The Flaws Of Beauty
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Poem by: ChristopherErick
Plain Jane Reflection vane. Countless hours drives her man insane . She sees beauty through ugly eyes. He sees her beauty as a godsend prize. Her hair is a mess, but she still looks her best. Annoyance admits to her it's home . She paralyzes his eyes, and she'll never be alone . Swearing, flailing her miraculous body. She is his rose. She strikes anger to those who oppose. She wears sweats, and listens to Nirvana. She isn't strange, but a clone of Madonna. She feels like silk . She soars his temperature higher. If he said he could have another; he would be marked as a liar. Adore the freckles and crooked teeth. Beneath the flaws beauty is deep. Hold the heart, it overcomes it all. A queen was chosen . For her he falls . In love so madly yet do deeply. With affection ever so sweetly . He would slay the world for her if need be . Bound to cherish her for life everlasting. He is hungry for her love. For his heart has been fasting.
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Comments
This sounds like it could be a great alternative/rock song. Great job on your word selection and I especially loved the Nirvana/Madonna rhyme. So clever!
It's very nice and you used the right words to rhyme,very perfect and clever
Melody1
Your rhymes are on point! This absolutely beautiful in all its essence. Very well done!
Thank you. I myself am not to crazy about the format. I should have separated it into lines. It's bunched together. But I am glad you liked it. I appreciate your comment. :)
Thank you. I myself am not to crazy about the format. I should have separated it into lines. It's bunched together. But I am glad you liked it. I appreciate your comment. :)
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