Schisms

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Writers Rift

A schism, the division of opposing forces born into the everyday lives of the people of Allenville and leaving them ripping at the seams of their souls. Follow the story of beauty and fear that unfolds around the inhabitants of the small town of Allenville and discover what might have lead to its grisly fate.

Table of Contents

5 months later

5 months later this how it ended.... Read Chapter

A Happy Family

Sydney begins her morning with her father and mother. Read Chapter

Flicker....

Kara spends the morning getting her eccentric mother and moody teen sister ready for the morning. Read Chapter

Friends......

A look into the life of several people in Allenville as the story begins to unfold.

Author note: When you read this please tell me if the editing is off I don't feel as though I edited this chapter to the best of y ability. Read Chapter

Chrissy & Jenna

Chrissy and Jenna are two roommates, they work at a diner, they live a normal lifestyle and ate preparing for a a trip and outside their door a possible danger lurks in wait. Read Chapter

Bite....

Tyler a young by goes through a harrowing experience as he sits up at home in the early morning. Read Chapter

Some Strange Event

I take you to the world of Schisms in the present day, at the time when Alenville is burning.
In Miami, FL an woman watches as a stranger sits in to the center of her ruined living room. Read Chapter

Amanda?

She awakens speaking with Them and they speak back, they tell her what her name is, who she is, but who are They and who is that They? Read Chapter

Otters.....?

Allenville elementary is out in the city zoo
a young girl is out with her mother and she wants to see the otters
in the distance a figure is watching. Read Chapter

Carmen's love

It is a day of school, Carmen and Syd are together and they are enjoying the day. Read Chapter

Wasps and weirds moments

Chandra could not stand being near Sydney and that bitch Carmen so she isolates herself. finding solace in an abandoned portable building.
and something else. Read Chapter

Crying and Sorrow

If this one is not very well edited tell me. Read Chapter


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Recent Comments

Meebee

Sat, March 18th, 2017 2:18am

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This right here :'( this is the greatest comment ive ever gotten.....it touched my heart to read these amazing words :'( this commebts like this are the reason why i write this is the reason....where i find my motiviation from commebts that express such emotional responces to my writing

Thank you mee bee you have sincerelt touched my heart

I can die happy knowing that this is how you feel when you read my work.

Fri, March 17th, 2017 7:37pm

Meebee

Oh my Lord - I really didn't mean to post that. I was clicking buttons and assumed it wouldn't just send a blank message... Boy, was I wrong. That comment made me crack up though - you have a wonderful writing style, too! I shall never click random buttons again and will definitely be following this story!

Sat, March 18th, 2017 3:03am

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Those damned buttons ruining everybodies lives . being all confuisng and what not lol jk

Hahahahadyeah dont worry it was hilarious even when i thought you were trolling me though hahahaha

Thank you for reading and commenting lol

Fri, March 17th, 2017 8:11pm

tenchoe

i really liked how it began but then i kinda got lost in the middle like i couldn't understand what was going on because everything was happening so fast. But really a wonderful job

Sat, March 18th, 2017 11:26am

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Hahahah yeah sorry about that it transitions
Thank you for reading and commenting.

Sat, March 18th, 2017 4:31am

tenchoe

you are welcome. i will be looking forward to your story

Sat, March 18th, 2017 11:34am

Bruvton

I have a friend named Angela...

Sat, March 18th, 2017 12:20pm

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=-O. Oh shit....dont tell her im stalking her and writing a book aboutnher life =-O

Sat, March 18th, 2017 5:28am

Sudipsaint

amazing!!!
This is so good!!!

Sun, March 19th, 2017 9:20pm

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Hahahah thanks i appreciate the comment. Thank you much

Sun, March 19th, 2017 2:23pm

nova_k

Great story.
By the way can you check out my story, i have just started writting and i know that im not good but could you please rate it
Thanks.

Mon, March 20th, 2017 4:53pm

Ink and parchment

The writing is great. Vocabulary is also great. I read the first paragraph and had to right a comment, anyway good job and I'll follow this story.

Tue, March 21st, 2017 2:12am

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Hahahaha thank you i appreciate the comment .

Mon, March 20th, 2017 8:17pm

bhaavikaa9

really very great story..i appreciate your writing style. please go through my writings and tell me what else i need to put in my piece of writings.

Tue, March 21st, 2017 3:39pm

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Hahaha thanks gor the comment i definently will

Wed, March 22nd, 2017 6:14am

KCNiemi

Very engaging read! I look forward to where you take this :)

Sat, March 25th, 2017 4:21pm

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Thanks for the commen KC i hope you keep reading hahahaha

Sun, March 26th, 2017 8:51pm

Miss Midnight

Fascinating start. Your descriptions are crisp and clear and flow beautifully with their emotions. You have me wondering why Syd's mother believes she's devil spawn, lol. I liked the setting so far and chuckled when Carmen made her dramatic entry, even if it was just her phone, lol. Your writing is easy to follow and for me left nothing lacking.Brilliant chapter!

Sun, March 26th, 2017 1:36pm

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I take pride in my descripions because that my fav part of any story i read so thank you for the compliment :) im happy you already like Carmens characteristics. I hope you read on because i have alot planned for this story.

XoXo

Kossettes

Sun, March 26th, 2017 8:41pm

LeuxAvery

Hello author if you have time to spent read vrin it made by me idk if its good enough comment your thoughts if possible

Sun, April 2nd, 2017 2:34pm

Kaitydid

This is so well written. I am excited to continue on....

Mon, April 3rd, 2017 7:25pm

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I'm glad you enjoyed it and by all mean keep reading on there much more to come hahahha

Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:22pm

Essara

the story is amazing. I'm impressed, love the beginning

Wed, April 5th, 2017 2:59pm

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Hahahah Thank you soo much for the comment ;)

Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:21pm

Amy R. Beckett

Interesting... Family dynamics are always useful to understand to help define characters' personalities and motivations, so I like the way you've introduced these characters by showing us them interacting as a family :-) The opening few paragraphs are also great in providing such a stark contrast to the darkness and destruction of the prologue... Good job!

Wed, April 19th, 2017 4:32pm

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Hi Amy
Im glad you enjoyed the start. I hope you read .

Yeah i enjoy devloping my charcters as much as possible just so that when the stort starts to officially intensify the reader can focus more on the sublte changes in their character and be more invested with whats going on around rhem. Ive been expirimenting with it so i hope you can leave some helpful crituques along the way.

Thank you

Fri, April 21st, 2017 11:29am

Samuel Exalt

I'm not exactly the best at critiquing something, but I know when something is good when I see it. I love the flow, the characters work so well, it all kinda... comes together, I suppose. I really like this chapter, gonna keep reading. Nicely done.

Thu, April 20th, 2017 2:00pm

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Thanx for the read I hope you enjoy the story.

Thu, April 20th, 2017 5:36pm

MultiMel260

I love how the story has lot's of detail. It's tells us what's going on so well and it help's introduce the charceter's in a nicer way than just simply just giving out their details. I've only read chapter on 1 so far but I hope I get to see more flashbacks from the charcters in the future. I want to know how became who they are in fuller detail. In other words, keep writing! :)

Sat, April 22nd, 2017 3:40pm

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Hahhahahaahaha thank you for the read and I'm happy you enjoyed it, I hope you do keep reading and enoying the work. :)

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 12:04am

kashu setia 786

OMG, you are so awesome, you are like my new role model
Amazing, younPlease keep it up
and if you get a chance please review my work, would love to get a review back you

Sun, April 23rd, 2017 2:15pm

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