If only she knew

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
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This is just a short story I came up with while playing on my phone. ( Not scary )

Submitted: May 28, 2017

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Submitted: May 28, 2017

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she had no idea... she didn't know the risk she was accepting as she attempted a bottom turn..a move so simple you would never think it would lead to this....hot by a wave she feels her leg rope break ....gasping for the air she needs to live as she is pushed under. She didn't see the risk... she was gliding on the ocean when it happend..she knew she was not use to a wave so big.. but as  she attempted her bottom turn a move she has down so many times it was her second nature ..but this time she sliped... and the wave hit her and pushed her in the water.... Struggling to swim back up she throws her arms up..putting  in all her strenghth just to be pushed back down wave after wave..she has one breath left....as she looses her strenth and gets pushed down by a wave she feels the soft sand float around her as she hits the bottom...  she feels her final breath leave her....as she looks up threw the waves...feeling the sun break threw and rest on her cheek..she know this will be the last time...the last time she feels the warmth that protects her from the cold around her...her eyes start to close..and the warmth leaves her as she lies there in the cold waiting for the darkness to win...she sees a spot of color in the dark ..a color so familiar to her....the color red...she closes her eyes..and let's  the darkness take over because she can no longer fight...for the warmth she loves so much.


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