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Chapter1 (v.1) - Just Another Day

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: February 04, 2017

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Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: February 04, 2017

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Oklahoma Friday 10:08 pm

I am standing at the back of a line in a grocery store holding a can of baked beans, desperately waiting to be served by the store clerk. I got 5 people in front of me waiting to be served by this slow store clerk . I was like to myself, its gonna be a long night. 

2 minutes later 10:10 pm

Finally its my turn. I put the can of baked beans on the counter, ready to be given the hefty  price "87p" the clerk says. I put my hand down my pocket desperately trying to find a single pound. I pull out the pound out of my pocket and place it on the counter. The store clerk gives me a dark look. He then gives me the change and i leave. As i head for the exit, a man dressed in black wearing a black hat comes in. I dont notice him at first and just proceed to the exit. 

10:15 pm 

I finally step outside, and take a deep breath. Then i feel something at the back of my head. Its as if someone has hit a baseball bat at the back of my head. I feel dizzy, everthing slows down. Everything feels weird. I cant feel my legs or my arms. I drop to the ground. My eyes water and im breathing heavily i turn to my back. I can feel my head pounding like hell. I look around and see nothing but a a figure. It didnt seem human. I tried to get my words out, but I couldnt. I think to myself is this it? is this were i die? the figure is just standing there. Dead still. Then i feel my eyes close. I cant move, or speak , Help. Then everything goes dark.

To be Continued

 


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