Happiness

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic



Submitted: July 04, 2017

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Ambesh Poetry

Awesome

Tue, July 4th, 2017 10:54am

Bert Broomberg

Nice poem again. Just keep in mind that words like coldness and stress are very imperfect rhymes, due to the difference in stress, which is caused by the number of syllables in the words, and the stress patterns within those words..

Tue, July 4th, 2017 2:22pm

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Sometime I don't get exact rhyming word, so I have to use nearby rhymes. Please try to extract the wisdom that is there in the poem. I am a free writer so I don't follow too much rules & regulations of poetry. Thanks for appreciating the poem.

Tue, July 4th, 2017 10:42pm

Silgorious

Nice poem!

Tue, July 4th, 2017 5:28pm

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Thank you so much !

Tue, July 4th, 2017 10:26pm

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