Moving On UP!

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is the new version of Moving on UP! where I have scripted it and changed the dialogue, it will have some of the previous story line. Danielle Louise Backworth thought she had the worst life, she had a horrid mother ( April) who was out to destroy Danielle as part of revenge for taking the one thing she loved the most Jake ( Danielle's father), but how far will April go to ensure her daughter does not get the happy ending she and her father deserve.

I don't use a lot of direction or point out what the characters might be wearing because i want the reader to use their imagination because not everyone see's things the same way.

Table of Contents

Scene 1- I Will Never Forget!

Submitted: January 25, 2017

Scene 1- I Will Never Forget!   (1 week before Moving- Thursday 14th August, 2016) (Narrator-  16 year old Danielle... Read Chapter

scene 2- San Francisco dreaming

Submitted: January 25, 2017

Scene 2- San Francisco dreaming ( Danielle is in the car with her mother as they park the car at the airport. The entire journey the ... Read Chapter

Scene 3- Leaving Was The Hardest Part

Submitted: January 25, 2017

Scene 3- Leaving Was The Hardest Part ( Jake is pacing around the kitchen on the phone to his father)  Jake: Dad I need... Read Chapter

Scene 4-The nightmare cabin

Submitted: January 26, 2017

Scene 4- The nightmare cabin Present -    (Danielle lays on the ground her eyes are closed and blood pouring... Read Chapter

scene 5-My Broken Body

Submitted: January 26, 2017

Scene 5-My Broken Body   (The paramedics rush in the hospital with Danielle strapped to a gourney)  paramedics: Som... Read Chapter

scene 6-Forgive Me, Are you really who you say you are?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 6- Forgive Me,Are You Really Who You Say You Are? Backworth Household -  ( Officer John walks over to Callum to make s... Read Chapter

Scene7- Forgive Me,What Are You Hidding?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 7- Forgive Me,What Are You Hiding?   ( Officer John walks with Sophie and Jake up stairs and Jake leads them to his be... Read Chapter

Scene 8- Forgive Me, I Am No Longer The Person I Once Was

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 8- Forgive Me,I Am No Longer The Person I Once Was   Police station-   April is in a interrogation room ... Read Chapter

Scene 9- Forgive Me, She Said What?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 9-Forgive Me,She Said What? Rachel Rebecca Glennie's house Rachel is lying on her bed with her school work spread out in fr... Read Chapter

Scene 10- Forgive me, She Did What?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 10- Forgive Me, She Did What?  Police station -  Officer John and Navy Officer James are in Sergeant Ritchie's of... Read Chapter

scene 11- Stop keeping Secrets!

Submitted: February 05, 2017

Scene 11- Stop Keeping Secrets! Police station-  ( Officer John is inside Sergeant RIctchies office to speak to him about Da... Read Chapter

Scene 12- catch him, before he gets away!

Submitted: February 13, 2017

Scene 12- Catch him, before he gets away! (Sergeant Ritchie and Officer John escort April back to the police station locking her in o... Read Chapter

scene 13- Please Tell Me She's Gonna Be okay?

Submitted: February 13, 2017

Scene 13- Please Tell Me She's Gonna Be Okay? Paramedics rush into the warehouse in aid to help Danielle with her injuries after bein... Read Chapter

Scene 14- Can you hear the bells?

Submitted: May 26, 2017

Scene 14- Can you hear the bells? Hospital - February, 2017 - Two Months after Being Found (Danielle is sat up on her bed wh... Read Chapter

Scene 15- Here comes the Bride!

Submitted: May 28, 2017

Scene 15- Here comes the Bride! Backworth household (In bed- looking up at roof) (monologue) Today is the day that my parents g... Read Chapter

scene16 - Till death do us part!

Submitted: May 28, 2017

Scene 16- Till death do us part!   Hospital, Ward 201- March 1st ,2017- Two weeks since the wedding ( Danielle is lying ... Read Chapter

Scene 17- Where Do We Go From Here?

Submitted: May 30, 2017

Scene 17- Where Do We Go From Here? Hospital-  (Sophie walks up to Doctor Charlie at the nurses station)  Sophie: D... Read Chapter

Scene 18- It's A Little Premature

Submitted: May 31, 2017

Scene 18- It's A Little Premature Hospital-  The paramedics come rushing through the A&E doors with Sophie strapped onto... Read Chapter

Scene 19- I'm Here To Stay!

Submitted: June 03, 2017

Scene 19- I'm Here To Stay! Pelican Bay State Prison- maximum security- 3 days later Sergeant Ethan Ritchie: ( Walks up to r... Read Chapter

Scene 20- What Are You Doing Here?

Submitted: June 06, 2017

Scene 20- What Are You Doing Here? Hospital- Monday 25th April 2017- 10 am Sophie:Mum? ( she sits up on her bed shocked to s... Read Chapter

Scene 21- One Year Less To Live

Submitted: June 12, 2017

Scene 21- One Year Less To Live Backworth household- May 15th,2017 ( Danielle is awake in her bed looking around her room just li... Read Chapter

Scene 22- To The Bride And Groom

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 22- To The Bride And Groom Rachel and Callum's wedding day-28th August- Backworth Household (Living Room- Danielle and... Read Chapter

Scene 23- Roses Are Red, Violet's Are Blue, And I'm Here For You!

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 23- Roses Are Red, Violet's Are Blue, And I'm Here For You! (Wedding Dance- (9pm) Ronaldo Alverez: Come one Danielle, We ne... Read Chapter

Scene 24- Plan Wasn't To Kill Them!

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 24- Plan Wasn't To Kill Them! ( Danielle at the back of a truck with a black bag over her head and her Hands and feet tied toge... Read Chapter

Scene 25- Where The Hell Is My Fiancee?

Submitted: June 28, 2017

Scene 25- Where The Hell Is my Fiancee?  Hospital Room-  James: Ronaldo! What the hell have you just said? ( he sits fo... Read Chapter

Scene 26- Hold My Hand, It's All Going To Be Okay!

Submitted: July 07, 2017

Scene 26- Hold My Hand, Everything is Going To Be Okay! ( Hospital- 2 am) ( Ronaldo runs into the hospital with James and Sergean... Read Chapter

Scene 27- Baby, I'll Never Leave!

Submitted: August 04, 2017

Scene 27- Baby, I'll Never Leave!  Hospital- 2 weeks later- September 12th, 2017) ( Danielle in hospital bed) Doctor Luc... Read Chapter

Scene 28-Please, We Need To Talk!

Submitted: August 07, 2017

Scene 28- Please, We Need To Talk! (Backworth household- September 14th , 2017 8 am) Ronaldo: ( shouts from downstairs kitchen) D... Read Chapter

Scene 29- Please, I need Answers!

Submitted: August 27, 2017

Scene 29-Please, I Need Answers! ( Backworth household- September 14th,10pm) ( Danielle comes creeping in the door with Milo and ... Read Chapter

Scene 30- DeathVine Street- Part 1

Submitted: August 27, 2017

Scene 30- DeathVine Street -Part 1 ( Backworth household- 9 am) 30th September  2017 Danielle: ( voice off screen) ( la... Read Chapter

Characters+ Family Connections

Submitted: September 25, 2018

Moving On Up- New Version  Characters In Order of appearence   Danielle Louise Backworth  Jake -Jacob Jame... Read Chapter