Talentshow Haiku
Poem by: Bert Broomberg
Talentshow Haiku
Aspiring people
Almost proving us they can
master half a song.
© Copyright 2017 Bert Broomberg. All rights reserved.
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Comment | 7 words
Fri, February 10th, 2017 5:38am
Ha
Like the "almost"
Like the "half"
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Comment | 27 words
Fri, February 10th, 2017 6:56am
Thanks for your comment. Those words were just meant to add some subtle criticism on the phenomenon, and it seemed to work.. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment | 4 words
Fri, February 10th, 2017 7:09am
Very cleverly done, Bert!
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Comment | 10 words
Fri, February 10th, 2017 7:19am
Thank you for reading it, and for your nice comment.
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