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Genre: Science Fiction |
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Booksie Classic
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Comment | 67 words
Sun, June 25th, 2017 11:03am
Section 4? Why don't you just put them all into one novel?
Is it deliberate for cliffhangers?
Also, get an editor. A really good editor, the grammar and punctuation is awful unless that is a deliberate style choice, a little like E.E. Cummings...but not a lot of people would like that kind of thing today. The paragraphs could also be broken up to help reading flow.
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