Life with a predator

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
A short story about a young girl that has gone through hell

Submitted: January 16, 2017

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Submitted: January 16, 2017

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It started off when I was a young adolescent, 15 to be precise, I started having horrible vivid night terrors,I would find myself waking up not being able to move, sweating , frantically trying to get up but something was holding me down, something so terrifying, something so hideous looking, the smell of this creature would come to me atleast 2-3 times a week and lock me away. Taunting me and terrorising me like you wouldnt believe.

The first night was always the same, you could hear distant tapping, it would get closer and closer untill you see his tall lanky figure standing in the window, he wrote on the window with black texta, it wrote: 'one day you will be mine'. By the second night this half alien half man creature, would hold me down and whisper taunts in my ear whilst he would have his way with me and leaving me lifeless crying for help. He would then leave me with a jug of water,fruit, and a towel and have me locked away untill the third night, he would repeat all his sins but even worse he would have me strapped in a chair and would torture me in ways you would not believe then he would have his way with me again.

After 5 years of this torture dealing with this manipulative, psychotic, narcistic eveil man, I call my own flesh and blood my father. He wasnt just human at all he was half alien half human he was a predator.

I finally came up with a plan to write a suicide note from my father, so it looked like he had commited suicide. See in the publics eye he didnt look alien he had his human form visible.

While he was away for a few days I started to write the suicide note from my evil father. It wrote: 'I am sorry for the tears and the heartbreak I have caused you, I am sorry for the pain and lies, I am truly sorry for making you a victim to sex slavery, but it has come to an end my sweet sunshine, its time that I end my life and leave you out of this misery of everyday life.

Untill next time.


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