At times like this I'd love to stay,
In your bed is where I'll lay.
Cuddling throughout the night
Admiring you within my sight.
Although we barely hang, you see
You're someone very dear to me
This is how I truly feel
I appreciate that you buy me meals
You're so very sweet and kind
You're always on my freaken mind
I sometimes wish to take you out
Because it causes me to doubt
But times like now feel very nice
I love how you're so concise
Right now I feel so warm inside
I hope to be one you could confide [in]
I sometimes doubt about where I stand
And think about where we might land
It causes me to be depressed
and kinda always gets me stressed.
However, those bad times haven't come up as much
I'm becoming more confident as I see such
This is helping me realize a lot
How foolish I was, two years ago, on the dot.
It's very different going on dates with specifically you
But in a beautiful way, I hope you think so too.
Enough about me let's end it with you
You're so amazing in all that you do.
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I love the way you rhyme! Also, I love the sincerity and vulnerability of your words. This poem is universal enough to appeal to people's emotions, but at the same time it feels like it's very personal to you. I like that it sounds like a confessional, and I absolutely love the musicality of your lines! Great job!
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So Sweet!
And .... and.. yeahh.. this is amazing .. what more should I say ..this last stanza is so brilliant .. Loved your work !
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Thank you so much for your kind words! Thank you for appreciating my work! :)
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