Creep on the Bus

Creep on the Bus

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Submitted: February 19, 2017

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Once upon a time what started out as a normal morning, turned strange and creepy in a matter of minutes. Me, and my sister Alexandra were walking to the bus stop down the street from our home to catch the school bus to school. My sister, she's fourteen with shoulder length black hair, a circular face, a stubby nose, and she's short. Me? My name is Thomas, I'm sixteen years old, with short hair in the style of an undercut. I have really short black hair on the left side of my head, and back side. Long blue, and purple hair on top. I'm also six feet tall. It was in the middle of Winter so the mornings are always very cold. My sister wore her black beanie, with her favourite dark green coat, black plants, and completed with ankle boots. I wore a black jacket with fur on the edge of the hood, black pants, and light brown construction boots. We've arrived at the bus stop, and we're already freezing. You know that chilly feeling when you're about to go swimming so you step in the pool, and its very cold? Yeah, that feeling times it by 3. Conveniently there's a city bus stop at our school's bus stop. Me, and my sister decided to catch the city bus instead of the school bus today since we didn't feel like waiting for the school bus because it comes late everyday. The city bus arrived not too long after we got to the stop, and we got on. We rode the rectangular vehicle all the way to the bus terminal. We have arrived at the bus terminal, and we have to catch another bus to get to school. The other bus was there, and we got on. We found a seat at the back of the bus, near where this other girl was sitting. She wore a multi-colored windbreaker jacket. The jacket consisted of the colours: a highlighter green, purple, and a little bit of blue. She also had long brown hair tied up in a ponytail. The girl near our seats kept staring at us. I'm not talking about a minute. I'm talking about the whole bus ride till we got to our stop which is a good ten minutes. During the ride though she would alternate between staring at me, and my sister. I could tell she was staring at me because I could see her through my peripherals staring at my direction, and holding it for a long time. Well we got to the bus stop near the school, and proceeded to walk to the school. "That girl on the bus kept staring at us throughout the whole ride." I said to my sister. "I know I seen her staring at me, and you." My sister replied. "I didn't look at her directly I just seen her keep looking in my direction through my peripherals. I tried ignoring her haha." I remarked. "Oh my God, same actually haha." Said Alexandra. After school was over we went to the school bus loading zone, and went home. The next morning we caught the city bus again. This time when we were half way to the bus terminal, the bus stopped. Someone was boarding the bus. It was dark outside so I couldn't see who was boarding the bus. Two men boarded the bus. They were brown skinned, and wore mostly black clothing. One of the men sat beside my sister, the other sat across from her. They both smelled like they were drunk. We reached the bus terminal, and went on the bus that took us to the school. The girl on the bus as well, at the back to. Me and my sister sat in the back again. The bus was leaving the terminal, and the staring began. When we were half way to school she looked away, and I looked at my sister. I made a head pointing gesture towards the girl while looking at my sister who sat on the other side of the bus. My sister raised her phone to hint me to text her. When she did that the girl looked back and saw the gesture Alexandra made. I looked down at my phone and saw the text. "This girl is staring at us again." Read the text my sister sent. As I read this I could see the girl staring at my sister, and turning her head to look at me. "Yeah she is. She probably knows were talking about her so we should stop." I replied. Alexandra looked down at her phone, and the girl stared at her. "Okay." She answered. I rung the bus's bell and arrived at our stop. We got off the bus, and walked to school. "Okay you know those 2 guys that sat near me?" My sister spoke. "Yeah." I replied. "They smelled really bad, and they both stared at me till we got to the terminal." My sister replied. "I know, they did smelt bad" I remarked. "Oh my God, you should say I don't like people staring at me next time that girl stares at us on the bus again haha." Exclaimed Alexandra. "NO! Haha, depends on how edgy I feel, then I'll do it." I jokingly replied. "Anyhow, bye sister!" In my first period class I told my friend Michelle about the girl, and she teased me on how she probably likes me. The next morning we decided to not take the city bus this time, but to take the school bus. We got to school, and during lunch break I checked my work schedule to see if I was working this weekend. Turns out I have to work right after school today, which is Thursday. Same with tomorrow. I told my sister, and my dad the news. I was waiting at the bus stop near our school. I got on the bus, and went to work. Friday morning we took the school bus again. When school was over I walked to the bus stop near our school, and waited for the bus. The bus arrived so I got on. I seen the creepy girl on the bus. She didn't realize me at first but when she noticed me she sat right up. She stared at me throughout the whole ride, no surprise there. When the bus stopped at my stop, I got up to leave the bus... and she got up to leave the bus. I was walking to work, and she followed me to work. I entered the door of my workplace and I looked behind me to see if she was going to enter the building but she didn't walk by the doors. I got home, at eight at night. "Guess what Alex?" I questioned. "What?". "The girl was on the bus after school, and followed me to work." I answered. "What?! That's soo creepy. Let's take the city bus tomorrow, and if she stares at us I'll say I don't like being stared at by creeps." My sister exclaimed. "You're going to get your ass kicked haha" I joked. "Well too bad!" Alexandra said. Monday morning we made the bus, got to the terminal, but the bus wasn't there. We were going to sit in the terminal but I looked inside and saw the creepy girl sitting inside. We decided to stand outside. The bus arrived, and during the bus ride I was casually looking outside the frosted window, I looked in the direction of the creepy girl. I caught her staring at me, and she whipped her head out of my direction as fast as possible. "Oh my God, I really hate it when creeps stare at you all the time!" My sister said loudly while looking at the girl. The girl turned her head back, and same with everyone on the bus to look at my sister. The girl gave Alexandra the dirtiest look ever. I smiled. The next morning we were half way to the bus stop when suddenly my sister said, "Shit! I forgot my phone at home, let's go back!" My sister yelled. "Ugh we can't! We're going to be late to the bus!" I yelled back. "Ugh let's go then." Muttered Alexandra. We got on the bus, made it to the terminal, and got on the bus to school. When we got on the bus to school, the creepy girl wasn't on the bus. It was after lunch during period three when three beeps came onto the intercom followed by the principle saying, "Attention everyone, we're in a lock down. This isn't a drill, I repeat this isn't a drill.". We sat in complete silence for 15 minutes. The principle came onto the intercom again and said, "Everyone evacuate the school, students do not go to your lockers, and avoid the main enterance.". I couldn't find my sister so I went to the bus stop near the school. "Alexandra might get a ride from one of her grade 12 friends." I said in my thoughts. I made it home, and my parents weren't there. "Alexandra!" I called out. No response. "Hmm, oh wait that's right. She has a sleepover with her friend Nicole today. She's with her most likely since they're in the same class, and could get a ride to Nicole's house." I said. I went to the living room, turned on the TV, and checked the news to see what the lock down was all about."Today Gordon Park High School was under lock down when a girl with a multi-colored windbreaker named Carla Robertson came into the school with a knife. She lured in Alexandra Davidson to the office by making the secretary call her to the office. Carla stabbed Alexandra in the neck 7 times. Carla is still at large." My heart sank, and I started to cry. I felt like a waterfall! I sprinted to my room, and laid on my bed where I cried myself to sleep.

3 days later I went to Alexandra's funeral. I went up to the casket. "You look so beautiful sister." I said with a tear running down face. "I'm going to miss you a lot my friend." I kissed her on the cheek and put her favourite flower on her, a rose.

The day after that it was 9:00 PM. I was home alone because my parents went to bingo. I was watching the movie Scream when I heard a loud hard knock on the door. I figured it was the neighbours since we lived in a duplex, and the movie was pretty loud. The door didn't have a peep hole so I couldn't see who it was. I opened the door and it was my neighbour. She told me to turn the tv down. About 5 seconds after that there was another knock. I opened the door just a crack, and the door came flying in hitting me and knocking me down to the floor hard. "Hey buddy, did you miss me!? I'm soo, so sorry what happened to your sister. Too bad she's six feet under the fucking ground!!" Carla screamed. She had a chefs knife, and was about to stab me right in the stomach. I rolled to left as quickly as possible. Carla missed and stabbed the floor really hard. "How the fuck did you find out where I live you creep?!" I asked. "When you got off work and onto the bus to home, I was on the bus and  followed you home you little shit!" Carla started running at me. I got up and ran, but hit my toe on the corner of a wall which made me trip and fall. Carla caught up to me, and stabbed me in the right arm. I let out a scream so loud, that it could've broke glass. "Now I got you." Carla said creepily. Carla was about to go for another strike. "Fuck! What should I do?" I thought. Carla was about to strike the knife into me, but I quickly karate chopped her on the neck. Carla dropped the knife, and held both of her hands to her throat gasping for air. "This is my chance" I thought. I kicked carla with both legs in the stomach, grabbed the knife and stabbed her in the left leg. She let out a vicious scream. I went to grab the living room phone, and called 911. "911 what is your emergency?". "Hello someone is tryin-". "Not so fast mother fucker." Carla said. I dropped the knife when carla pushed me and put me in a head lock. She pushed me down to the floor and kicked me in the balls. She continued to beat me up by punching me. All of a sudden the door lock starts to unlock. Carla looks back, grabs the knife, and sprints to the door. "We're h-" My dad said before Carla stabbed him in the throat. My mother attempts to run but couldn't because Carla grabbed her by her hair and stabs her in the throat. I got up ran to the door to push Carla out the door, and locked it. Carla tried opening the door and kicked it. "You lucky piece of shit haha." She said. I felt relieved and sat down behind the door. 30 seconds later the back door smashes and glass shatters everywhere. I forgot we had a sliding glass door as our back door. I seen Carla running towards. I ran upstairs trying to get to the washroom because it had a door that locks. I reached the bathroom but I felt a sudden sharp pain in my back. Carla had stabbed me. I fell down to the floor gasping for air. "You know what you and your sister have in common? You're both dead." She said angrily. She was going to stab me. I was too weak to fight back, and knew these were my final moments of life. She raised the knife over her head ready to puncture me with that sharp, and pointy blade. I heard a gun shot, and Carla had blood running down her head. Carla fell on top of me, and was still as a statue. A cop helped me up and brought me to an ambulance. The neighbours had called the cops.


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