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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Religion and Spirituality  |  House: Booksie Classic

Entropy and Metaphysics

Standing upon the shore of wondering,

gazing at the massive and still gentle motion

of waves meeting absolute ground.

Looking down in  the gravity of the next moment

causing a pause to thought.

Kneeling to the earth and given vision,

see the sand in its worth as ancient rock and skeleton shell.

Created life before us molded new now.

Something great and tiny there all at once,

which is the sand that we walk upon.




Submitted: February 01, 2017

© Copyright 2022 LE. Berry. All rights reserved.

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unmasked delusions

Beautiful, little poem. I've always been fascinated with the ocean-- how it seems simple yet at the same time it's so magnificent and deep

Sat, May 20th, 2017 5:59pm


And don't forget there are sharks, so be careful if you go beyond the shoreline and enter the water.
They are of the ocean also.

Fri, June 30th, 2017 9:05pm

Derina Peng

At the moment one can't help but thinking of the creator. Beautiful.

Mon, May 20th, 2019 3:31pm


Thank you for taking the time to send along your thoughts Derina.

Fri, May 24th, 2019 11:45am

Douglas J Hill

Reminiscent of Old English riddles.

This is graceful and insightful.

I note that it does not rhyme. (see previous comment)

Tue, June 18th, 2019 11:56pm


Thanks Douglas, it's appreciated. Yeah, left the safety zone with that one...

Mon, June 24th, 2019 10:38am

JE Falcon aka JEF

Very Nice...

Sat, February 22nd, 2020 5:37pm


I appreciate your comment...thanks JE

Fri, February 28th, 2020 6:01pm

JE Falcon aka JEF

Well said and nicely written.

Sat, October 17th, 2020 1:02am


Thank you JE...

Thu, October 22nd, 2020 12:26pm

Sharief Hendricks

Ah, yes the beautiful ocean and all the unknown mysterious it holds !

Loved it LE !

Thu, November 19th, 2020 12:46pm


Thank you for your comment Sharief...glad you liked it.

Fri, November 20th, 2020 1:41pm


This poem brings a sense of awe and mystery at the timeless cycle of the waves on the sand. I enjoyed the ground down analysis of sand as shell and rock.

Sat, February 27th, 2021 8:57pm


That's a masterpiece. Each stanza is spiritual and that made me sing : "What a Beautiful World!".

Sat, May 22nd, 2021 8:42am

anand bose

Dear Berry, Beautiful use of imagery. I simply love it.

Sat, May 22nd, 2021 12:48pm


Thank you so much for your read and your kind review anand.

Wed, May 26th, 2021 1:25pm

Rehmat Tanzila

Thought-provoking poem! Beautiful

Fri, October 15th, 2021 3:38pm


Thank you for your kind comments Rehmat!

Fri, October 15th, 2021 12:35pm

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