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Oh my Lord - I really didn't mean to post that. I was clicking buttons and assumed it wouldn't just send a blank message... Boy, was I wrong. That comment made me crack up though - you have a wonderful writing style, too! I shall never click random buttons again and will definitely be following this story!
Sat, March 18th, 2017 3:03am
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Those damned buttons ruining everybodies lives . being all confuisng and what not lol jk
Hahahahadyeah dont worry it was hilarious even when i thought you were trolling me though hahahaha
Thank you for reading and commenting lol
i really liked how it began but then i kinda got lost in the middle like i couldn't understand what was going on because everything was happening so fast. But really a wonderful job
Sat, March 18th, 2017 11:26am
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Hahahah yeah sorry about that it transitions
Thank you for reading and commenting.
you are welcome. i will be looking forward to your story
Sat, March 18th, 2017 11:34am
I have a friend named Angela...
Sat, March 18th, 2017 12:20pm
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=-O. Oh shit....dont tell her im stalking her and writing a book aboutnher life =-O
Sat, March 18th, 2017 5:28am
amazing!!!
This is so good!!!
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Hahahah thanks i appreciate the comment. Thank you much
Sun, March 19th, 2017 2:23pm
Great story.
By the way can you check out my story, i have just started writting and i know that im not good but could you please rate it
Thanks.
The writing is great. Vocabulary is also great. I read the first paragraph and had to right a comment, anyway good job and I'll follow this story.
Tue, March 21st, 2017 2:12am
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Hahahaha thank you i appreciate the comment .
Mon, March 20th, 2017 8:17pm
really very great story..i appreciate your writing style. please go through my writings and tell me what else i need to put in my piece of writings.
Tue, March 21st, 2017 3:39pm
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Hahaha thanks gor the comment i definently will
Wed, March 22nd, 2017 6:14am
Very engaging read! I look forward to where you take this :)
Sat, March 25th, 2017 4:21pm
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Thanks for the commen KC i hope you keep reading hahahaha
Sun, March 26th, 2017 8:51pm
Fascinating start. Your descriptions are crisp and clear and flow beautifully with their emotions. You have me wondering why Syd's mother believes she's devil spawn, lol. I liked the setting so far and chuckled when Carmen made her dramatic entry, even if it was just her phone, lol. Your writing is easy to follow and for me left nothing lacking.Brilliant chapter!
Sun, March 26th, 2017 1:36pm
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I take pride in my descripions because that my fav part of any story i read so thank you for the compliment :) im happy you already like Carmens characteristics. I hope you read on because i have alot planned for this story.
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Kossettes
Hello author if you have time to spent read vrin it made by me idk if its good enough comment your thoughts if possible
Sun, April 2nd, 2017 2:34pm
This is so well written. I am excited to continue on....
Mon, April 3rd, 2017 7:25pm
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and by all mean keep reading on there much more to come hahahha
Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:22pm
the story is amazing. I'm impressed, love the beginning
Wed, April 5th, 2017 2:59pm
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Hahahah Thank you soo much for the comment ;)
Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:21pm
Interesting... Family dynamics are always useful to understand to help define characters' personalities and motivations, so I like the way you've introduced these characters by showing us them interacting as a family :-) The opening few paragraphs are also great in providing such a stark contrast to the darkness and destruction of the prologue... Good job!
Wed, April 19th, 2017 4:32pm
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Hi Amy
Im glad you enjoyed the start. I hope you read .
Yeah i enjoy devloping my charcters as much as possible just so that when the stort starts to officially intensify the reader can focus more on the sublte changes in their character and be more invested with whats going on around rhem. Ive been expirimenting with it so i hope you can leave some helpful crituques along the way.
Thank you
I'm not exactly the best at critiquing something, but I know when something is good when I see it. I love the flow, the characters work so well, it all kinda... comes together, I suppose. I really like this chapter, gonna keep reading. Nicely done.
Thu, April 20th, 2017 2:00pm
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Thanx for the read I hope you enjoy the story.
Thu, April 20th, 2017 5:36pm
I love how the story has lot's of detail. It's tells us what's going on so well and it help's introduce the charceter's in a nicer way than just simply just giving out their details. I've only read chapter on 1 so far but I hope I get to see more flashbacks from the charcters in the future. I want to know how became who they are in fuller detail. In other words, keep writing! :)
Sat, April 22nd, 2017 3:40pm
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Hahhahahaahaha thank you for the read and I'm happy you enjoyed it, I hope you do keep reading and enoying the work. :)
Sun, April 23rd, 2017 12:04am
OMG, you are so awesome, you are like my new role model
Amazing, younPlease keep it up
and if you get a chance please review my work, would love to get a review back you
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This right here :'( this is the greatest comment ive ever gotten.....it touched my heart to read these amazing words :'( this commebts like this are the reason why i write this is the reason....where i find my motiviation from commebts that express such emotional responces to my writing
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I can die happy knowing that this is how you feel when you read my work.