Schisms

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Book by: Kossettes Novellettes Pathetic

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Status: In Progress | Genre: Thrillers | House: Writers Rift

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A schism, the division of opposing forces born into the everyday lives of the people of Allenville and leaving them ripping at the seams of their souls. Follow the story of beauty and fear that unfolds around the inhabitants of the small town of Allenville and discover what might have lead to its grisly fate.

Thrillers death novel story thriller kossette

Prolog (ver.1)

5 months later

Submitted: March 13, 2017

5 months later this how it ended.... Read Chapter

Chapter 1 (ver.1)

A Happy Family

Submitted: March 17, 2017

Sydney begins her morning with her father and mother. Read Chapter

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

Flicker....

Submitted: March 19, 2017

Kara spends the morning getting her eccentric mother and moody teen sister ready for the morning. Read Chapter

Chapter 3 (ver.1)

Friends......

Submitted: March 24, 2017

A look into the life of several people in Allenville as the story begins to unfold.

Author note: When you read this please tell me if the editing is off I don't feel as though I edited this chapter to the best of y ability. Read Chapter

Chapter 4 (ver.1)

Chrissy & Jenna

Submitted: March 28, 2017

Chrissy and Jenna are two roommates, they work at a diner, they live a normal lifestyle and ate preparing for a a trip and outside their door a possible danger lurks in wait. Read Chapter

Chapter 5 (ver.1)

Bite....

Submitted: April 03, 2017

Tyler a young by goes through a harrowing experience as he sits up at home in the early morning. Read Chapter

Chapter 6 (ver.1)

Some Strange Event

Submitted: April 06, 2017

I take you to the world of Schisms in the present day, at the time when Alenville is burning.
In Miami, FL an woman watches as a stranger sits in to the center of her ruined living room. Read Chapter

Chapter 7 (ver.1)

Amanda?

Submitted: April 16, 2017

She awakens speaking with Them and they speak back, they tell her what her name is, who she is, but who are They and who is that They? Read Chapter

Chapter 8 (ver.1)

Otters.....?

Submitted: April 21, 2017

Allenville elementary is out in the city zoo
a young girl is out with her mother and she wants to see the otters
in the distance a figure is watching. Read Chapter

Chapter 9 (ver.1)

Carmen's love

Submitted: June 10, 2017

It is a day of school, Carmen and Syd are together and they are enjoying the day. Read Chapter

Chapter 10 (ver.1)

Wasps and weirds moments

Submitted: June 11, 2017

Chandra could not stand being near Sydney and that bitch Carmen so she isolates herself. finding solace in an abandoned portable building.
and something else. Read Chapter

Chapter 11 (ver.1)

Crying and Sorrow

Submitted: June 14, 2017

If this one is not very well edited tell me. Read Chapter

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Meebee

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Fri, March 17th, 2017 7:18pm

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Fri, March 17th, 2017 7:37pm

This right here :'( this is the greatest comment ive ever gotten.....it touched my heart to read these amazing words :'( this commebts like this are the reason why i write this is the reason....where i find my motiviation from commebts that express such emotional responces to my writing

Thank you mee bee you have sincerelt touched my heart

I can die happy knowing that this is how you feel when you read my work.

Meebee

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Fri, March 17th, 2017 8:03pm

Oh my Lord - I really didn't mean to post that. I was clicking buttons and assumed it wouldn't just send a blank message... Boy, was I wrong. That comment made me crack up though - you have a wonderful writing style, too! I shall never click random buttons again and will definitely be following this story!

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Fri, March 17th, 2017 8:11pm

Those damned buttons ruining everybodies lives . being all confuisng and what not lol jk

Hahahahadyeah dont worry it was hilarious even when i thought you were trolling me though hahahaha

Thank you for reading and commenting lol

tenchoe

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Sat, March 18th, 2017 4:26am

i really liked how it began but then i kinda got lost in the middle like i couldn't understand what was going on because everything was happening so fast. But really a wonderful job

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Sat, March 18th, 2017 4:31am

Hahahah yeah sorry about that it transitions
Thank you for reading and commenting.

tenchoe

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Sat, March 18th, 2017 4:34am

you are welcome. i will be looking forward to your story

Bruvton

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Sat, March 18th, 2017 5:20am

I have a friend named Angela...

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Sat, March 18th, 2017 5:28am

=-O. Oh shit....dont tell her im stalking her and writing a book aboutnher life =-O

Sudipsaint

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Sun, March 19th, 2017 2:20pm

amazing!!!
This is so good!!!

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Sun, March 19th, 2017 2:23pm

Hahahah thanks i appreciate the comment. Thank you much

nova_k

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Mon, March 20th, 2017 9:53am

Great story.
By the way can you check out my story, i have just started writting and i know that im not good but could you please rate it
Thanks.

Ink and parchment

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Mon, March 20th, 2017 7:12pm

The writing is great. Vocabulary is also great. I read the first paragraph and had to right a comment, anyway good job and I'll follow this story.

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Mon, March 20th, 2017 8:17pm

Hahahaha thank you i appreciate the comment .

bhaavikaa9

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Tue, March 21st, 2017 8:39am

really very great story..i appreciate your writing style. please go through my writings and tell me what else i need to put in my piece of writings.

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Wed, March 22nd, 2017 6:14am

Hahaha thanks gor the comment i definently will

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Thu, March 23rd, 2017 6:35pm

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Thu, March 23rd, 2017 6:38pm

uuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh?

KCNiemi

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Sat, March 25th, 2017 9:21am

Very engaging read! I look forward to where you take this :)

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Sun, March 26th, 2017 8:51pm

Thanks for the commen KC i hope you keep reading hahahaha

Miss Midnight

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Sun, March 26th, 2017 6:36am

Fascinating start. Your descriptions are crisp and clear and flow beautifully with their emotions. You have me wondering why Syd's mother believes she's devil spawn, lol. I liked the setting so far and chuckled when Carmen made her dramatic entry, even if it was just her phone, lol. Your writing is easy to follow and for me left nothing lacking.Brilliant chapter!

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Sun, March 26th, 2017 8:41pm

I take pride in my descripions because that my fav part of any story i read so thank you for the compliment :) im happy you already like Carmens characteristics. I hope you read on because i have alot planned for this story.

XoXo

Kossettes

LeuxAvery

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Sun, April 2nd, 2017 7:34am

Hello author if you have time to spent read vrin it made by me idk if its good enough comment your thoughts if possible

Kaitydid

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Mon, April 3rd, 2017 12:25pm

This is so well written. I am excited to continue on....

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Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:22pm

I'm glad you enjoyed it and by all mean keep reading on there much more to come hahahha

Essara

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Wed, April 5th, 2017 7:59am

the story is amazing. I'm impressed, love the beginning

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Wed, April 5th, 2017 9:21pm

Hahahah Thank you soo much for the comment ;)

Amy R. Beckett

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Wed, April 19th, 2017 9:32am

Interesting... Family dynamics are always useful to understand to help define characters' personalities and motivations, so I like the way you've introduced these characters by showing us them interacting as a family :-) The opening few paragraphs are also great in providing such a stark contrast to the darkness and destruction of the prologue... Good job!

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Fri, April 21st, 2017 11:29am

Hi Amy
Im glad you enjoyed the start. I hope you read .

Yeah i enjoy devloping my charcters as much as possible just so that when the stort starts to officially intensify the reader can focus more on the sublte changes in their character and be more invested with whats going on around rhem. Ive been expirimenting with it so i hope you can leave some helpful crituques along the way.

Thank you

Samuel Exalt

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 7:00am

I'm not exactly the best at critiquing something, but I know when something is good when I see it. I love the flow, the characters work so well, it all kinda... comes together, I suppose. I really like this chapter, gonna keep reading. Nicely done.

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 5:36pm

Thanx for the read I hope you enjoy the story.

Edyson

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 9:33am

It was a good read. Thank you for posting this story.

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 5:35pm

Thanks for reading :)

Daydream51

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 4:15pm

I have a cousin named Angela... But besides the point, I really like this chapter and how these characters interact as a family but I'm also sort of confused by Angela like why she thinks so lowly of herself when she knows that she has a family that loves her; it's kind of contradicting...? I'm not sure but I just got confused there but other than that, I liked this chapter!
-Daydream51

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Thu, April 20th, 2017 5:26pm

Hahahaha thank you for all of the comments I really appreciate it,
I will say keep on reading, and of ocurse the comments are always welcome,
Yes she is contradicting to the rest of the story, she's .......special I guess hahaahaha I wont say much other than that

Thanks again for reading Daydream :)

MultiMel260

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Sat, April 22nd, 2017 8:40am

I love how the story has lot's of detail. It's tells us what's going on so well and it help's introduce the charceter's in a nicer way than just simply just giving out their details. I've only read chapter on 1 so far but I hope I get to see more flashbacks from the charcters in the future. I want to know how became who they are in fuller detail. In other words, keep writing! :)

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Sun, April 23rd, 2017 12:04am

Hahhahahaahaha thank you for the read and I'm happy you enjoyed it, I hope you do keep reading and enoying the work. :)