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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: House of Ghosts
Dwiyn finds himself in the strangest of circumstances.

Submitted: April 02, 2017

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Submitted: April 02, 2017



 Wake up, Dwiyn.

Dwiyn wakes to find himself sitting in white, perfectly cube room.  There are no windows, doors, or furniture.  Four walls, six surfaces, one human, and nothing else.  There is no light, but he can still see clearly.  He blinks twice before panic sets in.  He scuttles backwards, colliding with one of the identical walls and hyperventilating with wide eyes.

"What's this?  Where am I?  What's going on?!"

Black words bleed from the wall opposite of Dwiyn's huddling form.

Look into the Seventh Surface.  It is the only way out.

Dwiyn squints his eyes.  He counts the walls, ceiling, and floor, only accounting for six.

"But... there's only six.  Stop screwing with me!"

The words dry and fade away.  In their place bleeds a single word.


The wall from which these words form peel away like old paint to reveal a steel door.  He cautiously rises from his seat and approaches the ominous portal.  He trusts what may lay beyond as much as he trusts the black messages - that is, to say, not at all.

"Why should I trust you?"

You may stay here forever, if you wish.

Dwiyn can no longer withstand the claustrophobic confines of the room, and so reluctantly pushes open the gray, metal door.  An endless hallway waits for him beyond the portal.  He slowly makes his way down the unlit passage with the room at his back his only source of light.  Just as the glow behind him fails to illuminate his path, he finds himself at wooden door.  He grabs the handle and attempts to open it, but to no avail.

"It's locked!"

Words carve themselves into the wooden surface.

It is rude to enter without knocking.

Dwiyn grinds his teeth and clenches his fists at the words.

"You're kidding..."

The words smooth themselves away and carve upon the door a new message.


Dwiyn emits a low growl and finally knocks twice on the door.  It opens for him, revealing a room like the first.  This time a small chair sits at its center with its back to Dwiyn, facing a window that reveals nothing but darkness on the other side.  On the back of the chair another message is carved.

Take a seat.  Enjoy the show.

Dwiyn takes a seat and waits.  His arms are crossed and his brow furrowed.  His teeth grind impatiently.

"What now?"

A fog covers the surface of the window before him, and on its surface another message scribes itself.

 As the chair said: Enjoy the show.

Light blasts itself from the other side of the window.  Dwiyn covers his eyes at the sudden illumination until his sight adjusts to the glow.  From the other side of window he sees a tall, skinny figure standing just beyond.  It stares at Dwiyn behind a napsack with four eye holes.  The rest of its humanoid shape is a silhouette of shadow.  It places a hand on the window in utter silence.

Dwiyn turns to run, only to find the wooden door missing.  There is nothing left in the room but him, the window, and his host on the other side.  With its other hand it points four fingers at the eye holes on its mask of cloth, and then to something behind it.  Dwiyn sweats profusely at the sight, awaiting with uneasy breath.

Dwiyn jumps from the sound of a thunderous slam against the window.  Something dark and wriggling protrudes from the masked shadow's stomach.  With a jerking motion the tendril flings back, and with it the impaled figure.  Dwiyn hears a terribly audible crunching from beyond what he can see in the dark of the other room.  His heart sinks into his stomach and gulps hard.

"What the..."

Another slam shakes the window, this time with the force of dozens of more tendrils in the company of a hundred slit eyes.  They writhe and slurp hungrily on the glass surface.  Dwiyn screams and tumbles to the back of the room.  He cries and rocks himself in a fetale position.

"I wanna go home...  I wanna go home...  Let me go home!"

With every thud against the glass, more and more words form a message on the floor at his feet.

You can never go home.

Dwiyn sobs uncontrollably as snot and tears mix on his face.  He begs at whoever makes these messages.

"Why are you doing this to me?"

The tendrils pound much harder and louder from beyond the window.  With each resounding shake of the room the message erases itself and forms a lengthy reply.

I am the author.  You are my main character; this is your story.  Before this, you never existed.  As we speak, others read of your suffering and do nothing but read. 

Dwiyn tries to recount his life, but can find no memory of what happened before he found himself here.  He realizes that, if what these messages say are true, he has no past because this author never wrote one for him.  All hope in him crumbles away as the window begins to crack.

I shall end your suffering now.  Farewell, Dwiyn - and have a happy Bad Ending.

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