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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Science Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic

{Note: I wrote this story quite some time ago, and might finish it. It can be quite cringy, a few grammar issues but I just wanted to hear people's opinion on it, so please leave a comment if you
have critiques or queries}

A story about the main character Carter Jones, hired to return to a second tour from the NSEI corporation after having survived the Galactic Cruise; The Nebulae. This story is set on a newly
discovered planet, as our wide cast of characters explore the wonders and dangers of new life and discover what really happened to the Nebulae.

Table of Contents


Submitted: June 01, 2017

A documentary-esque intro to the planet. A lot of information is thrown at you but most of it is not completely necessary Read Chapter

Chapter 1: Discovery

Submitted: June 01, 2017

Some of our main characters are introduced here Read Chapter

Chapter 2: A Bad Start

Submitted: June 02, 2017

This chapter is where it starts to pick up a bit Read Chapter

Chapter 3: New Ground

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 3: New Ground Everyone ran outside, as they scrambled for order. "What happened?" an officer looked at Lieutenant Jones. "Look,... Read Chapter

Chapter 4: Exploration

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 4: Exploration The sun rose over the endless ocean as it shone a bright light into the tent. Seph immediately ran out of her te... Read Chapter

Chapter 5: Space Station

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Set on the Kephri space station, where they have just lost contact with the exploration ship Read Chapter

Chapter 6: Repairs

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 6: Repairs At the spaceship it was busy, welding the outside of the ship piece by piece. They had to go out in groups and colle... Read Chapter

Chapter 7: Larvae

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 7: Larvae They reached their base camp, mostly intact; except for the food left on the table. Owen saw a small path of crumbs, ... Read Chapter

Chapter 8: Squad

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 8: Squad All four of them waited patiently at the office of Accalan, as they had been for a few minutes. "Why do you think we'r... Read Chapter

Chapter 9: Interlude

Submitted: June 02, 2017

These interludes are set in the past, meant to build character and show their background and history without having it be needlessly thrown in the rest of the chapters.
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Chapter 10

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 10: The music played on in the background, as they relaxed a small warmth generator, fire would be too dangerous in a high oxyg... Read Chapter

Chapter 11

Submitted: June 02, 2017

Chapter 11: "Who do you think the pilot is?" Scarlett said to Thalia, trying to make small talk. "What's it matter to you?" Scarlett ba... Read Chapter

Chapter 12: Interlude

Submitted: June 18, 2017

Interlude: Air blasted from each side, desperately trying to escape from the locked doors. Sound was blocked out of his ears, and all h... Read Chapter

Chapter 13

Submitted: April 02, 2018

Chapter 13: "We're moving out" Owen ate his breakfast at the small set up table, firmly planted in the moist ground. Another grayish ... Read Chapter

Chapter 14

Submitted: April 02, 2018

Chapter 14: The ants had disappeared, Owen looked away. Seph sat in the second second seat behind them, working on her laptop. Trying... Read Chapter

Chapter 15

Submitted: April 02, 2018

Chapter 15: The ship shuddered like it was frozen in space. They were leaving the safety of the exosphere, and entering the mesospher... Read Chapter