The commander

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
A war between dog vs cats

Submitted: March 05, 2017

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Long ago,March 1  there was a warrior named lucky,he was not just any ordinary warrior he was a dog warrior.At the time there was a war taking place in the heart of united states, of dogs vs cats.Lucky was commander of the dogs,and his good friend king second in command.The dogs wanted freedom for everyone and everything,While the cats wanted everything locked away except cats,fluffy was a commander of the cats.March 2nd rolled around and lucky and king planned to take out fluffy without losing any dogs,they then agreed to attack the base nearest to them the  next day.So March 3rd came around and commander lucky along with King gathered up 150 dogs to attack a base just north of where lucky was living.So they went in capturing a general and 350 other cats,the general they caught was general tux.Lucky called for a meeting at his home base,in the meeting it was Lucky,King,and enemy general tux lucky questioned tux about where fluffy was hiding, tux refused to answer and king then sprayed him with a water gun making tux cry out for him to stop,tux then to lucky fluffy was about 120 miles south of the base where commander lucky was staying at.So Lucky sent king with 3 special op dogs to scope out the base,king went along with the 3 special op dogs when king arrived at the base he was caught at surprise when the cats were waiting for him they captured king and 2 out of the 3 special ops.One returned to lucky with orders from fluffy saying to call off the war or else,Lucky refused asking how many cats were at the base the special op responded with "too many' lucky then slapped him and yelled for him to exit the office and lucky planned the rest of the night.March 4th came around and lucky dispatched 2 of his good alies which were birds to scope out fluffys base,they accepted since fluffy was a enemy of theirs .They returned later that afternoon and were told a meeting was being held at 8 at night both birds agreed to return then.Around 8;05 the meeting was held and the two birds told lucky they counted well over 12,000 cat beds,lucky then laughed as it seemed like a small number to lucky,one special op told lucky he cant rush since king was a prisoner,they called it a night at went to bed.Over at fluffy base king was held in a cell with pictures of pizza on the wall and he knew he couldnt eat them,he tried escaping but had no luck and was punished for not talking where lucky was based at .March 5th came around and lucky called for a team of 25 K.A.T members rescue king,the K.A.T 'Known And Trusted' were a team of 25 cats working for lucky as spies,they went to fluffy base and acted as cat soliders.they made their way to the cell blocks and freed king with the two special op dogs,they sneaked king out in the middle of the night.King then reunited with lucky and held a meeting with him saying the cats were making a nuclear weapon that will freeze everything but cats,lucky was mad and nervous all at once,king told him they needed to act fast to save the world lucky agreed.Around midnight lucky called a total war with the cats sending 8.000 dogs and 300 birds to fluffy base.Upon arrival team lucky broke through the base walls made of yarn and raided it with water guns,along with the birds dropping water ballons through the sky,Lucky along with king made it through to fluffy office , king took out another general named kip as lucky grapped fluffy and threw him in a tub of water ordering him to call of the nuclear weapon,fluffy agreed and lucky lifted him out and made sure he followed through with it.Once it was cancled lucky made it outside seeing dogs arresting tons of cats and ordered to be takin home,king then told the army of dogs that lucky will hold a speech tomorrow morning.Once making it home lucky told king to make sure fluffy is locked up king then responded why not drown him?Lucky told him it was not enough, king then locked fluffy in a cell with tuna in a cat proof see through box.The next morning lucky held a speech telling the army of his 8000 dogs "good job fellas,we won it all over,fluffy is in a cell for the rest of his nine lives,so we can all sleep well at night thank you all"the crowd then cheered "L-U-C-K-Y" king then grabbed the mic and said "shut up,you think thats it?"hushing the crowd pizza fell from the sky and it was the birds dropping it,king then said "now its over" lucky and king then enjoyed pizza for the rest of the day and celebrating.


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