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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
Finished but NOT fully revised. Any and all comments are appreciated, no matter how small or menial you may feel they are.
Val'Rathii (Book 1):
Val'Rathii is set in a fantasy word where demons and angels wage a never ending war behind the scenes, kept at bay by the Vail'Drathii empire. The mortal world is at peace until a tyrant ascends to the throne. After rising against and overthrowing the Vail'Drathii the world is in chaos. Amelia heir to a powerful king, with a fate she can't understand. Freidricht the exiled son of a tyrant, Insanely powerful and flat out insane, Struggles against his own chaotic nature. General Braum is a beloved hero, abandoned as a child he was taken in by a powerful paladin who trained him as a warrior. Now a man Braum is tasked with killing his oath-brother, who had sacrificed their soul to save Braum. Along the way they struggle to keep their heads above water in a world without direction.
A world in turmoil, a band of knights, a legendary hero, a living nightmare, a trio of gods, a Demon lord, Shadowy organizations, a princess and a sacrifice. Can love exist in a world built on revenge? What happened to the Veil'Drathii?

Table of Contents

The calm.

Submitted: April 03, 2017

Introduction of main characters.
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  “I once loved someone, Never again. It wasn’t that it hurt It’s just everyone should get their chance. I... Read Chapter

The Exile.

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  -6- “So it was a man, right?” the soldier named Siffar asked his companions “That is no man! It speaks... Read Chapter

Dragon king.

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“The elves are a very interesting people Worry free and obsessed with celebration But very interesting” -The wanderer, Cy... Read Chapter

Farewell and Hello

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“No matter your strength Some battles cannot be won Some cannot be lost Some are not worth fighting And some cannot be ... Read Chapter

To be in love,To be greedy,To be a Dragon.

Submitted: April 03, 2017

“Missing you is my hobby Caring for you is my job Making you happy is my duty Loving you is my life.” -anonymous ... Read Chapter

Master and madness

Submitted: April 03, 2017

-24- Freidricht awoke Shackled. His wings were bound by steel gyves that were wrapped around the individual bones holding him painf... Read Chapter

Encounters and Embarrassment.

Submitted: April 03, 2017

-26- Freidricht was enjoying the hot springs in an elven bath house with Traist, Darius, and Val’lo, as a sign of Skin ... Read Chapter

To know Despair, To know emptiness, To know defeat.

Submitted: April 04, 2017

Do not shun mead Yet drink moderately Speak sensibly or be silent None will hold you to be uncivil If you retire to bed e... Read Chapter

Sovereign to Servant and back again.

Submitted: April 04, 2017

Death is nothing to us for when we are death has not come and when death has come we are not -33- Braum was sitting o... Read Chapter

Homecoming celebration.

Submitted: April 04, 2017

-40- After celebrating, a short rest and going to a tailor to get clothes for Ceil, Freidricht called a  summit to determin... Read Chapter


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-42- Freidricht was still alive, however he was on the brink. Amelia could feel sensations from him unlike any she had felt from him ... Read Chapter

A dragon named Despair.

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-46- South-East of Halkyr Amelia had an army ready for war. Her personal force was composed of the V.elite and 300,000 other soldiers... Read Chapter

Hope, Fate and Cruelty

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  -49- Amelia and her allies marched into Halkyr. She had imagined a parade while Freidricht was alive. The harsh reality wa... Read Chapter


Submitted: April 12, 2017

The is is the start of the second half of Val'Rathii: Mortalis Certamen, Revival. I am currently re writing the last few chapters of part one and tying up loose ends so as to create a neat little package rather than the grammar ridden mess you have suffered thus-far. Thank you for suffering through what Read Chapter

to make a Deal with a Devil

Submitted: April 12, 2017

-55- Freidricht had been sitting on his throne for no more than an hour when again a mortal called his name. “I gave him a warning ... Read Chapter

Time and mind, when twisted.

Submitted: April 12, 2017

-58- cave, pools of rippling water reflected light sending a writhing and waving pattern unto the surfaces. An opal vein ran under th... Read Chapter

Tying up loose ends (True Ending)

Submitted: May 08, 2017

Spoiler alert: This contains the true ending and things that will be covered in the next book as well as several explanations. This is not however a summary of the next book as the perspective is
from a different characters view, one that isn't even mentioned in this book.
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Tying up loose ends (Powers)

Submitted: April 12, 2017

Clarification for anything that may seem strange. Message me about anything I failed to explain and I'll post an explanation or Further explain it.
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