Unbreakable Premonition

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Chapter 8 (v.1) - Finally Last Period (8)

Submitted: December 11, 2017

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We continue walking and she has to stop by her locker along the way.  At her locker we are met by her friends Traci and Melissa again.  They are both very attractive and know it too but are total bitches, like Ariya.  Traci has long dirty blonde hair with hazel eyes and a light golden tan.  Melissa has long dark brown hair with the ends dyed blue and light brown eyes with a dark tan.  Melissa walks up hugging Ariya asking,

"Hey chika, how are you holding up?"

Traci looks to me with disgust saying,

"I can't believe you got bonded with him, he is so gross."

I look to her with apathy as I scratch my forehead with my middle finger flipping her off.  Melissa adds,

"He even smells like the trash he cleans up.  It's disgusting."

I clench my teeth with a growl looking away then secretly smell the top of my shirt to see if I actually stink.  I seem to smell fine.  Ariya says,

"It's only temporary.  When a year is up we can break the bond."

I grumble to myself looking further down the hallway,

"Thank god"

She hears me and gives me an unamused look.  Then I notice a couple of my good friends walking up named Jason and David.  When they get to me they bow to me like I am royalty and both loudly say,

"It's Lord Fabien!"

They stand and I push David as he almost falls over laughing.  I say,

"You two are idiots"

He says,

"So you are part of the elite crowd now?  You haven't forgot us peasants yet have you?"

Traci scoffs,

"As if he would ever be one of us."

Jason grins to her,

"Damn, the perks of being a guardian sure are sexy"

I laugh and Traci gives him a disgusted look saying,


David looks to them all grunting and says,

"Man what I would give to be bonded with one of them."  He looks to Ariya "Except her, we hear she is covered in burns underneath all those clothes"

Melissa steps towards him threatening to hit him as he runs behind me laughing.  Ariya slams her locker closed turning to look at him,

"Maybe I am, thanks for making fun of me jerk."  She looks to me as I curiously look her over wondering if what she says is true.  She says,"Nice friends you have, come on."

We end up making it to the training yard and it is huge almost the size of two football fields side by side.  There are all sorts of training equipment, a running track, fighting dummies, workout equipment, and even an obstacle course.

When we walk up I notice there are already a lot of people waiting for the class to begin.  The two trainers standing next to Donovan and Samantha talking are Dominicus and his twin sister Starr.  They are very respected and well known for winning many different tournaments together.  They are also the first twin brother and sister bonded group.  Donovan and Samantha are their teacher's aides helping with the training.

When the class begins we are all standing around listening to them explain what they will be teaching us .  As we are listening two guys make their way over to us and I recognize them as Wayne and his bonded guardian Tyson.  Wayne is about 5'10" with short dirty blond hair and dark green eyes.  He is one of the most popular guys in school, he is very rich, and his family are very powerful political figures.  All the serfs know him as a total player. 

His guardian Tyson is a very large black guy standing about 6'8 and built like a wall of muscle.  His head is completely shaven bald and he always looks like he is pissed off.

I can already feel many different emotions coming from Ariya as they walk over.  I can feel she has feelings of fear, anger, and remorse all over flowing from her.  Wayne walks up in front of me saying,

"So you are the fabled savant that got bonded with my precious Ariya."

I glance to her seeing she can't even look at him with her head down looking at the ground.  Now I have never had a problem with him but for some reason now I am feeling irritated by his presence.  I ask,

"What do you want Wayne?"

"I just wanted to meet you and -" He reaches over placing his hand on her shoulder causing her to flinch closing her eyes.  She seems genuinely scared of his presence "I wanted to say hi to Ariya here."

I pull her to me putting my arm around her as her body tenses even more.  I say,

"Well you did, now we are trying to listen to the teachers so go away"

He smirks to me,

"Alright Mr. Serious."

He looks to Ariya again reaching out to touch her again saying,

"I have missed y-"

I slap his hand away from her and Tyson steps forward getting in my face.  Ariya spins around behind me as I stare up to him not intimidated by him at all.  Dominicus shouts,

"Do we have a problem here boys?"

Wayne turns giving him his arrogant grin patting Tyson's back saying,

"We were just having a chat with the help"

Some of the class chuckles and Starr says,

"That's enough Wayne.  You two move away from Fabien."

Tyson and Wayne walk off and I turn looking to Ariya,

"Are you okay?"

She wipes her eyes trying to mask she teared up a bit saying,

"I am fine"

The trainers go back to explaining the class.  They are going to teach us various fighting techniques.  We will be taught to fight alone, in conjunction with our bonded partner, and as a larger team.  They will teach us how to use our magic without any real concentration. 

But before the class actually begins they want us all to introduce ourselves to the class as our bonded teams.  Along with our names they want the bonded noble to tell the class what sphere of magic they are attuned too.  They will explain how each sphere of magic to everyone just in case they don't know what they represent.

We all line up in our groups, there are 24 people in the class so there are 12 teams.  The first group to walk up is a short plump guy named Ronald Rodriguez.  He isn't very athletic but he is known as one of the smartest people in the school.  He walks up with his guardian Jesse.  Jesse is about 6'1 with long dark brown hair he usually keeps tied back.  He has a slim athletic build.

They both introduce themselves and Ronald tells the class his sphere is enchantment.  Samantha steps forward to explain the enchantment sphere to the class.  She says,

"As you all may know my sphere is also enchantment.  Some people don't believe it can be as useful in combat as the others.  But-"  Her and Donovan both glance to each other with a smile "We have won 3 championships together so it's not bad.  Enchantment allows me to alter people's emotions and state of mind.  This allows me to make the enemy an ally or make an ally an enemy.  Also I could force people to do my bidding if I wish, but that is pretty much looked down upon. "

She finishes her explanation and steps back as everyone claps.  Ronald gets a big smile on his face as they go back to sit down.  A couple more groups go by one is illusion.  Illusionists can create figments, false images, and phantasms to vex and confuse their enemies.  The other was conjuration.  Conjurers can summon creatures to aid them in battle they also have the ability to teleport themselves or others to various locations they have seen.

Next up is Elizabeth Moore and her bonded guardian Melissa, Ariya's friend.  Elizabeth is gorgeous.  She has long flowing raven black hair and silver eyes.  She has a voluptuous body and the tight clothes she likes to wear shows it off perfectly.  They introduce themselves and Elizabeth says her sphere is necromancy the death aspect.  Dominicus steps forward this time to explain the details on her sphere.  He says,

"Necromancers are the masters of life and death.  Life necromancers are the healers and medics on the battle field.  They can heal wounds, cure all sorts of ailments, even sometimes revive the dead.  The death side like Mrs. Moore here are the scary ones.  They can drain the life force of others to heal themselves, they can inspire dread and fear in their enemies, raise the dead into zombies or skeletons to fight along side of them, or even bestow deadly curses on their victims."

Everyone claps at theirs and Ariya and a few others cheer for them. A couple more teams go by one is a life necromancer and the other is linked to a sphere called transmutation.  Starr explains this one saying,

"Transmuter's are the shape shifters.  They can alter theirs and other peoples forms to look like pretty much anything.  They can even make a person stronger, faster, or even fly with wings."

Next they call to the stand is Wayne and Tyson.  The cheering for them is louder than the others.  Again I can feel the same mixed emotions coming from Ariya.  I lean over and whisper,

"Is he your ex or something?"

She ends up thinking (Unfortunately) but says to me,

"It is none of your business."


Wayne and Tyson get to the stand.  Wayne bows to everyone then they introduce themselves.  Wayne gets silent for a bit smiling to everyone trying to be dramatic then leans forward to the microphone and says,


The cheers roar out through the crowd as he raises his hands like he won something.  Starr steps forward again shaking his hand smiling.  She says,

"Well pretty much everyone here knows what evocation is so I wont have to go into great detail.  Evocation is the ultimate combat sphere.  The evoker can control the elements to create devastating attacks.  They can shoot lightning from their fingers or rain down fire from the sky.  Evocation is what most battle field nobles wish they were attuned too."

People cheer some more as he goes to sit back down.  His friends bow to him shouting "We're not worthy, we're not worthy!". As he walks by to his seat he looks to Ariya and winks. 

This just enrages her further as she stands storming off as Melissa quickly follows after her.  I can feel her emotions flooding over me once again.  She is full of so much hate and anger towards him I wonder what he did to piss her off so bad.  Maybe she was just one of his many conquests with the females at this school.

A few more people end up going by and Ariya makes her way back with Melissa.  They end up calling us up to the podium.  Her friends cheer really loud while everyone else claps for us.  As we walk up there I can feel her nervousness rising along with mine.  I really hate being in front of crowds.  She introduces herself first then I introduce myself.  Again I hear the snide comments and whispers about me so I finish my introduction saying,

"I am also what you would call a savant; a guardian that can also use magic.  There hasn't been one like me in over a thousand years."

Everyone gets quiet and all our instructors glance to each other with a nod.  Then Ariya steps forward saying her sphere is Divination.  Donovan decides to explain this one to the class.  He says,

"Divination is a complicated one, because it is more of a support behind the scenes sphere.  Not many diviners enter into combat."  The class chuckles again and I can feel Ariya becoming ashamed again.  Donovan continues by saying,"But diviners are actually the most valuable and most rare out of all the nobles, everyone wants one on their side.  A diviner can tell you the outcome of events, can see things before they can actually happen, they are the ultimate trackers, can tell if people are lying, and can even see through illusions."

Ariya smiles and begins feeling a bit more prideful about herself.  Then one of Wayne's friends raises his hand.  Donovan points to him and the guy says,

"If she doesn't get in combat then why is she in this class?  Is she going to tell us the outcome of our training?"

People laugh and I look at him saying,

"If you want she can tell you the outcome of me beating your ass if you keep talking shit."

People laugh and ooh at that comment, even Wayne claps laughing as well.  Donovan silences everyone and places his hand on my shoulder saying,

"Calm down Fabien.  Everyone no matter what sphere they are goes through combat training, because you never know when you will need it."

We finish out all the introductions just in time for class to be over.  We begin walking off again and I am following behind Ariya.  Wayne walks up to her stopping her and she glances to me with a worried look.  I just keep walking by saying,

"It's none of my business remember."

(Fabien please.)

Her fear rises even more seeing me continuing to walk off.  I get maybe a few steps away then Tyson says,

"Yeah that is right, keep walking boy."

That makes me stop and I clench my teeth.  My ego makes me turn around walking back as I say,

"You know what, I forgot Daniel wanted to talk to us both about something."

I hold out my hand to her and Tyson blocks my path placing his hand on my chest.  I glance to his hand then glare up to him clenching my fist ready to hit him.  I say,

"Take your hand off me."

Wayne laughs patting Tyson's back saying,

"It's fine we will talk later.  Come on Tyson."

They begin walking off while Tyson and I just glare at each other.  Ariya walks in front of me looking at me and says,

"Thank you for that."

I turn walking off again saying,

"I didn't do it for you.  I just really want to hit that guy."

That was the last of the classes for the day so I decide to head back to my room.  When I get there my room door is open and all of my stuff is gone.  Thinking this has to be some sort of prank I head next door to David's room and bang on the door.  A female serf opens the door and I am assailed my the smell of pot.  She smiles,

"Hey Fabien."

I step in looking around saying,

"Okay where is all my shit."

David walks up at this time,


"All my stuff from my room, where is it?"

"Ohh yeah, we had to move it to your new room."

"What new room?"

"You're staying in the Pegasus dorm since you are a guardian now."

Jason shouts from the couch along with another serf sitting next to him,

"All hail lord Fabien!"

I rub my face in frustration,

"Damn it, I didn't want to change rooms."

I turn to leave and the female stops me grabbing my hand,

"You should stay Fabien, it's more fun when you are here."

I hesitate really thinking about staying.  After this day it would be great to relax with all of them.  I sigh shaking my head,

"Sorry, I really need to see what's going on."

As I am leaving Jason shouts again,

"Don't forget us when you are famous!"

I walk all the way over to the Pegasus dorm.  It's been a while since I have been allowed over here to clean these rooms.  Apparently some of these rich kids don't know how to clean their own rooms. As I enter I am stopped by a huge 8 foot steel golem.  These defence golems are immune to all forms of magic and can withstand massive amounts of damage.  They are mostly used in wars against other nobles and their guardians.  A red light from its eyes begins to scan me and it says in a metallic voice,

"Fabien... Classification Guardian.... Room number 28... Access granted"

It holds out its hand and a key appears in it.  I take the key and it steps aside letting me through the door behind it.  It doesn't take me long to find my room down one of the hallways.  As I get close I see Andrew and one of his friends bullying a younger student in front of my door.  He is pinned against the door with Andrew leaned over him.

I just ignore whats going on and walk up to the door to begin unlocking it.  Andrew grabs my shoulder trying to pull me away making me turn towards him.  But since I got bonded I am a lot stronger and didn't budge at all.  Andrew says,

"Fabien this place isn't for your kind, you should leave."

I finish opening the door then turn stepping up to him looking him in the eyes.  The young kid runs in the room behind me as I stare at Andrew unafraid saying,

"Why don't you try and make me leave?"

He stares back at me a second then looks past me into the room saying to the kid that ran in.

"We will finish our conversation later Mikey."

Andrew motions for his friend to follow him and they walk off.  I head inside looking for this kid that ran in my room.  When I get inside the dorm room is huge its about the size of a 3 bedroom apartment.  There is a kitchen, living room, study, a rather large restroom, and 3 bed rooms. 

As I look around the little guy walks out of one of the rooms with a tall skinny black guy wearing glasses.  The kid points to me smiling and says,

"That's him, he stood up to Andrew and made him run away."

I smirk saying,

"He didn't really run."

The black guy walks over holding out his hand saying with a deep voice,

"Are you Fabien?  I am Markus."

The short guy says,

"I am Mikey"

I shake his hand looking around again,

"Yeah, so I guess you two are my roommates?"

Mikey excitedly says,

"Yep, it's awesome right?"

Markus crosses his arms and looks to me with question asking,

"Aren't you the guy who cleans the restrooms?  Why are you staying here?"

"Well I accidently got bonded with a noble here.  So they decided to make me a student."

"How do you accidently get bonded?"

"I have no idea, but it happened."

Mikey asks,

"Who did you get bonded with?  Do we know them?"

"I'm sure you do.  I got bonded with the head master's little sister Ariya."

"Wow really?  She is so hot!"

"Yeah and a pain in my ass."

Markus says,

"I hear she gained a lot of weight that's why she wears baggy clothes now."

Mikey say,

"I heard she got pregnant and is trying to hide it."

Markus laughs changing the subject and says to me,

"She must really hate being bonded to you knowing you are a serf."

"Oh yeah and she lets me know every chance she gets."

We talk and sit for a bit then they show me to my room.  When I walk in I notice everything has already been unpacked.  I change out of my clothes, take a shower, then fall asleep.

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