Darkest Place

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
I found you in the darkest place.

Submitted: March 12, 2017

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Submitted: March 12, 2017



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I found you in the darkest place. You were there crouching by yourself. You were hiding all the pain behind a smile. When I found you behind the smile, it was unforgettable. Your eyes were hollow, body and mind tattered, voice hoarse from screaming for recognition. You were keeping it all to yourself. I thought I could help. I reached towards you and you finally broke down crying. 

"Let's get out of here," I told you. 

You nodded your head agreeing to my words. I thought I was the light that had reached into your life. I was wrong. As time flew by I couldn't find an exit from your misery. I started drifting away from my goal. The world surrounding you suddenly became darker and you told me, still smiling that you were fine. I believed your words in glee because I wanted to flee from where I was. When I reached where I came from, I turned back finally remembering my goal. I had to save you. But it was too late. I couldn't see you anymore.


It's fine now. It was just a dream. I had lost you as soon as I set my foot in there.

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