So, Little Girl

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is my second work of art! Tell me what you think in the comments.

Close your eyes,

Take a deep breath,

Those flowers,

That pretty 'lil wreath,

They'll never fade...


Rose, lycoris, lilac...

Your name is prettier than any.

Now look back,

Mirrors don't lie.

That's why you've filled 'memory'.


Now, wipe those tears,

Smile, you're gonna meet the crowd.

The whole time I'll be near,

Watching you get your crown.


'Cos we all know...

Mirrors don't lie.

Smell the flowers,

Step into the spotlight.


One step, two,

Just one more or two.

We'll show Fate,

You whom he thought dead.


Because, girl, you brought life,

Because, girl, you've defied science.

Because, girl, you were you.


((So, girls, just because the world hates you, it doesn't mean you're the problem. :))

Submitted: April 18, 2017

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suchismita Mishra

Your work is impressive. The content and the topic of content as well.
I look forward to read more of your work.

Mon, April 24th, 2017 9:58am


Thank You so much!! I really appreciate this!

Fri, May 19th, 2017 6:29pm

Kenan Hodžić

I wanted to see what else youve written so far and this is another really good poem. You should know that this is my main field, romance and lost love, so I know the feel, which is present in here. A nice poem and an even nicer message

Sat, May 20th, 2017 1:55am


I never really realized that it actually makes sense to others, because when I wrote my first poem and showed it to my brother, he just brushed it off. >.< Thank you, your comments help a lot!

Fri, May 19th, 2017 8:49pm

Aira crimson

Beautiful poem, it was so wonderful. Loved it.

Sun, August 13th, 2017 9:25am


Thank you! I wrote this a while back; Definitely didn't think someone would read it. XP

Thu, August 17th, 2017 2:49am

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