hand but jack was beaten. Suddenly the figure removed his hand and let him go but didnt let him leave."Who are you? and what do you want with me?" its been a long time jack.

 

 


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