The Wrong Choice

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
I promise I didn't mean to. I didn't know it would happen like this. I made a mistake. If I could, I would go back and change it. Unforutnately, reality doesn't work like that.

This is a sample to decide if I want to continue writing. Constructive criticism is appreciated.

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Dear Reader

Submitted: May 13, 2017

I'm posting the prologue and first chapter of a story that I'm considering writing (yes to some extent this is a cry for audience attention). Tell me what you like and what you think I could do better. I'm open to friendly suggestions as long as you don't comment too viciously.

Disclaimer: the people, places and enterprizes in this novel are the work of my imagination and regardless of any perceived similarities are fiction.

Thank you for reading and see you in the comments
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Submitted: May 13, 2017

Enjoy and comment. No flames, but constructive criticism is encouraged. Please explain why you dislike something. It is far more useful.

Thank you,
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