Elle

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
My name is Elle (well simply L), and I am a Spark. I feel I should start my story with some history on Sparks. It was believed at the beginning of time that the world along with humanity was created by a single Spark. The process of evolution was altered, for if it was only the work of a single Spark, they would be God himself. Over the course of 2,000 years the Sparks lived, manifesting themselves with humans. They passed the gene from one to the next without the knowledge that it was there, generation to generation. Until one day, it died.

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Prologue

Submitted: January 27, 2017

This is my first post - While I've been writing this story for some time and have made it to the near end, I still feel that there is room for change of pace. The biggest thing to note is that this is the raw draft. I have learned that if I do not let someone read the raw I am more apt to make changes that change the tone. Read Chapter

Prison

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Understand that Elle has issues with speaking her sentences will not make much sense in the beginning. -Raw First Draft- Read Chapter

The Master

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Meeting the Master. -Raw Draft- Read Chapter

Accomidations

Submitted: January 27, 2017

Elle's appearance listed in this chapter is not so much in the sense that I see her. I would love to see how you envision her in order to solidify exactly how I want my Spark to look. -Raw Draft- Read Chapter

Reattachment

Submitted: January 27, 2017

-Raw Draft- Read Chapter

Vision

Submitted: January 27, 2017

-Raw Draft- Read Chapter

Change of Heart

Submitted: January 27, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for suggestions. Read Chapter

Wanted

Submitted: January 27, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for Suggestions. Read Chapter

Phillip

Submitted: January 27, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for Suggestions. Read Chapter

Home Sweet Home

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for Suggestions. Is the flow changing? Something that seems redundant and needs to be removed? Read Chapter

Previous Employment

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open to Suggestions - By far not my favorite chapter. Does it work though is the question? Read Chapter

Alexander Greene

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open to Suggestions Read Chapter

Ultimatum

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open to Suggestions. Read Chapter

Secrets

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for Suggestions Read Chapter

1902

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open for Suggestions Read Chapter

Confession

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open for Suggestions. Read Chapter

Glamour

Submitted: January 28, 2017

“I see you are wasting no time in getting away from my son.”  Alexander’s voice was harsh. “How do you keep doing this?... Read Chapter

Ambush

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open to Suggestions Read Chapter

The Doctor's Lair

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open for any suggestions. Read Chapter

Plans of Return

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- Open to Suggestions. Read Chapter

Return of the Master

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open to Suggestions Read Chapter

Betrayal

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft - Open for suggestions. Read Chapter

Portals

Submitted: January 28, 2017

-Raw Draft- So this is where the journey will begin to slow. Sorry for the massive Chapter posts. I wanted to make sure that I added everything that I have completed so far. Any feedback would be amazing. What would you like to see? What would you like to remove? The entire draft I have provided of Elle's journey of discovery has so many areas that can be expanded. Do you think that Phillip really betrayed her? Thank you for reading. Read Chapter


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