Come back Nancy it's going to be okay

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: FISH MAN
Flash fiction contest. Flashbacks of a woman who survived a hurricane when her families yacht went down in the storm off the coast of Burma. With her husband and child on board, they went down with the vessel.

Submitted: February 01, 2017

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Standing on a rock in her red dress facing the sea she hears. "STOP!!!  NANCY STOP!!  Drowning is not a solution your mother and I love you, think about what this will do to her.

 Please, let's talk I have something to share with you something your mom and I never told you about Nancy honey.

 You had a brother before you were born. 

 He was four years old he got pneumonia, and he died your mother lost her will to live.

 I took care of her I thought I was going to lose her.

  She began fighting her way back two years later you were born.

 She won't survive this time around we love you, honey we need you.

 We will never forget our loved ones who have died they will always be in our hearts.

 You will make it through this honey like your mother did a few years from now you could have another Child a family." 

 "AW, daddy I love you and mom so much thank you.

I know that we must go on living even though, it hurts so bad. 

 I need you and mom I love both of you very much."

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