Captain Marvel - Movie

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: Booksie Classic
Premise: A fighter pilot with new abilities is pursued relentlessly by a secret alien threat.
Want/Need: To prevent anyone else from getting hurt because of her own powerlessness.
Theme: Being able to hold it together, where another would have given up, is real Strength.

Submitted: April 27, 2017

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Warning: Fan Fiction!

 

 

Outline for Captain Marvels movie:

 

  • The Xandarian Head Medical Scientist keeps Carol alive. Accompanies her to Earth.

  • Xandarian is monitoring Carol, gets upset when someone tampers with the equipment.

  • The Xandarian is accused of bashing another doctor over the head, and is locked up.

  • While Carol is in her coma still, a specialist transfers in to observe her condition.

  • Nick Fury shows up to interrogate the Xandarian Scientist, but learns nothing?!

  • Xandarian is asked about the medallion found on him, but he avoids the question.

  • Nick asks an agent to look for the object used to bash the doctor over the head.

  • Nick Fury thinks the medallion is a type of data storage and tasks an agent to inspect it.

  • Shortly after, Carol comes out of her coma. Her eyes hurt a lot, but pain subsides.

  • Nick Fury checks on Carol. Carol wants to know all that happened, Nick informs her.

  • Nick has an exchange with the Specialist, who seems to dislike the Xandarian, but never met.

  • Specialist gives her medicine, in an insulin kit, so she can administer it herself, regularly.

  • Specialist tells Carol she will need to get a psych eval as well before returning to active status.

  • Carol spends a session with Dr. Karla Sofen before getting a clean bill of mental health.

  • Viewers see Carol's Not really ready to return to duty, space battle, but gets the OK to do so.

  • Carol visits the Xandarian, thanks him. Wonders what the medallion is that Nick mentioned.

  • Xandarian is silent, before he can say, Jose pops in, drags Carol away, are already late.

  • Carol gets back into shape. Performs better than any other soldier, beating out the rest.

  • Lockers: Carol is taking her shots when Rose says, “Where can I get me some of that?!”

  • Rest of the fellas laugh after Rose says that, implying those shots might be steroids.

  • Carol responds wittily, in a slightly agitated tone, “Around the corner, and Up.. Yours!”.

  • Rose’s pissed, slams the locker, and turns to Carol, says, “We’ll see who wins Tomorrow!”

  • Jose overhears the conversation, walks up to Rose and says, “Yes We Will, Ladies!”

  • Sergeant enters. Rose doesn’t respond, just leaves with the rest of the pack of hotheads.

  • Carol grabs her bag, hand starts to shake a bit. She looks concerned, but it stops shaking.

  • “I can fight my own battles!”, Carol says to Jose, pissed her hand was shaking, makes a fist.

  • “I know.”, Jose concurs, “That wasn’t to protect you, I just needed a reason to tell ‘em off!”

  • Carol calms down, says, “Liar!”, as she slams a bag into Jose’s stomach before leaving.

  • Jose warily asks, “You, ready for tomorrow?”, not knowing if Carol has fully recovered.

  • Carol shakily replies, “Better than ever!”, knowing this race might be a game changer.

  • “Rose would drink her own pee, if it’d make her Cooler than you!”, Jose says, emphatically.

  • Carol did notice her peers look at her differently now, as if they knew about The Avengers.

  • Carol’s stops walking, in a low tone says, “I’m Not cool at all!”, looking at her hand again.

  • Jose yells, “You know they’re gonna Cheat right?!” Carol hears him and resumes walking.

  • Carol yells, “I Know!”, doesn't respond for a few, says, ”That’s what makes it more Fun!”

  • “Besides, I got you watching my back...”, Carol concludes, “SuperStar!”, Jose’s call-sign.

  • Jose responds, “Yea, you right! WarBird!”, giggles. Other fellas groan, throw jock’s at him.

  • That same evening, we can’t tell who, but someone is tampering with one of the jet planes.

 

  • Next day, Carol doesn’t want to be late for the competition, but forgets her good luck charm.

  • Carol’s luck charm, her dad’s buckle, is in her dorm room, which she is sharing with someone, and the door jams sometimes, and needs a push, so Carol impatiently pushes a bit harder.

  • Carol thinks the door is really jammed and gives it all she has and the door swings open.

  • Carol’s new roommate, Jess, runs out of the shower, ready to strike, then sighs in relief.

  • “It’s just you!?”, Jess says in a relieved tone to Carol, “You almost gave me a heart attack!”

  • Carol, a bit flustered from pushing on the door, replies, “Sorry! Door was really jammed!”

  • Carol grabs whatever she forgot and runs out and says, “Gotta Run! See you later!”

  • Jess proceeds to close the door, then sees the deadbolt is still locked, and the other matching piece was ripped out of the wall, and ponders, “What do they feed her there?”

  • As Carol enters the lockers to get changed, she spots the Specialist whispering with Rose.

  • Specialist sees Carol and makes his way to her, “I brought you your new medication!”

  • Carol takes the insulin vials, and asks, “Do I still need to take these? I feel great Doc!”

  • “I’m afraid so. You need to take this right away, or you might not be able to compete today!”

  • “Doctors Orders!”, the Specialist says, then adds, “Rose was wondering if you weren’t up to competing today. Seemed worried you might not be able to keep up, and stay behind her till the end, if you didn’t take your medicine today.

  • "I told her you are at 99%, just a 1% off!”, Specialist says, excusing her, if she were to lose.

  • “Rose is so thoughtful!", Carol says, disturbed look. "I’ll try not to disappoint her, and go in front, so she doesn't have to look back to see if I’m OK!”, Carol says sarcastically.

  • As Carol tries to pick up her bag, her hand trembles slightly. Looks at her hand for a second.

  • Without a moment to spare, Carol takes her shot of medicine, and rushes to get to the plane.

  • Jose is waiting for her at the jet plane, asks Carol, “Where have you been? I was worried!”

  • “Forgot my lucky charm!”, Carol says, as she hastily checks her gear, then Jose’s gear, too.

  • As Carol moves, her arm grazes Jose, and gives him a strong static shock. He ouches.

  • Jose remarks, “You needs to keep those arms away, or I’ll be covered all in blisters.”

  • They get in the jet plane, check their instruments, just sitting there waiting for the Ok to go.

  • Jose asks Carol all about the Avengers, the mission, and who she thought was cool.

  • Carol says, “Captain America, but he doesn’t go by that name anymore.”

  • Jose is sad he hasn’t seen Captain’s name in the news. Says he gave him courage.

  • Jose asks, “You really want to win this competition, and be a NASA space pilot that bad?”

  • Carol responds, “Yea! More than anything!”, pauses, “My dad wanted to explore space!”

  • Jose is surprised to hear Carol bring up her father. Realizes this means everything to her.

  • They get the Ok to take off, don’t start well, touch and go for a while, but improve.

  • Jose takes out his portable music player, and starts “FAME”. (video)

  • Jose mixed it himself, more electric guitar and fast paced, sings along with the chorus.

  • Carol pushes herself to the max, and catches up to Rose, who is in the lead still.

  • Rose's co-pilot assures her that they won't be able to overtake them, grinning as he says it.

  • Jose is telling Carol what to do, reading the radar, but it's a bit off, are getting frustrated.

  • The battle for 1st is excruciating, but Carol takes a death defying risk, and it pays off.

  • As Carol is about the cross the finish line, she gets very dizzy, loses control of the plane.

  • Carol somehow crashes the jet plane. She ejects in time, but Jose, her friend, is killed.

  • Carol almost didn’t make it out in time if it weren’t for the luck charm she brought with her.

  • Carol had to use the buckle to pry loose the ejection mechanism as it wasn’t budging at all.

  • As Carol ejects, her helmet hits the planes overhead door, which didn’t fully open.

 

  • Carol gets admitted to the same hospital, with the plane crash bystanders, on the ground.

  • As Carol gets discharged from the hospital, while leaving, she looks at crash bystanders.

  • A little girl hovers over her injured father, laying in bed, showing him a drawing she made.

  • “Look Daddy, a rainbow!”, and the Dad tries to move to comfort the little girl, pulls stitches.

  • The nurses rush in and tell them it’s time to leave, but the little girl doesn’t want to go yet.

  • “Noo!!” she moans as she start to ball her eyes out, “I don’t want to leave! Daddy! Daddy!”

  • As Carol sees the little girl cry out, calling to her father, an emotional gut punch hits her.

  • Carol lost her good luck charm, a buckle, reminder of her dad. Searches for it. Can’t find it!

  • Carol catches a glimpse of an oval shape in the windowsill in the next room, her buckle.

  • As Carol reaches for it, a woman's voice says, "Do you always take things before asking!?"

  • Carol stops in her tracks, retracting her hand. It's not Carol's belt buckle, but a broach.

  • Carol starts to say, "Sorry. My mistake. I thought ..." "You Thought WRONG!", woman says.

  • The woman is visiting one of the patients, her son, and seems to be in a foul state.

  • The son, also a new recruit there, says, "Mom, that's Carol Danvers, one of the Aces!".

  • Mother says, "An ACE?!", in a livid tone, adds, "The one who almost got you killed!!??"

  • Carol can't defend herself, just lowers her gaze, staring into nothing, says, "I'm So Sorry!"

  • A doctor walks into the room, interrupts the conversation, asks the patient how he's doing.

  • Carol walks out, as she isn't wanted there, while the doctor is performing his rounds.

  • Doctor leaves. Mom scolds her son, "What did I say about calling me MOM around the doctor?!"

  • The son sighs, hates the idea of her flirting, but finally lets out, "Yes, Ms. Rambeau!"

  • Air Force tries to cover up the crash, to avoid public exposure, but someone leaks it out.

  • Media blames Carol, She withdraws, gets worse and worse, emotionally, physically.

  • On Carol’s birthday, Jose’s present is delivered, a Jacket (image). She gets teary eyed.

  • Carol falls asleep, is dreaming. Carol, as a teen, and her dad, are on a camping trip. When they are attacked, freezes up, is too late to save him. Her father dies, because of her.

  • Carol wakes up, grabs her father’s picture frame, and holds it close to her chest.

  • Montage begins, vocals by Brie for Behind Blue Eyes (video).

  • Later, Carol attends Jose’s funeral, replays what happened to him, because of her.

  • Carol spots Rose, and her giggling pack. After all pay their respects, Rose approaches Carol.

  • Rose hands the winning medal to Carol, says, “Here!”, as if she was intentionally pitying her.

  • Jess sees this, leaves a guy she was with, and grabs the medal and throws it in Rose’s face.

  • As Carol takes a step back and turns, a hand comes across her face and lands a loud slap!

  • Jose's older sister, never cared for Carol, says, "You did this!", with true destain in her voice.

  • Carol is frozen, no words seem to come out, not even able to apologize, just stands there.

  • Carol doesn’t stick around, grabs a bus, and just sits there, staring blankly out the window.

  • Jess tries to follow, misses the bus Carol is on, goes back to her car to pursue. She’s tailed.

  • Carol observes how cruel people are to one another, and she can’t help but get depressed.

  • After returning home alone, she is in no mood to even answer the phone, just keeps ringing.

  • Carol takes the last vial of medicine, and sprawls out on the bed. It’s only making her worse.

  • Montage ends, camera zooms out from behind Carol’s blue eyes, ever so slowly.

  • Jess returns to find Carol in a comatose state, holding Chewie (a persian cat, Ewok face).

  • Jess, who is banged up bad, immediately calls Carol’s doctor. Help arrives shortly.

  • Carol gets treated by the Specialist in a secure room at the hospital, for her safety and others.

  • Jess gets treated too, for a bad wound. Jess is on the phone, telling Nick what happened.

  • Nick asks why wasn’t she looking out for Carol, and Jess tells him, “I was ambushed!”

  • “You Hurt?”, Nick asks nonchalantly. Jess responds, “Only broke one bone in my shoulder!”

  • Nick is a little puzzled, asks Jess, “Can’t you easily handle one or two attackers!?”

  • Jess pauses for a second and replies, “Naturally! But there were more than Ten of them!”

  • Nick is silent on the other end of the line, finally says, “They know all about you, it seems!”

  • Nick asks Jess to question a witness who saw someone leaving the jet plane hangers.

  • Nick Fury visits Carol, Specialist isn’t making progress with Carol. Is only getting worse.

  • As Nick goes in the highly secure room with Carol, Nick overhears the Specialist’s assistant say, “Doctor, just a few minutes more, and she can undergo the gene mapping procedure.”

  • Specialists says to his assistant, “Finally! Now her energy won’t interfere with our scans!”

  • Nick tries to get closer, listen in on what they are saying, as he does, Bumps into a chair.

  • Specialist sees Nick, and interrupts his assistant, as he was about to say something important.

  • Specialist asks Nick how he got in, area is now restricted to Top Clearance personnel only.

  • Nick sees they really don’t want him there, somehow palms a sample vial, and leaves calmly.

  • Nick Fury tries to have the Xandarian Scientist treat her, but is even denied access to him.

  • Fury gains access somehow, and intentionally lets slip Carol was taking insulin shots.

  • Xandarian Scientist asks to examine the substance, and thinks it’s making Carol worse.

 

  • Nick Fury scrambles some agents and raids the heavily guarded room with Carol.

  • Xandarian Scientist rushes to save Carol, who is convulsing, and gets her stable.

  • Nick Fury sends agents to locate the Specialist, but he is nowhere to be found now.

  • Nick Fury asks the Xandarian Scientist what exactly were they trying to do to Carol?

  • Xandarian says, “They were trying to reverse engineer her condition, but failed!”.

  • Xandarian asks which doctor was caring for her this whole time, in a disgusted tone.

  • Nick says, "Dr. Og! He's the best Specialist we have for these circumstances!"

  • Xandarian asks to see Carol's chart, and sees the Specialists name, "Dr. Yun R. Og"!

  • "Noooo! Not possible!", the Xandarian exasperates, "He's Dead!", in pure shock.

  • Xandarian continues, “Fool, he tried to undo the work I did to subdue her true state!”

  • Nick wonders, “Doc, what state are you referring to?”, trying to make sense of her condition.

  • Xandarian softly says, “A Binary State, output of an exponential amount of unstable energy!”

  • Nick asks, “Like.. an exploding grenade?”. Xandarian, “No, like an exploding atomic bomb!”

  • Nick doesn’t believe that for a second, stares at the Xandarian, questioning his sanity!

  • Carol awakens, tries to sit up, mistakes the Xandarian for her father, still a bit drowsy.

  • Nick Fury gets a call, an Agent found the Object used to bash the doctor’s head in.

  • Nick sets the phone down, pushes the speaker button, so they both can overhear this.

  • Object has the doctor’s blood on it, different fingerprints than the Xandarian, he is innocent.

  • Agent continues to inform Nick, Carol’s plane was sabotaged, fingerprints are the same.

  • Carol isn’t sure what she heard is real. Doesn’t sink in at 1st, then breaks down, distraught.

  • Nick hands Carol her good luck charm, her dad’s buckle, found in the plane crash debris.

  • Carol takes the buckle, wipes the soot off, revealing a sun in the middle, is teary eyed.

  • Carol recalls how her dad and her would get Ice-Cream, it was her favorite time with him.

  • Xandarian gets emotional as he looks at Carol’s expression, reveals that he is Mar-Vell.

  • Nick already knows that he is a fleeing Kree Scientist, hands the medallion back to him.

  • Mar-Vell hesitates, but turns on the medallion. A hologram shows his daughter’s face.

  • Mar-Vell gets a bit teary eyed, starts to tell Nick and Carol about how he got to Xandar.

  • Mar-Vell makes parallels to Einstein, inventing a WMD, guilt ridden, had to flee his home.

  • Carol is moved by the story Mar-Vell tells, and how he failed to save his daughter.

  • Carol gets out of bed, weak still, as she wants to hug Mar-Vell for saving her, Yet Again!

  • As Carol hugs him, Mar-Vell gets a static electric shock when they come in contact.

  • Carol jokes about something bad always happening after she strongly zaps someone like that.

  • As Carol is in the process of putting her jacket on, the Specialist shoots a ray at her.

  • Mar-Vell sees him at the very last second and pushes Carol away, and gets hit instead.

  • Nick Fury returns fire, calls for backup, and proceeds to chase the Specialist down.

  • Fury loses the Specialist in a crowded hospital hall. Tasks other agents to continue looking.

  • Nick Fury hurries back, as Mar-Vell is critical, drawing his last few breaths.

  • Fury asks if the Specialist was a Dark Elf. Mar-Vell replies, “No, worse! A Scrull!”

  • Mar-Vell says, “Nick! You can’t do this alone!”, as he struggles to say this coherently.

  • “I’ve known braver men try, and Fail!”, Mar-Vell says, stressing the importance of this.

  • “I’ve seen them overtake worlds, like a parasite taking over its host!”, Mar-Vell says.

  • Nick had his suspicions, and now Mar-Vell confirmed, what he dreaded in the pit of his gut.

  • An agent might have tracked down the Specialist. Nick Fury tells them to guard the exits.

  • Nick Fury asks where the Specialists last location was over the comm, Carol overhears.

  • Nick Fury leaves. Carol wants to follow, but doesn’t want to leave Mar-Vell. She stays.

  • Mar-Vell explains to Carol, the Ray they tried to shoot her with, wouldn’t have killed her.

  • If it did hit her, would overload her system, she’d burst energy out, destroying all around.

  • If Mar-Vell didn’t move her out of the way of the Ray, Nick Fury would be dead also.

  • He explains, now that the drugs the Specialist gave her are slowly leaving her system, she might be able to ground herself, so the energy in her goes into the earth. Carol trusts him.

  • Mar-Vell is telling her this, not really knowing it will work, but suspects. Is it a white lie?

  • “I would have liked, to try, Ice Cream too-- with-- youu...”, Mar-Vell deflates his last words.

  • Mar-Vell smiles as his skin starts to turn blue. His life slowly fading away. Carol sobs.

  • Not only have they killed her best friend, which she adored, but also her Father figure.

  • As Carol gently sets Mar-Vell’s body down, anger comes over her. She wants Justice!

 

  • Nick Fury pulls the Fire Alarm in the hospital, and everyone exits in a normal fashion.

  • Nick tells an agent to review the security tapes, sees the Specialist enter the restroom.

  • Nick heads to the restroom. As he is entering, another guy exiting bumps into Nick.

  • The guy is a bit agitated, but Nick doesn’t stop him, and proceeds to check each stall.

  • As he checks the last stall, kicks the door. Same guy that bumped into Nick, is there.

  • Nick is baffled. Either they were twins or his eyes are playing tricks on him.

  • Guy in the stall looks scared, rambles on about getting assaulted by a guy that just left.

  • Nick can’t come to grips that maybe the Specialist is a shape shifter. Runs out after him.

  • After a minute or so, Nick Fury catches a glimpse of that guy as he enters the elevator.

  • Nick barely misses him, checks where it’s heading, and its up. Nick rushes up the stairs.

  • As Nick waits, with his gun drawn, and the doors open, the Guy panics and yells for help.

  • Guy is playing dumb, not knowing what Nick is talking about, then Nick recalls something.

  • The Other Guy in the stall had a blue line on his badge, like the Specialist also had.

  • “SHIT!” Nick curses aloud, as he realizes he was fooled by the Specialist back in the stall.

  • Carol searches for Nick, hoping to get to the Specialist herself, but her eyes are hurting.

  • Seems Carol got grazed by the Ray the Specialist shot at her, and is trying to cope with it.

  • Carol hears a ruckus, and it sounds like Nick Fury is shouting, “There He Is!”.

  • Even though Carol can’t see clearly, she peers around the corner to see for herself.

  • A guy Carol has never seen before, is holding a small girl hostage, kindergarten age.

  • Carol tries to see who it is and for a brief second sees that the little girl is the same one that was visiting her dad, who was hurt when Carol caused that plane crash that killed Jose.

  • Little girl fell asleep under her dad’s hospital bed when everyone was evacuating.

  • Carol takes out her weapon and jumps out just about to shoot the guy holding the girl.

  • “Let Her Go!”, Carol yells, while pointing her gun at the Guy. Guy is startled for a second.

  • As Carol yells that, she screams as a sharp pain in her eyes leaves her in agony.

  • The Guy holds up the girl in one arm as a shield, as he gets worried he is cornered.

  • The Guy sees its Carol and smirks, and says, “I see the Ray didn’t miss you after all”.

  • Carol is a bit confused how this guy knows what happened to her a bit earlier.

  • The Guy then says to Carol, “I hope that Kree Scum suffered before he Died!”

  • The Guy is less worried, as he can get past Carol, while she is in that state.

  • Nick Fury yells to Carol from the other side, but Carol isn’t really hearing him clearly.

  • As Carol is about to make sense of this, she hears Nick again, “That’s the Specialist!”

  • Carol is in a state of shock, almost frozen, as she sees the girl looking at her while balling.

  • Why is this happening to everyone around her. Carol thinks she is truly cursed.

  • The Specialist sees a portable tank of some sort not too far from where Nick Fury is.

  • “It’s already Too Late for you..”, as he aims for the tank, “..Former director of SHIELD!”

  • As the Specialist says that, he pulls the trigger, the bullet hits the tank, and it explodes.

  • Nick Fury and the rest of the Agents get thrown by the blast and most don’t get back up.

  • The blast also hits the electric wiring and the lights are flickering on and off every so often.

  • It’s up to Carol to stop the Specialist, as Nick Fury and the rest of the Agents can’t help.

  • As the Specialist is gloating after taking out Nick, Carol bum rushes him, to take him out.

  • Specialist sees her coming and knocks her in the head, she falls to the ground, on her back.

  • As Carol is trying to get back up, the Specialist puts the gun to her head and holds it there.

  • “I don’t know why he used forbidden research to save you!”, the Specialist says.

  • The little girl is crying, standing at eye level with Carol, and Carol can’t help feeling helpless.

  • It pains Carol to see the little girl like this, says to her, “I like your rainbows very much. Don’t worry, you’re going to see your dad again very soon, and draw more stuff for him. Be strong.”

  • The girl stops balling her eyes out, tears still covering most of her face, but says, “Ok.”

  • The Specialist laughs, says, “No matter! If we can’t learn Mar-Vell’s secrets, No One Shall!”.

  • As he is about to pull the trigger, the Specialist hears someone move in the debris, it’s Nick.

  • Nick Fury, still alive, head is a mess, but his trench coat protected most of him from the blast.

  • Nick raises his head, sees the Specialist just about to shoot Carol, executioner style.

  • Nick Fury reaches for the closest gun, has trouble, one of his legs is pinned by the debris.

  • Nick finally reaches one, aims it at the Specialist, Shoots, but the gun is jammed.

  • The Specialist smiles at Nick, pulls the trigger, sending Carol’s lifeless body to the ground.

  • As Carol’s body drops, the little girl screams so loud, their ear drums are about to explode.

  • Jess and some agents stop running and try to make out where that scream came from.

  • Specialist sees agents approaching, picks up the girl as a shield, and runs the other way.

 

  • We see Carol lying on the ground, motionless, her whole life plays back on fast forward.

  • Her savior, Mar-Vell saying, "Do the right thing!" Imparting a sense of Morality.

  • Her father, saying "Protect her!" Imparting a sense of Purpose.

  • Her friend, Jose saying, "You can do this!" Imparting a sense of Perseverance.

  • The loud ringing starts to fade away, replaced with the crying of a little girl, as Carol recoups.

  • As the Specialist manhandles the little girl, the little girl Bites his hand very hard, he yells.

  • The Specialist throws her down, checks his hand, and proceeds to point the gun at her.

  • Carol, barely able to see now, just knows this little girl is about to die, because of her.

  • Carol staggers onto her feet, yells “Nooo!!”, which surprises the Specialist, pauses, grins.

  • Even though the Specialist can’t kill Carol, he can make her lose control by taking that girls life in front of her, making Carol explode, who people view as a monster, partly his mission too.

  • As he is pulling the trigger, Carol pushes a cart in front of her with all her might at him.

  • Carol is more than 15 feet away from him, and just wishes with all that she can to send that cart hurdling at the Specialist, before the blinking light turns back on again.

  • Then, in slow motion, as the blinking light turns off, Carol sees outlines of items in front of her, in pitch black, with her eyes glowing with violet light ever so slightly now.

  • In slow motion still, Carol’s hands shoot a beam of light, as her hands part ways with the cart, hurdling the cart at great speed at the Specialist, as the light slowly turns back on.

  • The Specialist gets a shot off, but is instantly sent flying through the flimsy walls, a few rooms.

  • Carol rushes to the little girl, to see how bad the bullet wound might be from getting shot.

  • It looks like the bullet didn’t hurt the little girl, just grazed her tan left arm. Carol is relieved.

  • The little girl isn’t crying now, stands, and proceeds to give Carol a hug, who is kneeling.

  • Nick Fury shows up, head wound, the only part of him his trench coat didn’t protect.

  • “It’s not just a fashion accessory” Nick says, as he is trying to explain why he’s still alive.

  • “Daayum!” Nick comments as he looks at the many holes in the wall, “Did.. You do that?”

  • Nick peers through the whole and sees the Specialists body better, spread out on the floor.

  • The little girl joyously responds for Carol, “She’s very strong, just like Captain America!”

  • Carol is amazed too, only now is it starting to sink in for her, what actually transpired.

  • After a while, Nick Fury starts to make sense of all that's happened, realizes these Scrull’s have been trying to undermine our Heroes this whole time.

  • Going so far as getting Zemo to go on a suicide mission, to belittle our symbols of hope, including Captain America, who is no longer around, which most people are depressed by.

  • Nick Fury even tasked Natasha to quell the hostility between Avengers, but that failed.

  • They are trying to turn Carol into a monster in the public eye, by making her unstable.

  • Nick Fury thinks that he needs to fight fire with fire, and if the Scrull’s want to make her Infamous, he will just have to make Carol Famous, just like Cap. was, adored by most!

  • As Nick turns to see how many rooms the Specialists body went through, the body is gone.

  • The little girl screeches so loud it sends a bone rattling sensation through Carol’s body.

  • As Nick turns his head to the side, he sees the Specialist already lunging at him, with a lead pipe swung at his head, and Nick tries to raise his gun from below, but he’s too late.

  • Carol has a rush of adrenalin, fight or flight kicks in, body checks the Specialist into the ceiling.

  • Nick dodges the lead pipe, draws his weapon, points it at the Specialist, on the floor now.

  • “Daayum! You were FAST!”, Nick says, surprised, wondering, “What Else Can You Do?!”

  • Carol can’t explain what happened, after a sec. says, “How.. did I do that?!”, looks surprised.

  • Carol leads the little girl away from this scene, not wanting her to have to look at it any longer.

  • Nick is on the phone with Jess, wondering where she is, and if she can come help him now.

  • Specialist is still conscious, slowly reaches for his gun on his leg, and points it an Nick.

  • Specialist gets shot by Jess, her arm in a sling still, before he can get a shot off, at Nick.

  • Nick is startled, relieved, a little pissed, says, “We could have learned allot from him, Alive!”

  • Jess responds, “No you wouldn’t! I’ve tried questioning a few of my attackers! Nothing!”

  • Nick asks, “Nothing?! Even with your, other talents?” Jess glares at Nick. Nick drops it.

 

  • A bit later, Carol goes to see the little girl, who is now with her father, drawing something.

  • Carol looks at the chart for her Father's name, and approaches him as he is lying there.

  • “You should be proud of your daughter Mr. Khan. She was so Brave!”, Carol tells him.

  • The little girl gets up and hands Carol the drawing she made. “For Me?”, Carol asks.

  • Carol looks at the drawing, two rainbows, a sun shining, right in the middle of them both.

  • “I can never thank you enough!”, Mr. Khan says to Carol. Later, Nick Fury is calling to Carol.

  • The little girl hugs Carol so tight and says “I Love You!”, and doesn’t want to let her go yet.

  • Father tells his daughter, “Let the nice lady go Kamala, other people need her too!”

  • As Carol leaves, Kamala waves at her, and she waves back, feeling better now.

  • Carol starts to wonder, asks Nick sheepishly, “Are we going to cover this incident up?”

  • Nick Fury responds, “Nope! We’re going to send a message to these Scrull’s they Failed!”

  • Carol says, “But won’t that upset them, making them come out in droves, out of hiding?”

  • “Yes! And that’s what I need to happen! We don’t know How Many of them there are!”

  • Nick responds, “And they really want you by the looks of it! This is just the beginning!”

  • Carol’s not liking what Nick is saying, because she knows what he’s saying, might be true!

  • Nick concludes, “They badly want this Forbidden DNA Manipulation, and You got it!”

  • “There’s a bunch of misfits I know that can help you.”, Nick Fury says, with a wide grin.

  • “How about it? You In?”, Nick asks Carol, who has an unsure look on her at the moment.

  • Nick Fury can tell Carol really wants to even the score with this alien threat, just waits.

  • “Ah Hell! Sure! You seem to be the only one who knows what’s going on, in this mess!”, Carol concludes, as her smirk disappears, to be replaced by a wince, then forces out a smile.

  • Nick observes, “You have the same Hand to Hand combat ability, as well as the strength it would seem that Cap. has.”, then ponders a bit, “I wonder what we should call you?!”

  • Then a light bulb turns on for Nick, “Maybe you can take up Cap’s mantle, use his name!?”

  • “No.. I couldn’t do that.. it belonged to him!”, Carol says. Looks troubled by the suggestion.

  • “The people want, No.. Need Another Cap!”, Nick prattles on, trying to make his case.

  • Carol thinks about it, all that’s happened and just blurts it out, “maybe Captain Mar-Vell?!”

  • Nick Fury slyly says, “I get it! You want to rub it in their faces, that Mar-Vell gave You those abilities that they covet, by taking his name! Draw them in closer, who recognize his name?”

  • “No.”, Carol says, “He trusted in me, gave his life, for me, and this is my way of acknowledging that. It’s to Honor him, not to spite those that wanted his knowledge.”, looks agitated.

  • “I guess you’re not gonna change your mind then!”, Nick Fury says, with a small grin.

  • “Alright.”, Nick gives in, and asks, “What about your look? Stars and Stripes work for you?”

  • Carol could care less what she looks like, as most of her adult life is spent now in a flight suit.

  • Carol recalls seeing something with a Star and lines on that someone gave her recently.

  • Carol picks through her pockets and finds it, says, “Yes! Just like this!”, shows Nick the drawing that Kamala made for her, the shining star in the middle, with stripes on the sides.

 

  • Carol can’t wait to leave the hospital, about to walk out the front doors, when Rose appears.

  • Looks like she’s waiting for her click, most likely. Rose stands up as Carol gets near her.

  • Rose says, “Here!”, as she hands the winning medal to Carol, wants to say more, but can’t.

  • Nick Fury goes to the front desk, on the phone, observes Carol and Rose from a reflection.

  • Rose says, “You won!”, hesitates, then says, “I was right behind you! I saw your jets flame flicker in and out!”, as she’s having a hard time admitting defeat to Carol, but she does!

  • Carol says, “Thanks Rose!”, pauses, asks, “Does this mean you’re going to withdraw now?!”

  • A horn honks, mostly guys in the car, Rose starts walking out the front door, turns to Carol, smiles and says, “Not A Chance!”, then runs out and jumps in the back, as they drive away.

  • Carol laughs to herself, thinking, if she was in her shoes, she’d probably do the same thing.

  • Nick is beside Carol, says, “Not everyone is All bad! You just have to give them a chance!”

  • Their conversation is interrupted, screeching truck tires can be heard out front, as it rear ends a car in front of it, sending it flipping in the air, landing on its front.

  • There’s an older gentleman that’s about to get crushed by the flipped car, as one end of it is being held by a small piece of metal, and it’s about to give way, and kill the older man.

  • Carol sees this and thinks she can pull him out before the car comes smashing down.

  • As Carol is just about to reach for the older man, the metal gives way and falls on them.

  • Carol thrusts her hands against the falling car, which is at an angle now, and with all her might is not only holding it from falling, but pushing it slowly away with all her strength.

  • The older gentleman says, “Oh, where are my glasses?!”, as he gets onto his feet.

  • The older gentleman looks like Stan Lee. And as he gets out of the cars way, he stumbles past Carol and says, “Thanks Cap! Shure is nice to have you back!”, and goes on his way.

  • As Carol is about the let go of the car, she realizes some kids had their phones out, taping.

  • She sets the car down, with a swarm of kids around her now, people clapping in the back.

  • As the kids get done asking ten thousand questions, one question seems to repeat.

  • “Hey Lady, what do they call you?”, seems to resound in chorus with the kids louder now.

  • Carol stops a second and looks at Nick, and he is wearing a smile, which makes her smile.

  • “Tell everyone they have a new Captain, Captain Mar-Vell!”, Carol says resoundingly.

  • Next day, all of social media, and then the news, has the same clip playing on repeat.

  • Only problem is, the kids got the name slightly wrong, in the clips it says “Cap. Marvel”.

  • Blogs and other commentators are questioning the name Marvel, but most Love it!

  • Nick Fury says he likes it too, but Carol doesn’t know if she’s ok with this at 1st, as everyone is mispronouncing Mar-Vell’s name, but warms up to it when she sees a little girl on TV being interviewed say, “I Love You Captain Marvel.” with a cute smile. It’s Kamala.

  • Nick Fury doesn’t have to say anything after he sees Carol look overjoyed by that girl.

  • As Nick pulls into a driveway, he says, “Were Here!” and steps out, and is looking up.

  • Carol wonders what’s up, steps out, looks up, and sees a big ‘A’ on a building. False End!

 

Cinematic True ending

 

Weeks later. Some strong menace is wrecking the power plant. As the big bad is about to lay down the final blow and destroy the main transformer, someone blocks the big bad. It's someone in a costume, but the camera only shows parts: arm, boot, belt, etc.. 'till the last full frontal shot, and we see it's Captain Marvel, in her suit, sporting a pixie haircut. After trading a few blows, both launch their final attack. Epic music starts! As they are about to trade the final blow, a photographer takes a still shot, freezing the moment in time, which gets added to a scrapbook, full of newspaper clippings. Newspaper article reads, "Mighty Captain: 1, Villain: 0". As the movie ends, the scrapbook is closed by a little girl's hand. We see the cover now of the scrapbook, and it's in Kamala's room. Kamala is summoned by her friends, runs out the room. Camera pans to the window and is looking outside, as Kamala walks down the road with her friends. Epic music ends. The End!

 

 

 


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