Time Paradox

Time Paradox

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Genre: Romance

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Genre: Romance

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A 26 year old man named Dan Marses were a very unfortunate man, losing his family in early age and live by himself with regrets in life. He finally met a girl, his new co-employee, and made a promise to meet up in a specific date but before that date comes, unexpectedly his life will be change because of an incident happen to him. Thus, a self-proclaim God appears and give him a chance to change his regrets in his youth days or will he stayed and do the promise?
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A 26 year old man named Dan Marses were a very unfortunate man, losing his family in early age and live by himself with regrets in life. He finally met a girl, his new co-employee, and made a promise to meet up in a specific date but before that date comes, unexpectedly his life will be change because of an incident happen to him. Thus, a self-proclaim God appears and give him a chance to change his regrets in his youth days or will he stayed and do the promise?

Prolog (v.1) - Life changing

Chapter Content - ver.1

Submitted: May 23, 2017

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“If I only would change myself to another person or change my whole past, this unfair life will not be like this. If I really would reset everything.” These words always float to his thoughts, a very unfortunate life and world. A boy named, Dan Marses, 26 years old, no girlfriend since birth, no job, no parents and siblings, no permanent home, no friends, and forgotten by his family-relatives for being a failure. He doesn’t want to give up on his life, just not yet. A hard-working man, every work that is available he’s trying to rebuild his life. Despite of being unfortunate in life, he still a good man and very respectful person but no one knows, because he is alone. He blames one thing, God; every thought, every time he thinking about the past, it his fault, his family died in an incident 9 years ago, in the same date he’s confessing to an only one friend that he had but stolen by someone in the same date. His youth in high school life was a tragedy, he’s strong yet too weak.

One day to his work, he meets a new employee working together in a convenience store, under his surveillance, a girl named, Rina Kasou, 18 years old, a high school girl. The two seem working well, knowing each other but about personal information he was a bit evasive and changing the topic or seeking a reason to leave the conversation.

The two were growing steady, he’s opening some topic that relate to his life, seeking for advice or only want to talk to. The promise he told to her that they definitely going to watch the meteor shower in the second of week of the month; The promise that they will go out to some places, their favorite places.

After they part each other, they remind themselves about the two promises to each other. He’s taking the road way to his apartment when suddenly a little girl, walking to the street, alone. It reminds of him when he was in elementary school, walking home alone by himself. He approaches the kid, advising her to be careful and off to the main road in her walk.  When he got home, he was happy, a new friend comes, but a bit of younger than him. He never felt happiness since the day he will concede his feelings to a girl 9 years ago but reminding him of that girl also reminding his family, together with his mother, father, and sister. The regret of choosing a girl with his family was still on his mind. That date, his family decided to go to their province because his grandmother’s funeral, he rather choose the date to confess to the girl he loves. It’s not worth it, the girl was stolen, your family died, and what he blames the God for he’s tragedy, he lay down to his bed crying.

A very odd morning for him, he wakes up before his alarm clock. The battery died, the clock was not ticking, it was very odd because he changes it only last week. He tried to poking and changing the position of the batteries but not working, he decided to buy a new one after home. In exactly 3:59am the clock stopped, the time it ended was very weird and only one tick of a second to become 4:00am.

He always walks to the road leading to his work, he is motivated to see he’s co-worker. He was half way to his work place when he sees again the little girl that he saw last night in the exact position he seen her. He approaches her and asking “Hey, do you remember me? I’m the guy last night who show you. Why are you here again? Didn’t I tell you that the main road is dangerous?” The little girl smile and tells him “Yes, I remember you, I always does.” Then she adds another sentence with “Do you always blame me, didn’t you?” and then he’s confused and didn’t know what the girl’s trying to tell to him. “…Isn’t a bit of lonely, for you to have this life.” Then she adds again with “…Do you want to change the past and regrets of your life.” He seems shock and loss of words on what he heard. “Who are you? What did you know about me?” the girl adds with “Everything. Every pain and suffering of yours, all of your regret and bad choices.” He’s confused about what the conversation and the girl seems creep him up. As he loss in his deep thought, he didn’t realize that a big truck is heading to his way, the only thing that he does is he save the girl. A staggering flash of light rounded his sight, he’s thinking if he’s dying or going to heaven. “…I haven’t fulfilled my promise; this life is awful. I’m the worst.” He adds with “…If I only have a chance to change everything, If I only have but it’s too late for now.” A voice, a voice was telling him to “…live, it’s not your time, but it will be different, you’ll going back. Good luck, will the beat of choice may you pick. I’m giving you chance, Goodbye now.” He telling the voice to wait, and he didn’t understand. A flash went dark and a voice again, a little girl voice, telling him to wake up. “Hey Bro! You’ll be late! Wake up!!” he’s surprised and he sees his little sister again.


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