take me away

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic
For the full effect of the story I suggest reading out loud and pausing for like 2sec when you see ....

I also have bad spelling so please don't judge

Submitted: May 29, 2017

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He stood there...glancing over the crowd as they stare back...he could feel there eys boring into him judging his every move...he wanted to cry...to hide himself in his arms and to not see the world around him and the people critising him. They are the ones who decide if he is good or not if he should be aloud to play again...no....he refuses to let a group of people tell him if he can play..if he should be aloud to continue  doing somthing that he loves and be refuses to give in...to hide..again ... he needs to face this...to no longer be afraid...he looks up....faces the crowd..they stare back waiting for somthing amazing to happen...he stares at them head on...meeting there eyes...he holds his gutar higher placing it under his arm... he plays his first chord..the crowd sturs...he plays his next chord and starts singing ..the crowd cheers...evrey were he looks while performing people are cheering him on...he feels his fear leave...and like that....his music take him aways him away


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