Moving On UP!- New Version

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is the new version of Moving on UP! where I have scripted it and changed the dialogue, it will have some of the previous story line. Danielle Louise Backworth thought she had the worst life, she had a horrid mother ( April) who was out to destroy Danielle as part of revenge for taking the one thing she loved the most Jake ( Danielle's father), but how far will April go to ensure her daughter does not get the happy ending she and her father deserve.

I don't use a lot of direction or point out what the characters might be wearing because i want the reader to use their imagination because not everyone see's things the same way.

Table of Contents

Scene 1- I Will Never Forget!

Submitted: January 25, 2017

scene 1- I Will Never Forget!   (scene opens in Danielle's fathers house, Danielle is sat on the grey sofa with her legs up ... Read Chapter

scene 2- San Francisco dreaming

Submitted: January 25, 2017

scene 2- San Francisco dreaming   The entire ride to the airport, Danielle and April never spoke a word to one another. Dani... Read Chapter

Scene 3- Leaving Was The Hardest Part

Submitted: January 25, 2017

Scene 3- Leaving Was The Hardest Part ( Jake pacing around the living room on the phone) James lines read off screen) Jake: Dad I... Read Chapter

Scene 4-The nightmare cabin

Submitted: January 26, 2017

Scene 4- The nightmare cabin (Danielle lays on the ground, blood spilling from her head) Danielle:(lines said off screen) My nigh... Read Chapter

scene 5-My Broken Body

Submitted: January 26, 2017

Scene 5-My Broken Body (paramedics rush in the hospital) paramedics: Some one quick help. Patient was attacked and fell over the ... Read Chapter

scene 6-Forgive Me, Are you really who you say you are?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 6- Forgive Me,Are You Really Who You Say You Are?   (Jake and Danielle's house) (Officer John walks over to Callum who... Read Chapter

Scene7- Forgive Me,What Are You Hidding?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 7- Forgive Me,What Are You Hiding? ( Officer John walks with Sophie and Jake, Jake gets walked to his bedroom, Sophie gets led ... Read Chapter

Scene 8- Forgive Me, I Am No Longer The Person I Once Was

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 8- Forgive Me,I Am No Longer The Person I Once Was (Police station, April being interrogated)( James pulls Officer John aside b... Read Chapter

Scene 9- Forgive Me, She Said What?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 9-Forgive Me,She Said What? (Rachel Rebecca Glennie's house, There is a knock at the front door. Rachel opens it, on the other ... Read Chapter

Scene 10- Forgive me, She Did What?

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Scene 10- Forgive Me, She Did What? ( Police station - Sergeant Ritchie, Officer John and Navy Officer James, Jake comes storming in ... Read Chapter

scene 11- Stop keeping Secrets!

Submitted: February 05, 2017

Scene 11- Stop Keeping Secrets! (Police station)( Sergeant Ritchie and Officer John) Officer John : Something doesn't feel right ... Read Chapter

Scene 12- catch him, before he gets away!

Submitted: February 13, 2017

Scene 12- Catch him, before he gets away!   (Sergeant Ritchie and Officer John escort April back to the police station locki... Read Chapter

scene 13- Please Tell Me She's Gonna Be okay?

Submitted: February 13, 2017

Scene 13- Please Tell Me She's Gonna Be Okay?   Paramedics rush into the warehouse in aid to help Danielle with her injuries... Read Chapter

Scene 14- Can you hear the bells?

Submitted: May 26, 2017

Scene 14- Can you hear the bells?   (Two months after finding Danielle) (Hospital) (Danielle sat up on her bed) ... Read Chapter

Scene 15- Here comes the Bride!

Submitted: May 28, 2017

Scene 15- Here comes the Bride! (Backworth household) Danielle: (In bed- looking up at roof) (monologue) guess today is the day t... Read Chapter

scene16 - Till death do us part!

Submitted: May 28, 2017

Scene 16- Till death do us part! (Hospital, Ward 101- Danielle's Room) (Danielle Laying her bed)( staring up at the celing) D... Read Chapter

Scene 17- Where Do We Go From Here?

Submitted: May 30, 2017

Scene 17- Where Do We Go From Here? (Hospital) (Sophie walks up to Doctor Charlie at the nurses Station) Sophie: Doctor Charl... Read Chapter

Scene 18- It's A Little Premature

Submitted: May 31, 2017

Scene 18- It's A Little Premature  (Paramedics rush Sophie into the hospital) (Doctor and nurses rush over) Doctor Oliver Fe... Read Chapter

Scene 19- I'm Here To Stay!

Submitted: June 03, 2017

Scene 19- I'm Here To Stay! ( 3 days later)( Pelican Bay State Prison- maximum security) Sergeant Ethan Ritchie: ( Walks up to re... Read Chapter

Scene 20- What Are You Doing Here?

Submitted: June 06, 2017

Scene 20- What Are You Doing Here? (Hospital) ( narrated - Monday 5th December, 2016 ) ( 10 am) ( Sophie's Hospital Room)  ... Read Chapter

Scene 21- One Year Less To Live

Submitted: June 12, 2017

Scene 21- One Year Less To Live ( Backworth household)  ( Danielle laying in bed- wide awake)  Danielle: ( stops ... Read Chapter

Scene 22- To The Bride And Groom

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 22- To The Bride And Groom ( Rachel and Callum's wedding day)( December 28th)(Backworth Household) (Living Room- Danielle a... Read Chapter

Scene 23- Roses Are Red, Violet's Are Blue, And I'm Here For You!

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 23- Roses Are Red, Violet's Are Blue, And I'm Here For You! (Wedding Dance- (9pm) Ronaldo Alverez: Come one Danielle, We ne... Read Chapter

Scene 24- Plan Wasn't To Kill Them!

Submitted: June 13, 2017

Scene 24- Plan Wasn't To Kill Them! ( Danielle at the back of a truck with a black bag over her head) ( Hands and feet tied together)... Read Chapter

Scene 25- Where The Hell Is My Fiancee?

Submitted: June 28, 2017

Scene 25- Where The Hell Is my Fiancee? ( Hospital Room)  James: Ronaldo! What the hell have you just said? ( Concerned tone... Read Chapter

Scene 26- Hold My Hand, It's All Going To Be Okay!

Submitted: July 07, 2017

Scene 26- Hold My Hand, Everything is Going To Be Okay! ( Hospital- 2 am) ( Ronaldo runs into the hospital with James and Sergean... Read Chapter

Scene 27- Baby, I'll Never Leave!

Submitted: August 04, 2017

Scene 27- Baby, I'll Never Leave!   ( Hospital- 2 weeks later- January 12th, 2017) ( Danielle in hospital bed) Docto... Read Chapter

Scene 28-Please, We Need To Talk!

Submitted: August 07, 2017

Scene 28- Please, We Need To Talk!   (Backworth household- January 14th, 2017 8 am) Ronaldo: ( shouts from downstairs ki... Read Chapter

Scene 29- Please, I need Answers!

Submitted: August 27, 2017

Scene 29-Please, I Need Answers! ( Backworth household- January 14th,10pm) ( Danielle comes creeping in the door with Milo) ( Loc... Read Chapter

Scene 30- DeathVine Street- Part 1

Submitted: August 27, 2017

Scene 30- DeathVine Street -Part 1 ( Backworth household- 9 am)  Danielle: ( voice off screen) ( laying in bed) Well today i... Read Chapter

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