DAWN
Poem by: TR's
It is dawn though looks like dusk
Has filled the Jasmine with a musk
Come! Let us fuse into the serenity
Come and dance our ways to eternity!
Seems like dawn has dawned on the earth
Let's see how it celebrates its birth!
Did you notice the sky's necklace being taken off?
Or reckon there's no wink and no cough?
Come! Let us think the matter over
Come and search the culprit. Hover!
Listen to the victim patiently
For it has lost its pearls suddenly!
Here see the sun that unveiled the shawl of night
Is now filling its folds with diamond bright!
Come! Let us witness this mischievous game
Come and observe it's nothing the same!
Curtains at the top are drawn aside
Clouds are pale and pink as a blushing bride!
Stars have drowned in the flood of fiery beam
Moon has disappeared with a smiley gleam!
Come! Let us uncover the convered reality
Come and see that sun's sweet brutality!
No moon seems blinking no star throws a wink
No clamor no clatter not even a clink!
Dropping the droplets of the dew
Night angels depart with their crew!
Come! Let us bid farewell to the notion of dearth
Come and greet dawn with warmth and mirth!
Blades of leaves are bathed and wet
As the dew drops licked and left to get them set!
Dear! The dawn has appeared
Cup your hands; erase the thought of being impaired!
Get determined to vanquish at every step
Do not think of the consequence; nail the husk!
Because,
It is dawn though looks like dusk!
© Copyright 2017 TR's. All rights reserved.
Comments
This one is absolutely beautiful!
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Well written with a good, but different sort of flow. You could have crafted two poems from this. Well done and thanks for a well crafted read.
Author
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Oh thanks for an honest opinion ! I really appreciate the response! ^_^
The poem was PURE BEAUTY....
Small elements that make a big difference in making it touch.
Author
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Thanks for reading ..I appreciate your comment :)
WOW! TR's, this is your best yet. The flow of your lines and the passion within each sentence, it's just so majestic, so subliminal. Your wording and your metaphors, they are captivating. I am definitely adding this to my shelf.
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Oh my God .. oh my God thank you Jaylisbeth ... your comment took my breath away! Seriously I'm so glad you enjoyed it ... thank you
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