The Glorious Queen

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Review Chain
Part 2 of The Broken Sky. I would appreciate feedback on this story also the others. Thank you for reading my work. I enjoy writing very much and hope one day I become well enough to be published.

Submitted: March 23, 2017

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The queen of day, so glorious in her blue and bright palace. Majestic, as she gives light to the world. Others will be experiencing the king that I miss very much. She steals his glory, until his mighty forces, and magical colors come back in victory. The queen smiles down at all, and though she may sometimes hide behind the drifting clouds, she plays, and laughs, until it is her time to leave. I climb up the tall ladder to her palace, and her appearance is too blinding to look at. I sit, my back faced to her, as she frowns. She so longs for my affection, but she shows too bright to look at. I know that she is kind, but I so long to see. She sings as to gain my attention, and she knows that she is too bright. By the time the king is back at the throne, the queen has lost hope of ever being the queen again. I assure her never to give up. I know that we need her, and love her. I blow a kiss as she slowly disappears. The king, though he dislikes the queen, feels sorrow for her. Now by this time, it is time for the king to have his throne for the short night.


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